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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya111111

<font size="4"><font color="#990000">oye abhi keliye main jaarahi hoon


rashmi ko sab log jyaada pareshaan mat karo😡😡

ache bachon ki tarah wait karo update keliye teek hai
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Mai tho bauth acchi bachi hu 😳
Bilkul pareshaan nahi karungi 😉
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dhamki kis khusi me di???
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Hi di 😃
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Hii Valli
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Part-27

I fell for an angel she is bundle of joy

painted my life with her one single smile

i cont even think of right and wrong

as my heart was not in my control

my mind occupied with her crazy funny talks

I don't know being in love will give

This much warm feeling until I loved her

I felt like flying in clouds watching out

Those bright twinkle stars

My heart welled with warm up feeling

My hands are itching to wipe away those pearls of her

my whole body craving for her one single touch

my breathe had the essence of her aroma

With these feelings my heart will burst out

God help me give me strength to get Hold on these desires of mine

(BY-Twilightsparkle)

Days passed -

Maan feeling deeper and deeper for Geet with each passing day and Geet being dependent on Maan in all matters,be it in office or at home..But She trusted him only as his friend and his husbands brother as Yash told her that he and Maan were two bodies with one soul.

Sudha"s plaster was cut and her leg was fine so after spending two more days.. it was time for Geet to leave for her home.Sudha had started to walk slowly.Dr. advised her to walk slow .She was now allowed to do her all works so Priya asked Sudha to send Geet back to her home.

Rahul went to drop Geet at Km .Sudha sent lot's of gifts for all at KM.It was Geet's first long stay at HM after she got married.When Yash was alive no one at KM allowed Geet to stay long at HM as her studies would have got disturbed then.

Geet returned and Priya was so happy to see her,Geet touched her feet but priya stopped her and took her in her arms.

Taiji was again making her face seeing Geet back.In her wordas-Aa gayi jadugarni..but she pretended to smile to see her back.

In the evening Maan and Ram returned home and found Geet there..and Maan felt an unknown pleasure to see her back.Though they were almost together during Geet's stay at HM,still he felt the house alive again with the constant chatting of geet and Anie..

At dinner ram asked Maan -How the work of FH is progressing Maan?

Maan-papa..it's almost done .You decide an auspicious day to open it and rest will be managed by me..

Priya-Maan is right...I will ask pandit ji about tha shubh muhurt to inaugurate the FH.

Geet smiled at this-As you wish maa..mere liye to wo har din shubh hai jab aap log mere saath hain..

Taiji-wo sab to hamesha hi rahenge tumhaare saath..but when all have done so much for you I think it should be according to the custom.

Geet-as you say taiji..

...

Next day Priya asked their family priest to tell the muhurt to open the FH. Panditji told her that after five days it was a good muhurt..

So the work in FH was going on full swing..FH was ready to get it's shape..Maan's designing department had done a wonderful job. it was a beautiful FH

Every niche and corner was designed beautifully

Everything was perfectly placed

Geet too worked very hard to design the dresses for the FH

She designed every kind of dresses

Be it Indian

or western

Every style was available there..

It was the day for the opening of FH

Both families were present there except taiji'.she opted to stay at home at the pretext of her knee pain.In actual she was not happy with the importance Geet wes gaining.so she didn't want to burn her blood for free.So she was not present there.

Rahul and Maan were happy for Geet

Rahul helped Maan in every way whenever he needed him.Pandit ji did puja for the wellbeing of the FH and asked Geet to call her elder member of family to cut the ribbon..Geet looked at all..They all were her family ..whom she ask to cut the ribbon...Ram was smiling to see her confused..Geet looked at him with a frown finally she decided and said-I want my mother to cut this ribbon..

But Sudha didn't move ahead as she found it wrong. Priya too was there.,How could she do it

Geet-Both of my mothers..Maa..Mamma ..Please aaiye na..

Priya was surprised at this but Sudha was happy now

Sudha sighed -priya ji aap uski maa hi hain na ..maine usse janam diya par aapne usse nayi zindagi di hai..to aap bhi uski maa hai ..and both ladies did their job happily..

Ram-Geet..hamaare hote hue tumne in dono ko chance kyun diya..you know People call me to inaugurate their new projects..

Maan smiled at his father's cribbing

Geet-Issiliye aapko nahin kahaa..aap ko to kitne mauke milte hain..but ladies ko kaun poochhta hai in sab ke liye ..They both have the right to open the FH of their daughter..

Gautam put his hand on her head-well done Geet-I m very proud of you..

Geet gave him her favourite smile..All enterd the FH..

Geet introduced her staff to her families-Maa mamma..meet Pinky..my assistant in FH

Pinky-Aditi Chopra

She was a cute girl , very chirpy like Geet. Pinky wished them and welcomed them in FH

Geet-This is Rohit..Designer of the FH

Rohit was nice guy, he was not others who were throwing themselves on Maan.He was very friendly in nature.and had a good experience of work too.

