THE LOCKET (15) - MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

😭😭😭😭😭😭

15 page update and so many 2 line comments...

no pictures even

😭😭😭😭😭😭

I suppose on the bright side, you only have me for 2 more weeks to write for you...😕

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago

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gurti30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

awesome dear😊🤗

finally they talked and everything got cleared😊 loved the way maan bared his heart in front of geet. he told her everything and geet too understood his pain and both realized that it were circumstances that was not in their favour

now maan want to hear her confession but she wnts to tease him little more and want him to propose her in romantic way.lets see what maan will be planning to propose her😊

so maan came to know about CID dadi and is planning something to trouble her😆

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lily

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

jab bhi gf pe aatiii hun ,rding de updtt again ,,,4get hw mny tyms i rd it,,,fir bhi mann nehii bhara,,,

u r magician of wrds aviii,,,,🤗

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: LILY111144
jab bhi gf pe aatiii hun ,rding de updtt again ,,,4get hw mny tyms i rd it,,,fir bhi mann nehii bhara,,,
u r magician of wrds aviii,,,,🤗

😆 main nahi maanti... but thanks Lily..😃

🤗

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

hai avi

going to read again...

comment jo karna hain...

bina comment kiya kaise next update pooch sakth hoon ... haina

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: dqno1
😭

15 page update and so many 2 line comments...

no pictures even

😭

I suppose on the bright side, you only have me for 2 more weeks to write for you...😕

2 more weeks to write for you...😕

aise mat bol... 😭

am sure at least i believe that u will come back... with another awesomest story😳

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lily

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: dqno1

😆 main nahi maanti... but thanks Lily..😃

🤗

hum mante hei,,,,vil wait 4 anothr stry Avi ki kalam se,,,,😳

jab bhi tym mile,,,aur mood bne,,,we alwys waiting,,,,,😊

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

mujhe bigaad rahi ho tum... daily updates... and ithna lamba waala bhi... hayeee... i can read u on and on ...😃

geet too understood that it was her pic??? i had thought she would be peeping to see who the gal is !!! she was not aware of that pic na?

the whole maaneet convo... just maardaala... loved each lines and expressions...

maan in aggressive mode is just sight to see/read...

Ab wohi hoga jo munzoore Maan hoga.. 😆 and uff that angry waala kiss😳

i loved how geet questioned maan... each one those were lingering in her mind was shooted to maan... and maan dusht daanav ka mask chodkar ... he was again that sweetu maan...

maans confession just took me to some of the past beautiful memories of this ff...and the way u show a melting geet after each turn was just wow...

uff the mystery of letter solved...

geets reply was not shocking for me... especially when she too did the same...

uff ye pyaar... loved the part where she was proving maan that what all he did for her...

Mujhe yeh sab abhi nahi aata, par mein jaldi seekh lunga" uff yeh cuteness... maar daala...

i loved the dupatta part a lot and lot...

srk se bhi zyaada romantic... avi cant wait for it... kya karega maan??

baazi palat...now dadima hain nishaane par... interesting...

now haq se update maangthi hoon... kab milega?

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TheSunShine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

Darji and Daafi hatching plan to mak Geet and Maan talk.😆😉 Geet confronts Maan for his behavior. Both are right on their side as both think the other does not reciprocate their love. They finally express their love to each other. 👏 loved their close moments😳. Maan thinking of going one up on CID dadi😆