New Maaneet SS - Beautiful Monster (MG)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone!!!
This is my first attempt at writing anything, so please bear with me...

This story is roaming on my mind from a long time ago and practically making me go crazy...Thanks to my friends specially ( Charu di, Pihu, Hira, Ramya) who encourage me to posting it here..Thank you guys!!


Read at your own risk!! Because i am not sure when is next part coming!!


Beautiful Monster



Character Sketch


Geet Handa: 24 years old..A very reserved, shy and simple girl.. doesn't talk much with anyone..but can fight with whole world for her loved ones..





Maan Singh Khurana: A warlock.. A beautiful, dangerious, Sexy one..





Meera Handa: 25yrs of old..Elder sister of...love geet very much...engaged to Yash Malhotra..





Yash Malhotra: 28yrs old..A successful doctor and Meera's Finance...





More Character will be introduced as the story continues...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Monster



Prologue


I woke up listening the beeping sound...beep beep ..i tried to open my eyes but immediately stop that ..there is so much light I couldn't open my eyes...again I tried.. this time slowly...I hear faint sound of talking but couldn't concentrate what they are talking... i opened my eyes to see I'm staring at white ceiling.. where I am?

Geet..?? I hear a faint sound of a woman...I looked at her.. she is old ..may be her late forties...but she looked young & beautiful...

Geet ?? She again said..

Huh?? I croaked.. my throat felt so dry ..i coughed and tried to get up...someone stopped me ..i looked at the women again ..she hand me a glass of water.. i drank the water in one go...I feel better now...

Geet baby ..how are you feeling?? The woman asked me. I looked at her again..

Where I am?? I asked her.

You are in hospital baby..

Who are you??

Geet?? I'm your mother baby...

Huh?? Mother?? Who is geet??

Huh?? The lady seems confused ..that's when someone entered the room with a crying baby ..a very beautiful young girl with a very small baby...she is cradling the baby to her chest ..trying to stop the baby from crying and ..she is saying something..

Mom ..what happened..Geet?? thank god geet you are awake..now lets...and she stops ..she seems confused looking at my confused face..

I am looking at everything confused...my mind is hazy with so many questions...who are they?? Why I am in a hospital?? And specially who I am??

Who I am?? Who is geet?? I asked again this time loud ..the baby's crying stopped suddenly...and the lady & the girl is now looking at the baby ..then me ..they looked surprised...

" You are geet " the girl answerd.

I looked at them blankly...so my name is geet..then how I don't remember.. they looked at each other then looking at me with an unreadable expression.. I felt weird looking at them.. Suddenly a handsome looking man entered the room wearing a white coat ..He is a doctor...He asked me how I am feeling...checked my pulse ..then turned to talk with the women..

She is fine ..everything is normal...the doctor said.

But Yash.. she is not recognizing anyone ..the woman answered.

A nurse entered the room with some paper ..she handed the papers to the doctor and said, here is her report sir..

The doctor checked the reports & looked at me then turned to again talk to the lady..

I'm sorry to say Aunty but I think she has lost her memory ..the doctor said..

Lost my memory?? Why?? When?? How did that happened?? So many thoughts running in my mind ..i feel sudden dizziness..

Lost her memory?? But Yash ...the girl said ..suddenly the baby again started crying...

I looked at the baby ..the baby is so small.. wrapping in a blue small duvet ..its looked just like a cotton ball ..the girl came to me and give me the baby ..i hesitated before taking the baby ..when I take the baby its stopped crying...I looked at the baby in awe ..its a boy.. he is beautiful ..may be 2weeks old ..

He is beautiful ..i said out loud..

He is ..the girl answered..

I looked at her and asked...what's his name??

The girl looked at me sadly and answered ..i don't know ..you have to choose his name..

I looked at her confusedly ..choose his name?? why I have to I choose his name?? I thought she is his mother ..but now I thought she is not...then where is his mother?? Why she is not with this boy??

Why I have to choose his name?? Where is his mother?? I asked the girl..

You have to choose his name...she heisted then looked at the doctor.. the doctor nodded looking at her...then she turned to look at me right in the eye and answered.. You have to choose his name... because you are his mother geet...



Phewww!!! Here it is, the prologue guys!! I hope you enjoyed it or are at lease interested to read more.. Share your thoughts and drop me a comment..I am not sure when I am going to update next part...So please bear with me!!



Edited by -Mishu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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im really really sorry darlz :(
got stuck up with my bro's assignment n then suddenly fell ill :(
omg i cant believe dat u did this
this is just soo wow
im soo happy for u 😃
beautiful monster 😳
nice prologue
mem loss n a baby too 😲🤣
kinda crazy just like u 😉
n ha update soon waiting for the update ❤️
luv u loads ❤️
muaahhzz :* :*
Edited by .ramya-gurtian. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Congratzz for ur first story Mishu ..😊

Lovely CS ..

Awesome Prolouge ..

Geet lost her memory & have a baby also ..😲

Interesting start ..continue soon ..

Add me for pm's also ..

Edited by _SnowFlakes_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Mishu 😊 ..

hope u remember me this is trishadcute aka trisha of DD AT ..i recently changed my id ..

Its been so long we hv interacted ..howz u ??

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_



Hi Mishu 😊 ..

hope u remember me this is trishadcute aka trisha of DD AT ..i recently changed my id ..

Its been so long we hv interacted ..howz u ??



Hi Trisha..of course i remember you :)
i haven't been regular on IF from a long time..
I am fine..howz u??

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: _SnowFlakes_



Congratzz for ur first story Mishu ..😊

Lovely CS ..

Awesome Prolouge ..

Geet lost her memory & have a baby also ..😲

Interesting start ..continue soon ..

Add me for pm's also ..



Thank you trish 😊

yeah its kinda crazy starting 😆

will try to update soon 😉 if my crazy mind let me then 😕


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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi mishu

meeting after long time
how are you
DDAT se direct writing FFs...😛
nice prologue
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Madhuri53

hi mishu

meeting after long time
how are you
DDAT se direct writing FFs...😛
nice prologue
cont soon



hi madhuri di
thank you..
how are you??
yeah after a long time back to IF..
hope going to come regularly again...
will try to continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri

simply awesome
loved it



thank you dear..
i am glad you loved it :)

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