Some more persons were there too in FH.as her staff. They were at junior posts who were going to look after FH in the presence of the customers

All spent good time there and Geet gifted one dress each to Priya Sudha and Anie..Anie was so excited for that gift.She hugged Get in excitement and said -Thanks bhahbi..Rahul and Maan inspected if everything was fine in FH ..and after some time all returned to home..

At home Geet offered Prasad of puja to taiji and she accepted it with half heart as she could not say no to the Prasad...

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At night Geet was in her bed.her Her eyes were on Yash's photo...her eyey had some water in but she was smiling today while seeing it.She picked that photo in her hands

Geet-Yash..Are you happy today?.See I did what you wanted me to do.kitna achchha hota agar aaj aap hote to shayad sabse jyada khush aap hi hote ..But I m not sad Yash.mujhe pata hai aap jahaan bhi hai mere saath hain..aur hamesha rahenge..Ek baat aur kahni hai aapse..aap meri chinta mat karna main theek hoon..You know na that all loves me here..bas taiji abhi bhi naaraz hain and I know she is not going to be changed..But don't worry I know how to ignore her harsh talks..I only do what you used to do..so it's not a big problem for me now..I m going to start a new journey from tomorrow..please be with me..She wiped that water from her eyes and she put her fingers on yash's face..her eyes were heavy with sleep and while talking to yash she slept with that photo in her hand on her heart..

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Next day was Geet's first day of work..She was ready to leave for FH with Maan and Ram. Priya brought curd and sugar for her.she made her eat that and wished for all the success for Geet.Geet took the blessing of Priya .Then she came near Taiji to take her blessings..

Taiji-Khush raho and asha karti hoon ki khandaan ka naam banaaye rakhogi..isko kharaab nahin karogi

Geet felt bad but didn't say anything. Maan frowned at her comment but this time he kept quite as he didin't want that day to start with an argument.

Priya-Geet from today Ram and Maan are your responsibility. They mostly bring their lunch back..Now you will see that they are eating their lunch properly.

Geet-Don't worry maa..main aaj se in dono ko careless nahin hone doongi that I promise you.They are going to have an commander in form of me..

Ram-Priya this is not fair..ab tum Geet ko mere peechhe lagaaogi..wo apna kaam karegi ya hume dekhegi..

Geet-Don't worry papa I can do multiple tasks at one time..So Be ready..Both of you..Here Comes Geet khurana..

All were happy to see that old Geet was coming back to them..All left for the office..

Though Maan was happy to see a happy Geet but he knew that he is going to face a hard time..Now Geet was going to stay in the same office..and he was feeling more and more for her with every passing day..Would he be able to hide his feelings..'But he shrugged his thoughts and made himself ready for consequences .He did not know what was going to be happened with him with Geet being in office for full day..

(I will not give importance here to their work..I will keep concentrating on their personal life so don't think about their work be in FH or in KC for now)

IT was lunch time in office but Ram nad Maan were busy in their respective works.As priya told Geet..their mind was not in lunch.She knocked at Ram's cabin..Ram saw her and remembered the morning scene at home.

Geet-Papa Lunch time..so stop the work ..

Ram-Geet bas thoda sa kaam hai

Geet-papa please give some rest to the work too .it is tired too..jaldi aaiye..Maan kahaan hain.

Ram-In his cabin..didn't you see him? Your cabin is near his

Geet-Papa I was in FH..abhi kaam hai to wahin baithna hai..I m going to call him..she called on his phone but went unanswered..Papa main bula kar laati hoon

She went to his cabin and knocked..Maan looked up and found Geet..She smiled to see him and said-Maan lunch time hai..to chaliye papa ke cabin me hum sab lunch karte hain

Maan-Geet..bas thoda sa kaam hai

Geet-OMG dono ka same dialogue.She asked his secretary-Did you have your lunch

Secretary-yes Geet

Geet-please have some mercy on your bass too.I think he too has right to have lunch

Secretary was like..-what did I do?

Geet-Maan please jaldi chaliye na mujhe bhookh lagi hai

Man-Then you go and have your lunch I will take some time

Geet-Ok..I m here only .Tell me when you are finished with your work

Maan-Geet lekin tumhen bhookh lagi hai

Geet-Haan wo to lagi hai ..But what can I do? Maa ne duty di hai puri to karnee padegi na.You carry on with your work..I can wait though I m hungry and she made a face

Maan knew that she was doing drama so sighed and asked his secretary to see what could be done in that matter which they were discussing and left to have lunch. Geet smiled and she too left with him..and then all three had their lunch.It was now her everyday's duty to pull both father- son for lunch. They were bound too be there at time as Geet never had lunch without anyone of them.

Geet was getting involved in her work .She had now two more friends in her list they were pinky and Rohit . Both were nice and fun loving persons and they were too talkative to impress the customers easily.

Between her work she never forgot her duties towards maan and ram. All the care of Geet for maan and Ram was pulling maan towards Geet.Maan could see Geet enjoying her work in FH.

