VENOMOUS DESIRE#5 UPDATED EPI 03 PG 123 ON 10-10-19

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piya27

@piya27

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#361

dear the person who said you write crap stories the person is crap and your English is just perfect

loved the update waiting to know more about this man

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#362

sri tumhara to lagta hai maaneet ke thikane sare musibat ko bhejne ka plan hai 😆😆
lo aagaya ek aur musibat shatru naam bhi kya rakha hai😆
sasha bhi isse mili hui hai...
ye to geet ko apna gulam banane ka sapna dekh raha hai 😡😡😡
veer sasha pe nazar rakh raha hai...
lovely maaneet..
geet bossing over maan bechara maan 😆😆
hope baby geet maan sab achhe ho...
PS...jisne kaha tunhari story stupid hai unhe kaho aap plz oe padne ka kast na kare apna samaya barbad na kare 😡😡
aur abt english its fine sri...

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jitupatole5

@jitupatole5

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#363

it was nice but it was short also after this long much wait. plz ab maan-geet ke saath kuch bhi bura na ho,i think he is geet's uncle SANJAY,who was talking with veer. veer ne sahi kiya apni military job chodker.ab woh hamesha maan-geet ke saath rahega aur sasha per bhi nazar rakhega.

i dont think you have bad english,and writting stupid stories. just ignore

that people. plz plz update soon for your loyal readers.

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#364

nice update new villian entry

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#365

Suhana mom is so sweet.. she is fulfiling all cravings.. So Shatru n sasha are enemy now.. Karan was right.. Maan N Veer are now careful..abt her.. She is really B*****... Want maan to give her harsh punishment..😈

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Sia

@lovesia

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#366

isme maaneet scenes kam the😭😭

but jitne bhi toh bohot sweet the

that sasha chudail humesha maan ke peeche padi rehti hai

yaar maaneet ki life me kam villains the kya abhi tak joh tumne ek aur ko add kar diya nd he too wants geet

bichari geet ek aur deewane haazar maan kis kis ladega ab toh full n final kardo yeh maaneet ki life ka last villain

why does he want to take revenge from maan nd that too bcoz of Sahana dono ka connection kya hai

aur joh main part tha tumne toh usse gayab hi kar diya when shatru was revealing about the reason tab tumne bataya hi nahi

nd that shatru told sasha to gain so much confidant of maaneet that they share their secrets with her

but maaneet ke beech kabhi koi secret hai hi nahi toh kaha se batayenge

aww sahana loves her children so much she fulfilled geet craving

nd maan was happy seeing that

accha hua sasha ko nahi pata chala ki office me director post ke liye interview ho raha hai and now veer is new director

OMG veer resigned from army so that he an protect maaneet actually unhe aise kisi ki zarurat bhi thi

its called true friendship

veer ko yeh bhi pata chal gaya that sasha is cheating behind maan but usse yeh baat batayi kisne i think naina ne

aur agar veer karan ki baat ko yaad kare then he can clearly see that sasha is a witch

bcoz karan said na that someone from his company is stabbing him from behind

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priya_ya1408

@priya_ya1408

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Nice update
Now new enemy of maaneet aur naam bhi mast hai shatru
And that idiot sasha is also with him
Hope veer ko Sab pata chal jaye vese bhi he got to know that sasha has withdrawn such a big amount too veer ko shak too hoga hi
Continue soon