VENOMOUS DESIRE#5 UPDATED EPI 03 PG 123 ON 10-10-19

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Kavyanjali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#331

Oh ok! Thnx 4 telling i was wondering y r u not updating n den koi note bhi nahi diya...ok wud try 2 b patint though i'm realy a vry impatiant kinda person...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#332

hi thanks 4 da pm n note. Dnt take too long!!!

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#333

Okay I will wait for ur updates...by the way while checking for new updates of untamed desires I found venomous desires season 2 prologue...it was very interesting...😳

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CrazyMaaneetFan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#334

Finally got to read last 4-5 parts.

I am so sorry as I could not be regular.

But from now onwards I will try to be regular and comment too.

Maan's past now came out.

But where is his dad?

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_SnowFlakes_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#335

Will be waiting for update ..

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#336

very emotional update so sad what happened to maan mom hope he finds them and have all of the killed but make sure they suffer first heart breaking update thanks for the pm.

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Taahir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#337

Love this story , always LIKE & COMMENT

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Dona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#338

part 65 n 66
emotional update

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Rumana Begum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#339

Outstanding updates 👏⭐️

Loved it so muchhh❤️🤗

Waiting for next chapter

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maaneet0887

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Posted: 11 years ago

#340

TEASER OF VENOMOUS DESIRE (01-05-14)

Geet pouted her lips and said,"Nahin i want to eat Chocolate with Chocochip and Choco Brownie with lots of nuts sprinkled on it!"

Maan tried to convince her,"But jaan,its midnight and we r in Hoshiarpur.I cant bring it at this time.Try to sleep jaan!"

Geet glared at him with cute anger and said,"Nahin i want to eat now...and it is my baby's wish!Dont u want to do anything for ur angel?Go from here i dont want to talk to u.U cant even bring the ice cream for me!"

She pouted ever so cutely and Chachaji who saw his niece's tantrums chuckled to himself as she was making bow MSK who had become angry bird when he heard his mother's fateful past.

On that time a plate came which contained the dish in front of Geet's face.Geet widened her eyes seeing the plate full of the dish and cutely grabbed it and took a spoonful.She looked up to get it was Sahana who was smiling at her eagerness.Maan looked at Geet who was a child herself.

Sahana kissed her forehead and spoke softly,"B-beta a-am h-happy t-that u-u rr pregnant.N-now i-i c-can g-get m-my g-gudiya w-which a-am m-missing!"

Geet had tears hearing her voice and cutely nodded.Maan admired his mother and cocooned his jaan around her waist.Geet glared at him and whacked his hands.

Maan pouted cutely and she turned away from him.He sighed and motioned his mother to go who was lost in admiring Geet licking her chocolate lips.

Sahana went away admiring the couple while Maan immediately licked her chocolate lips turning her neck towards him.Geet widened her almond eyes and he enjoyed her expression...😛😉

Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago