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I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




(This FF i update daily so please don't wait for Pm.. please do check thread yourself, it's my kind request to all )



Part 81

Maan had not yet finished his food, even didn't have touched it and Geet noticed. She was feeling uneasy but had to show her annoyance, didn't take any action and remained unaffected.

Many hours passed.

"I've to go home" she said then waited for Maan to reply but when he didn't took effort to open his mouth, "Baba will be waiting. It's getting dark outside" she carried on.

Not replying her Maan opened his laptop and started typing on it. He ignored her, intentionally but his entire concentration was on her crabby activities. He smirked.

. "Maan!!" she walked to his side. She poked on his shoulder "I'm talking to you"

"I know sweetheart" Maan replied without looking her "But what is benefit to repeat same answer again and again"

"But it's not fair you can't force me to stop here. And what about Baba he must be worried for me" it was her real concern. She was literally worried and tensed. Then suddenly her eyes fell on her bag. She has phone, Geet remembered and her eyes shone. Quickly she rushed to take her bag which was thrown on the chair and started fishing out the cell when she heard Maan voice.

"Hello Panna,"

Geet mouth widen, "It's my phone!!!" she rushed to him. "What are you doing with my phone?" she tried to snatch it but Maan stood up at once but Geet followed him yelling from behind. She tried hard to grab her phone but Maan played with her and enjoyed.

"Ya did you do what I'd told you?" Maan spoke in phone.

"What you're talking to her?"

But Maan ignored her and turned. Now next moment it was time for his shock. "Geet what you're doing?". He saw her lifting his laptop in air and her face was as dangerous as was forest fire. She was tempestuous. "Maan give my phone back" she shouted and moved laptop in air. Maan gulped saliva down fearing from her wild form. "Keep laptop down Geet" he shouted back.

"Maan I'll throw it down, don't come near" she moved back.

"Don't be stupid Geet, you know you're in my prison. I can punish you if you do any stupid?"

"I don't care. Give me my phone"

"So you really don't care hm" He smirked, kept continuing walking toward Geet. He kept her eyes hostage with his. Geet nodded head "I don't fear of you" she kept moving back. "Stop right there Maan.. otherwise I'll throw your.. laptop..." and for her wonderment Maan stopped. Slowly he kept her phone down on the bed and advanced his hand to her, "Now give me my laptop" Geet looked the phone then him. She was sure something was running in his mind as no way he would accept defeat so easily. She held laptop tight to her chest. "First you move back"

"Why should I?" Maan smirked. "You herself said you don't fear of me. Am I seeing your body is shaking Geet?"

"I'm not shaking. Why would I?" she tried to hold bold face when found him a little gap away.

"Really?"

"What you're doing?" Geet gasped in surprise when saw Maan removing his shirt. She looked him in shock and her heartbeat started getting excited into flying speed. He removed his vest too. She closed eyes tight.

"You said you don't fear of anything Geet now what happened?"

Slowly she felt the laptop slipping down from her hold.

"You can't win" But she gained back her going sense and gathered the last bit of strength. She tightened the hold around laptop when noticed him so close.

"But who said I want to win" Maan whispered in her ear. He smelled in her hairs and he kissed her earlobe. Her body shivered. It was tough to keep laptop secure in her arms but for her wonderment Maan didn't try to grab it. He continued teasing her sense with trails of kisses on her neck and shoulders. Geet found herself out of breathes. She attempted hard to push him but her body had lost toughness. Her legs were shaking and aching and her brain came on pause. She got frozen when felt his hands started stroking down on arc of her body and his cologne forced her stomach to flutter deliberately. Laptop had been long forgotten which was now in Maan control. His bareness had aroused the hidden desires of Geet and she wrapped hands around his shoulder to hold him closer. Her heartbeats had become out of control and she wished to die in his arms.

"Still not fearing?" Maan spoke softly grabbing bunch of her thick hairs. She nodded. "Now I'm"

"From me?"

She denied. "From my own self, from my heartbeats it's leaving me. I fear I'll die" she tightened hold as like fearing of losing her beautiful life. Maan tilted head back to see her face. He wiped wild curls from her cheeks and cupped her face.

"How can you die Geet when your life is my property? Without my permission it can't even leave you"

"Why do you tease me so much Maan?"

"And why don't you agree what I say. Don't you have trust on me?"

She nodded. "I do trust on you but you're making everything so tough for me"

"To make everything easy for further" he released her.

"Urgh!! Why is he being so stubborn" She thought. She grabbed her phone and checked the dialed number thinking what he had supposed to talk to Panna but her number was not in dialed list. "Was he joking?" she looked Maan and noticed him smiling. "Maan what's this. Baba must be worrying for me it's got night now. I should go back home now"

"When did I stop you?"

Geet understood there was no need to argue with him nor he would be agreed on her terms. It would be better if she accepts what he said but with a deal where she'll rule.

"All right" she gave out in defeat. "I will do what you want"

"Really?" Maan watched her with his tilt eyes.

"Hm. But on one condition"

He knew she was up to something.. "And what's this?"

"This paper will be with me till I give you permission to show it to anyone. You'll not tell anyone about this marriage and you will agree on whatever I will say hereafter" she declared. "Now tell me, are you ready for this deal?" Geet smirked. She knew he will not accept this overruled deal but for her shock, he was agreed. He was grinning. Geet made face. She stumped and walked to table and signed the paper in frustration.

"Now can you drop me home?" she turned from him.

"Of course I will. But won't you have a look what have written on it?" Maan walked nearer. He enjoyed her anger.

"I don't want"

"But I want Geet" he grabbed her arm and turned to face him. He gave her the paper. "After all you're my legal possessor now"

Geet didn't want to fight again. She was tired. Frustrating she snatched the papers and read.

"It's not marriage papers?" she looked him in shock. " I'm new owner of your company?"



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Posted: 11 years ago
AM FIRST... yahooo

maan ne geet ko hi nahi mujhe bhi topi pehna diya

uff yeh NPM... kithna faayda utaatha hain maan as he knows that geet is so much affected by him... chaloo kahin ka... but sweet chaloo hain


Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


😊




Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
singh24 thumbnail
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🥳 Congo - shongo lakshu...
tussi 1st aaye..😃
REquest to blow kisses by Ninja-Jamal
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant update n d most unexpected twist...
loved it
-lakshmi- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



🥳 Congo - shongo lakshu...
tussi 1st aaye..😃
REquest to blow kisses by Ninja-Jamal



thanks babie... tussi second ji... congo yaara
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update..and what a surprise 😃
Hope Mohan will trust him now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic updates for parts 80 and 81. Maan and Geet are both stubborn in their wishes with both refusing to yeild to the pressure placed on them. Really loved that Geet stood her ground against him. Also loved the way he teased her making her feel that she was signing marriage papers when he was just making her a co-owner of his property. Fab job and looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 11 years ago
super duper updttt,,,
maan ne geet ke saath hamariii bhi ashi band bjai


m thinkig maan hs bcm insane,,,bt hamaree misree ka dimag aajkal jet speed pe hei,,,,
pta nehiii kya karan hei,,,😛,😉😆
lovd de updtt hw maan made hr sign papers,,,nd sprise s osm,,,👏

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