VENOMOUS DESIRE#5 UPDATED EPI 03 PG 123 ON 10-10-19

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#371

Your note: 'Note-Well some reader came and said that i have bad English and am writing stupid story.So am asking u guys is it stupid story and do i have bad English?Do give ur opinion guys.There i came with my stupid story and with bad English!I hope readers understand my bad English!'

what the heck is wrong with ppl??? I fail to understand why others have to be so mean! No one is forcing that reader to read your story.

And, in my opinion, your English is fine and your story is interesting.

To H*ll with that moron!

Ignore the idiots of this world and please keep writing and entertaining us.

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anjalisen85

@anjalisen85

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#372

nice👏👏

shasha is with maans enemy😡

he wants to distroy maan😡

maaneet moments r nice😉

update soon

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-Gemini-

@-Gemini-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#373

Nice part

Ek gaya tho dusra aaya...ye shatru koun hai

Geet aur uski craving😊

Hope sasha won't be able to create mu between maaneet

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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#374

awesome update dear

oh god that sasha is disgusting how can she be like this and thinking to get maan he wont even touch her and now maaneet has one more enemy related to his mothers past

veer in kc as director good koi to hoga sasha pe nazar rakhne wala. does he know that karan had warned maan about sasha before dying

hopwe maan will not forget about this in his other problems and ofcourse ttheir never ending passion

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SHIK.LOVMAANEET

@SHIK.LOVMAANEET

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#375

nice update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
liked it❤️
n i think it is so funny🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 that sum people think the stories r stupid n bad English, i guess thy r highly mistaken n anyways u don't have to thing over it seriously because there r so many loyal readers, who will never disappoint you😳😳😳😳😳😳
cont. soon
thnks for pm😃

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#376

part 67
nice part...
Geet and her cravings...
who is this disgusting man?
and Sasha stupid fool she is...
hope Geet will be safe...
cont soon dear...

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#377

amazing part..Shatru guy sound very deadly yaar and with sasha a bad company to be arround..hope babaji will save maaneet from this evil...i saw your bottom note and feel very proud of your confidence..good going yaar..we are her to support u..👏👏👏

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gill123

@gill123

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#378

Nice update veer is new director of kc

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Gurti_Maaneet

@Gurti_Maaneet

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#379

😡😡 main na koi comment nahi karne wali gussa dila diya hai tune mujhe. How can u allow some moron to hurt urself. Wo kitni badi ****** hai hum sab jaante hai use maza aata hai dusro ko demoralize karne me or tu ho rahi hai. Mujhe bhi usne kitna tang kiya tha par kya maine DT band ki nahi na to how can u allow her to hur yourself. I felty so dissappoint with your behaviour. Aise kar k tu woi kar rahi hai jo wo chahti hai... 😡😡 awsome update bas isse upar kuchh nahi milega tune mujhe bahut hurt kiya hai. Tu uski baat sunn rahi hai or humari baato ki koi value nahi hai hai na

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maaneet0887

@maaneet0887

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#380

Originally posted by: richa_kapoor
😡😡 main na koi comment nahi karne wali gussa dila diya hai tune mujhe. How can u allow some moron to hurt urself. Wo kitni badi ****** hai hum sab jaante hai use maza aata hai dusro ko demoralize karne me or tu ho rahi hai. Mujhe bhi usne kitna tang kiya tha par kya maine DT band ki nahi na to how can u allow her to hur yourself. I felty so dissappoint with your behaviour. Aise kar k tu woi kar rahi hai jo wo chahti hai... 😡😡 awsome update bas isse upar kuchh nahi milega tune mujhe bahut hurt kiya hai. Tu uski baat sunn rahi hai or humari baato ki koi value nahi hai hai na

arrey shona kyun itna gussa ho rahi hai...meine kaha na i will let got off the issue so dont worry yeh rahi teri jaanu all set for waiting for ur comment.Gussa thook do shona!😉 tu mer pyaari si shona haina🤗 love u🤗