THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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anum fahim

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Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Really nice update.. So now maan will trick his dadi to lower down her cid giri... dev also comes to know that maaneet are together now ... Love the way u show the bonding b/w dev n his soon to me m.i.l.. Awesome precap really excited about that.. Update soon..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

haww sab bachche milkar Daadi ki CID giri band karwaana chahte hain but they forget that her mischieves, her non-stop trying as a match-maker was the USP of serial GHSP and many stories in this Forum...😆

Bechari Daadi ko kitna shock laga...😲🤢

Adi Pinky ke alawa kisi aur ke saath ishq karega I didn't believe...and it was correct...she was Adi's cousin...

ab yeh kya Maan is taking vow not to touch Geet before marriage and from so many updates u r threatening us that u will update Maaneet moments in blog...if Maan will take this vow then how will u give Maaneet moments...😆😆

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

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Desigirls12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#523

first of very big sory to u for missing tis lovely cute ff.. one of my friend said abt tis, yesterday i started to read , i finish all te parts at midnight 2 clock.. i cant control to stop reading.. holding my ear dear...

wow lovely emotional cute heart touching scenes... te way my maaneet love and devtara love, u took both of they track in difefferent way and cute way.. hats off to u.. te way other characters too involed , how they are related to my maaneet life was lovely.. te way two girls and two boys ki love was lovely cute..

my maaneet love... wow te way u took they track was lovely.. te way my maan ki entry and past scenes, how both are hidding they love and craving for each other, they each scenes was so lovely , just i want to say a beautiful poem..they scenes was very lovely heart touching, i feel like a feather caress my heart wen i read they scenes.. te way my buddhu maan thought his geet left and his gussa, but in tat his love for her and his possessive cant see his geet with anyone and now cuming to manofly, in his msk style, i love u maan.. geet so cute innocent bubby geet, te way she is searching te person who have send her to copies to pay shows her innocence, her pure heart.. te way my maaneet with te kid scenes was lovely.. te way wen she didt see te locket and te way she crying but wen my maan came to manofly she accepting was lovely cute.. i love they scenes so much

devtara ... i mostly dont take they love, but in tis it was lovely.. wenever dev hold tara and confess his love, i saw my msk style, wat to do same blood, khurana blood, he will always like him only naa.. te way tara sufferd so much and now she got her angel in form of dev was lovely..

dadi, i love her sooo much naughty sexy match maker.. te way she trying tie her two grandson with geet and tara and her plans was so lovely naughty lovely.. te way now my maan came to know and he want to take revenge , but maan be careful, she is very dangerous.. ha ha ha

other characters also, like kabir, megha , poonam, chandan was lovely characters...

i love tis ff so so so so much.. te way u took it n a very lovely way..

Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago

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Shruthe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#524

Gonna start reading The Locket...

i guess i wud take time since its 63 parts... 😊

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jhilik mukherjee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#525

the update is heart warming. I think I am falling fr dev more than maan.

I loved the bonding between poonam and dev. now the time has come fr poonam to have sm feelings towards chandan. what to say abt naughty maan? I AM LOVING IT😉

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#526

aaya aaya update saath laaaya

am waitinggg 😃

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punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: dqno1

😲 New work means no IF.. reader only.. no writing 😃

Avi dont say that

Once you get settled in your work, please come up with a new story

We want writers like you in Geet forum otherwise it will die

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chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Well can't wait

That's all can say

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: punam2712

Avi dont say that
Once you get settled in your work, please come up with a new story
We want writers like you in Geet forum otherwise it will die

Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago