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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

babie,,laks mona sona priya maitri,,,,,😃

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😊 Hi lily...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Mujhe update chahiye...abhi...😆
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😊 Updating...






Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗



We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.












Part - 63



He knew it was hard for her to accept this but he decided to move on with her bearing all her refusal * they r not in that state that someone would come and arrange things and platform for them to move forward . No , not at all it was he who disband everything and only he would mend fences in d matter facing all odds .

He took d rings in his hand and spread his palm in front of her with a look of entreaty .


Maan: Geet i can't do this in that way u would dreamt but in d presence of this moon,stars and suprime power , i'm accepting this relation with u . I know i'm not perfect for u and u deserve much better than me but u said that God took some decisions for us so i'm accepting his decision who bind us together.


He bent down on his knee and said: Geet would u accept me as ur companion ?


Geet was stunned with this and looked at him with open mouth *she was in a fix , though she accepted this relation and marriage but after his refusal she decided that she would never come to him and never expect anything from him and his family . She did this marriage for d family not for him or her * she was confused and lost in her thoughts .


Maan thought that she didn't want and stood up with a broken heart .


Maan: i won't force u Geet , at least to avoid unnecessary questions from outsiders wore this as an ordinary ornament * u wore belly chain and vermillion then one more thing with them .


Geet was shocked when he saw all those things ?


Geet: Kya aapko vishwaash hei Ishwar ke banay iss ristey per ?


Maan: mujhe tumhare vishwaash per vishwaash hei Geet.


Geet: lekin maine aapse kabhi koi hope to nahi ki ?


Maan: mai shayad uss layak hu bhi nahi Geet , i wanted to respect ur trust Geet and i won't like if someone raise any finger at ur trust.


She felt d firmness in his voice and saw d shine of confidence in his eyes * he was talking from his heart .


Geet: i'll accept it, but with no hopes .


Maan beamed , this was enough for him as a start and he knew that there is a long way to go .


He held her hand in him and slipped that shining band in her finger as a mark of his possession on her * he cares that ring lovingly and placed his lips on that . Geet shivered and gasped * she was looking at him with moistened eyes .


Maan: thanks Geet accepting me a part of ur life .


Geet took another band and slipped that in his finger saying ... hisaab baraber and gave a dimpled smile .


Awww.. he smiled and nodded in happiness ... Thanks.


Geet: no need , mujhe bhi nahi pasand ki koi aapse aankhe milaker sawal kare.


Maan 's heart swell with pried listening this * she thought about his respect.


Maan: one more thing ..


He took d knife , came behind her and placed that in her * he cut d walnut cake with her , took a small piece and fed her . She was lost in his gesture * he was making everything special for her .


Geet: don't do anything out of ur way.


Maan: why ? don't u like walnut cake ?


Geet : i do but ...


Maan put his finger on her lips ... Geet let me do what i want , just tell me u like it or not ?


Geet nodded : how do u know i like walnut cake?


Maan with attitude : my ways.

She smiled, rolled her eyes and fed him d cake * they came back and got busy in their respective works. She selected some cards designs and showed Maan * he gave ideas and she edited that * she finalized d card and saved that .


He was very impressed with her efforts for making everything perfect * she is really a gem , a God gift for him and his family * he thanked God for sending her in their life . She was right that it was decided by time what is good for us ?


He cares d band in his finger with a smile and kissed that ** tum to nahi karogi , chalo mei hi ker leta hu ** he slept with a content heart .


Geet lay down to sleep , her fingers were playing with d band in ring finger ** Uski baat manker accept to ker li ye ring , family mei to koi kuch nahi puchega lekin mere office ka kya ? wahan koi nahi janta ki meri shaadi ho chuki hei , koi kuch puchega to mei kya jawab dungi * engagement ho gai to shaadi kab hei ? God !! ab iss prob ka kya solution hei ? She slept thinking about d new arose prob to face .


Next day she took permission from her office ..to work at home and Dadima was overwhelmed with her care and support * she showed d card to all at d BF time and they liked that * YSK said that at night we mailed this to all . Rest of d day she helped Dadima * Geet didn't allow her to exhaust herself and requested her to give only instructions * she was arranging everything according to Dadima's wish and as well as doing her office work online. Dadima was so relieved , they had finished their all work without a fuss in d absence of GD and Pam .


Geet took Annie in confidence and broke out d news of Dev and meera's marriage * first she was shocked and angry but Geet made her understand and told d conditions of Dev and Meera. She advised her to brought some beautiful stuff from Rajasthan for d marriage and she liked d idea * Annie is d student of fashion designing and Geet knew that she would select d best . Everything was set in d KM and they were waiting for d function .


Precap - Dev and Meera's engagement ...

Part - 64




Sorry for mistakes.


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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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am first...

loved this part... the way u described how no one other than maan should take this step ... and his way ... MSK style...

geet tho balance sheet open karke baiti hain😆

walnut cake kiska fav hain??? tumhaara ya jeej ka??😉

superb part... aaaj no smiley... aise adjust karle😃


Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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kidoo kaisa hei,,??jeej ka cal aya,,??

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Posted: 11 years ago
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lils LMS bann gayi...😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

lils LMS bann gayi...😆

mere lapy per khatre ke badal mdra rehen hein
shinne ke asar leg rehen hein ,,,mera kya hoga...??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for new thread
waiting for update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

mere lapy per khatre ke badal mdra rehen hein

shinne ke asar leg rehen hein ,,,mera kya hoga...??


😆 lekin aaj ka shani vaar to khatm hone ko aaya hai.. to fir sankat bhi jald hi durr ho jayega na.. till then take care..😉

wese suna hai shani vaar ko hanuman ji ko tel chadane se sare sankat tall jate hai...😆😆😆

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