Series: Unheard tales of an antagonist- Tale 5 -P13

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

wooo...getting more n more interesting...and this story is sooo different...you have a unique way of narrating stories😊

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

part 4
nice...
oh poor Sameera...
but now Geet is gonna marry Maan...
cont soon dear...

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Me... Me.. Me...!!!😃

Hmm, so Sameera is the protagonist of this tale, even as she is being labeled "The Anatagonist"

An ex-librarian cum designer. Very intriguing.

Hmm, what about Maan? Younger than her, a student?

She sounds like any of us, full of pride and pretense.

Why oh why do we do that? Pretend we don't hurt when we are raw and bleeding.

I remember reading somewhere that pride is the illusion self worth.

Why do we value ourselves so little then.

Music selection- superb as usual. I am hearing it for the first time.

I am definitely waiting to read more.

😳

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sanjh89

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

In last chapter it was SCARS that dominated and in this chapter it is PAUSE.
The last part..I think was a climaxing turn.. Marking the appointement with "To be Mrs.Khuran" to make the pain bearable and acceptable instead of using GEET which could have relaxed her pain..for a moment. It is good reading experience when a simple chapter ends with such a...mystic hang..
love

SANJH

Edited by sanjh89 - 11 years ago

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Susegad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

When is our Aunty-gone- east, going to the meet the Bride of Draculla.😆

Why draculla you say?

That's what you wrote. See for yourself.

His face buried in my hair, he was not aware of what my countenance held at that moment, for which I will always be grateful. Here was a woman awakened by his touch, her eyes closed, her fingers digging into his scalp, her face contorted in both pain and pleasure.

Definitely a blood sucker😆

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Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Back to this story... 😃

Scars: Very well explained the different perspectives of one word... Indeed each scar holds a many memories and a story...

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Pause: Oh my That was intense yet beautifully expressed..

Indeed the antagonist is always left out... but you are in deep waters and its difficult to maintain balance here, but till now its quite well taken care by you... 👏

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sanjh89

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Susegad
When is our Aunty-gone- east, going to the meet the Bride of Draculla.😆
Why draculla you say?

That's what you wrote. See for yourself.

His face buried in my hair, he was not aware of what my countenance held at that moment, for which I will always be grateful. Here was a woman awakened by his touch, her eyes closed, her fingers digging into his scalp, her face contorted in both pain and pleasure.

Definitely a blood sucker😆

what a 360 degree turn!!

You rocked here Su!!