THE LOCKET (16) MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 52

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

not done...not at all...do i like dev? or i wanna kill dev??


Dev? kyun?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

He is so dangerous for her health

But then so is she
Kya maan what was the need to tease your geet
See you had to suffer due to it
Serves him right
But not really he had enough
Thanx to dev he got his chance
Waise am with dev to make maan suffer a bit
But dev he didn't have it that easy either
Though not as hard as for you mate
Haila if she isn't around him he goes restless for sure
And those kisses
Damn man enoug for geet to forget herself
Awww all Pampering him but not the one he wants
Well he got her naa
So much so she let him do whatever
And listen to all his demands
Does he gotta strip tease before going to sleep
Enough to take her sleep
Cheers for pm


@underlined: ha ha..

adore your comments Chavvi.

Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



awww ithna pyaara sa cute sa update hain... i loved it

chaaloo maan is always a treat to read... and here too i loved how he teased our bambi with his talks to her daarjee😳

u have no idea how much i wished to read dev with maaneet... mujhe aur chahiye abhu keh dethi hoon... pls na...

bambi meri bambi... ur bambiness will make maan crazy... already he is... 😆

yuchy hashmi😆

maanneet moments... hayeee...🤢 next day taj plan kar raha hain maan??😳

Good night aisse kehte hai, toh kissi ko neend kaise aayengi? 😆

dhasu update... lekin dil nahi bhara... yeh dil maange more... will wait for u dear...

off to sheens thread😃...


Itna cute face banaya hai😃

Your comments remind me of me at the bhelwala... thode aur aloo, thodi green chutney... aur puri...bhelwala fed up hoke kahega .. ek aur bhel le lo didi..😆 ek aur? nahi.. am dieting..😆

aisse demands bhadegi toh ek aur ff banegi...😆

Thanks Lakshmi.
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

LOVE the update
first maan pulling geet's leg by saying that he did talked to darji and put all blame on her😆😆😆
then her jootha roothna

omggg dev never leave a chance to pull maan's leg and he did same again

poor maan already frustrated of his mishty not seeing him in room and on top that song😆😆😆

aag mein ghee ka kaam kiya hain usne

then maaneet encounter
love it the way geet told him that she wanted him to rest that is why she avoided to coming to his room

and last ufff the good night kiss😳😳😳

now waiting for next day
what is in maan's mind is it msk style romantic proposal😳😳


Itne smiley and laughing faces?

Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

DEV IS TOO WICKED

HE GOT A CHANCE TO TEASE MAAN AND HE IS MAKING USE OF IT
MAAN DIDNT LIKE THE FACT THAT GEET WAS STAYING AWAY AND NOT CARING FOR HIM
BUT SHE WAS TAKING FULL CARE OF HIS HEALTH
AND WHAT A TOE CURLING KISS - AB NEEND KAISE AAYEGI


They are twins, so I am sure Maan will return the favor.

Thanks Punam.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape

Good night aisse kehte hai, toh kissi ko neend kaise aayengi?

omg you and your dialogues Aviii...😳😳😳

loved the update sooo sooo very much Avi...awsome beautiful amazing lovly fab update it was...


poor maan...dev was having fun using him that was not fair dev...
lovv geets innocence...
maan is THE besttt when it comes to making her do things according to his will and making fun of her is his favourite hobby...awesome part Avi😃


Thanks Purvi. Glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shruti_Goyal

i really like the way maan has improved himself...in the begng he used to be in silent avataar and now he is very expressive...
very curious to know about maan's promise😳
eagerly waiting for next update
Thanku so much for an amazing update dear🤗


He was silent because he was not sure about her returning his love. Now that he knows, his confidence is fully there. Maan to MSK now. Thanks for noticing.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

thud kiss updttt,,,,🤢👏

antaksri idea by dev 2 gud,,,,bechara maan kitna trf reha hei,,,
geet ko pta bhi nehi ,gana ga ke kya kahar dhaya,,,,😆😆
maan ne misty le hi li,,,😳
ab kya mnayega geet se,,,,egerly waiting...😳😃


Thanks Lily😃

Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: UNICORN75

As usual a wonderful update..the tug,the pull,the little tiff,the makeup,the kisss...ufff the list can gone on...Wondwrfully written...
Maan Geet are in the best phase of romance and with Avi's writting the updates makes awesome reading...The stage is getting ready for the grand proposal?
Eagerly waiting for more


Thank you. Glad you liked it 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n amazing update! terrific romance! Dev teasing Maaneet! Wt a song! lol! Superb hug n passionate kiss! wonderfully written! update soon! sorry 4 nt liking Part 65 ! Dnt knw wt happened!

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