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Everyday he was witnessing a new Geet

Ho.. ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Jaise khilta gulaab, jaise shayar ka khwaab

Jaise ujali kiran, jaise ban mein hiran

Jaise chandni raat, jaise narmi baat

Jaise mandir mein ho ek jalta diya...

Ho.. ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Some time he found her talking animatedly with Pinky ...her style to concentrate on work was different from the others..She talked to herself while working as if she was asking herself if she was right or not..

Ho.. ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Jaise subah ka roop, jaise sardi ki dhoop

Jaise veena ki taan, jaise rangon ki jaan

Jaise balkhaayen bel, jaise lehron ka khel

Jaise khushboo liye aaye thandi hawa...

Ho.. ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Some times he could see trio enjoying .they used to enact the customer who was fussy and demanded some unusual work in dresses. Rohit was perfect in that department as he himself was feminine so he looked funny while doing so.and Maan could see Geet and Pinky rolling with laughter to see Rohit like that..

Ho.. ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Jaise naachta moar, jaise resham ki dor

Jaise pariyon ka raag, jaise sandal ki aag

Jaise solah shringar, jaise ras ki phuhaar

Jaise aahista aahista badhta nasha

Ho.. ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

Sometimes he found her exhausted after work. She always used to keep running down to the floors of KC and FH. And sometimes irritated too with the unusual demands of the clients.and when Geet herself forgot about lunch ..that time same rule was used to be applied on her. Maan had to take her forcefully with him for lunch as they too had started to wait for her for lunch. Without Geet their lunch was a boring lunch as Geet used to tell them about the happenings of FH.

Geet was again becoming a talkative and chirpy girl as she did not have time to think about her own life .All thanks to her work and new friends Like pinky and Rohit..She liked the work of FH very much as she got different customers every day..and she had so much gala time to watch them..But at night she never forgot to talk with yash as it was her daily routine to talk with him.

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Time was passing like it was flying .Maan and Geet were same..Maan feeling more love for Geet but hid her feelings in his heart..Geet took every care of his as the care of a friend because now she too was taking care of him like a friend along with of Ram like as a daughter.So she could not notice anything changed in Maan's behavior.

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One day the landline of HM rang and Sudha received the call-Hello

Otherside-Sudha ji Priya here

Sudha-Ji Priya ji..Is everything fine?

Priya-Haan..wo actually I wanted to talk to you..do din baad karwachauth hai .aur mujhe bahut ajeeb lag raha hai..wo Geet..

And Sudha understood her-You are right Priya ji..actually I m thinking about it too..Geet ki shadi ke baad ye pahli Karwachauth hai aur wo,,she left her sentence in middle as she was feeling heavy at her heart.It was first karwachauth after Geet's marriage but she was not that lucky to keep that fast for her husband

Priya-Maan ko to itna farq nahin padega ..ladka hai na But How will I manage with Geet I will not be able to come in front of her that day..I don't want to keep that fast this year but that too is impossible ..I m able to understand what should I do

Sudha-Priya ji aapki baat theek hai. Aap chinta mat kijiye..Geet is very sensible now..she will understand the situation.when God gives the sorrow then he gives an heart too to bear that sorrow.

Priya -Hmm..let see but mujhe bahut bura lag raha hai.hamaare bachhon ke saath aisa kyun hua

Sudha-I can't say anything Priya ji.may be God has thought something different for them.

Priya-theek hai Sudha ji..ab main phone rakhti hoon..and she cut the phone.She was very sad today ..and she complaint to God-Why did you do this? Why my children?

Precap-How will Geet react???

Part-26<<-prev/next->>Part-28


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hello shello jee😆
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-err 😉 Am I first...haa agar kisini cheating nahi ki toh😉


Lovely update Rashmi...

Nice poem Pooja


Story toh daud raha hain...😳

Geet ghar wapas aagayi...all are happy... Especially Maan...woh andar hi andar naacha raha hoga...

FH ki opening ho gayi... Mama aur Mom ne opening kiya...

Clever Geet...


Ab badhengi maan ki mushkilein...saamne pyaar hai...kuch nahi kehsakta...


Lovely VM valli...




Oho yeh kya hogaya...itna acha padne ke baad yeh kya twist...Geet ka pehla KC aur Yash nahi hain...

Hope Maan usse sambhalega...

Lovely update Rashmi...Thank you for the wonderful update...


Yeh le tumhare liye...
Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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CONGRATULATION FOR NEW THREAD !!!!!
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Lovely update👏

geet enjoying her work at FH.
geet asked sudha and priya to cut the ribbon.😃
poor maanu what to do abse geet uske saath hi rahegi
maan trying his best to not think about geet
geet back to herself and she is takng care of maan,ram's lunch
omg precap KC ab kya hoga
how will geet react
eagerly waiting for next part
love you di for using my VM😳🤗
Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats...

PS - hey dear...we are in the new thread...
post the link there...see u soon in 9th thread...

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