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29priya

@29priya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Confusing story...bt gr8 update...loved it...conti soon

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ns.1

@ns.1

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

wish you too a very happy new year😛congrats for the new story 😊 its really very interesting maaneet in an extra marital affair 😲😕😛but its different and very interesting too😉😛😃I am liking it already 😃eagerly waiting for more...continue soon😊

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

It is difficult for me to generally comment on the initial chapters of a story because a lot of characters generally are not developed yet.

You have woven the characters very nicely. I could visualize all of them. Pouty Angel to complaining Ali. 👏

Waiting for more.

Thanks for updating.

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Nice update
ali is just superb
what happened to meera

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

maan is married to meera and she is not well

but he doesnt seem very close to her

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

lovely part...

i loved the new entrant in the usual maans family... ali😆... his lagathaar talks with his dadaji... he fears even the kid angel ... phir MSK ke naam se kaaptha hoga😆

meera is ill??? is she sachi main uski wife??? i hope kuch twist ho...

simla main maan geet se milne jaa raha hain??

will be waiting for the next part

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Wow Awesome update!!!

Waiting for the next

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Ali to himself - Aagaya hitler...ek woh hitler tha jo sab ka jeena haram kiya...aur yeh MSK meri zindagi ka hitler...mera jeena mushkil kardeta hain...He looked up and started cursing his grandfather...who worked for khuranas...tu marr gaya aur mujhe yaha marne chodke chala gaya

OMG...🤣🤣...sach mein yaar first time feelings of MSK servants are shown in perfect words in this IF history...

very interesting update...

...Maan is married to Meera...Meera met with an accident...so she is not proper healthy...

one thing is confusing me--from the conversation between Daadi and Anu it seems Maan loves Meera and from the accident day he lost his smile...but here Maan's behavior with her suggest opposite... if Maan-Meera are married and she is suffering then why they are living in separate rooms...Maan should be with her to take care of her...if she can't go up to their original room then he can shift down...he should have checked Meera how is she but he didn't even asked daadi about her health...

he is going on trip but he can't inform her himself instead he told Daadi to inform her about his trip...this is really very weird...

waiting for next part...