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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jeevana.

abhi me leaving to home in a while...
cya tomorrow...


ok will se you later on FB
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update jeev
Loved it a lot
Awww Maan just remembering Geet with every nook and corner of the college😳 he is so smitten by her☺️ although he is ignoring his own feelings, he gets so much affected by her mere absence😉
But oh my god Geet is so naughty😆 So mischievious... Mainly infront of Maan as if she is using her naughtiness as a shield to hide her feelings for Maan😳
But oh my my Poor Senior🤣 he might be cursing his fate to have tried to rag the aafat ki pudiya geet🤣 lol geet n her tricks just badass😉 so she can control any liquid😉 aww yash finally overcoming his fear n pari so proud at her beloved's courage... Maan liking yash for not invading his privacy n may be also for his talking about Geet😉 hehe yash doing all the hw 😛 making Maan lazy... Hopefully Maan comes out of his shell soon like Yash😃 cont soon😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update ..

Geet ne toh band baja k rakh di hai us senior ki who dare to rag her ..

maan accompaniny yash to pari n geet's house ..so that yash can complete pari's challenge
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Posted: 11 years ago
GEET NE US SENIOR KI BAND BAJAA DI
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Anu..M...

Awesome update jeev
Loved it a lot
Awww Maan just remembering Geet with every nook and corner of the college😳 he is so smitten by her☺️ although he is ignoring his own feelings, he gets so much affected by her mere absence😉
But oh my god Geet is so naughty😆 So mischievious... Mainly infront of Maan as if she is using her naughtiness as a shield to hide her feelings for Maan😳
But oh my my Poor Senior🤣 he might be cursing his fate to have tried to rag the aafat ki pudiya geet🤣 lol geet n her tricks just badass😉 so she can control any liquid😉 aww yash finally overcoming his fear n pari so proud at her beloved's courage... Maan liking yash for not invading his privacy n may be also for his talking about Geet😉 hehe yash doing all the hw 😛 making Maan lazy... Hopefully Maan comes out of his shell soon like Yash😃 cont soon😳



pyaar ki jadoo se kab tak bachega
anyone in trouble she has to help na
one of the many liquid which is present in most of the elements
If he was interfering then he would have just escaped from there too
next one is ready you only have to know where to find that ;-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
am so late ... i know... sowieee...

the update was just superb!

naughty geets pranks was fun to read... kya chun chun ke badla liya hain... even yash a darpok one who is using maan as a sheild was nice...and maan too sticking with him mainly because he is getting a chance to be close to geet 😳 but kya abhi tak dono main baat nahi hui??😕

reply dene main, mein hi late ho gayi ... but ur next update is due... and am waiting... jaldi do😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 6
Surprise was the word Yash screamed making her squeal in shock but then she was happy to find her love there leaving his inhabitation self and visiting her.
"Yash is this the way you come. There is a calling bell which you could always use then why were you banging the door like that. You just scared the hell out of us." Pari growled on Yash.
Yash made a sorry face while he enquired "Geet is also here."
"Yes, she has not slept yet." Pari replied. "Hey Geet look Yash is here. You want to say hi."
"No... No... I mean yes hi Yash...You guys talk... I... I will be in back yard. "Said Geet b...b...bye
"I don't know why she gets scared suddenly of such little things." said Pari referring to Geet's action.
"Yash left a sigh once Geet left as he can have his little talk with Pari now without interruption. Now you will do as I say" Yash whispered.
Looking at them I thought they need a little more privacy so...
I left that place at once and started to move backwards when I heard something rather say some sound. That made me realised that the path I choose leads to the back yard of the house where Geet went. The thought that she is there was enough for me to move more faster my mind constantly warned me not to go and face at this time but when did mind had any say infront of this heart.
My luck was not with me today as suddenly there was lighting followed by a noisy thunder. Normally boys liked these situations where girls would be scared and cling to boys but here it was a different story as I despised rain. Seeing the pouring rain my legs frezzed at the place I was safe under the shelter in the pitch darkness where no one knew anyone would exist. Even in the most solitary life I have an angel who had descended from the heaven whom I could gaze till my hearts content.
Geet was in her light violet velvet suit stood admiring the sky above. I stood as far as possible but my eyes could view her from head to toe, I guess she was also standing below some shelter as there was not a drop of rain falling on her. She was not only admiring it but also waiting for the rain to fall as the moment she stretched her palm a drop fell on it, she did the same again and again collecting the drops of the rain in her palm. It looked as if the rain was waiting for the orders of her to fall. Once it was full she let them drop on the ground making the sound like pearls were falling off from the necklace as they didnt just fall but also they had another path to follow.
She was the commander in chief imposing the flow of rain. Slowly the drops of rain increased & made its way from her shoulders to her long silky hands gliding over them to reach the small little fingers of her just before they descended to reach there fellow droplets. If that was the sight I beheld unknown to her next set of her acts just made my insides move as molten lava.
The water which blessed themselves touching her forehead slid through the sides measuring the length of her sleek neck before they disappeared into the fabric. The view brought him of my revive giving me a reality check about my act. I was not supposed to look at her like this minutely. She has always hid behind the mask of a meek girl and now thinking noone is here she would have let those masks off her face.
She might have not been this free had she known about my presence here. But I didn't have it in me to turn back from her. This time I wanted her to decide and it would be easy on me to feel her rejection than turning back from her. With this decision I let my legs lead towards the magnetic pull.
I couldn't have stepped in rain too so I stood at the rim of the shelter making my presence known to her. Passing the message towards her clearly that she is not alone to let her barriers down and baring her oneself to me. She stood in the middle, hands out stretched to let the rain drench her. Even after making my presence evident she didn't deterred was she so involved in her own world that what is happening around, who is there beside her didn't matter or was she giving me a treat by letting me to witness her subtle movements of unparalleled grace.
Rain which had drenched her whole form gave a shiny effect to her. With a determination which none could stop her to express herself today neither the rain nor my presence. She bent her back in a semi circle swinging her hands in a way that looked like a white rainbow twinkling in the moon light. Was she dancing with rain or was rain dancing with her, was she following it or was that following her moves was all I could ponder about as she and rain matched steps with eachother.
Unknown to me "Geet" came out from my lips it came out just as a whisper and I doubt whether my own ears heard it or not. But as the name left my lips the rain just came to end like it was waiting for me to utter and it would stop and with not a drop of rain pouring her whole concentration turned to me. I stood there waiting for her reaction, would she walk away as I do or... I didn't know what to expect. She slowly closed the distance between us and stood right in front of me.
Ik baat honthon tak hai jo aayi nahin
Bas ankhon se hai jhaankti
Tumse kabhi, mujhse kabhi
Kuch lafz hain woh maangti
Jinko pahen ke honthon tak aa jaaye woh
Awaaz ki baahon mein baahein daalke ithlaaye woh
Lekin jo yeh ik baat hai
Ehsaas hi ehsaas hai
Khushboo si hai jaise hawa mein tairti
Khushboo jo be awaaz hai
Jiska pata tumko bhi hai
Jiski khabar mujhko bhi hai
Duniya se bhi chhupta nahin
Yeh jaane kaisa Raaz hai
English Translation
A thing that still hasn't come up to my lips and only peeks through my eyes,
It asks for words, sometimes from me and sometimes from you,
So that it can wear those words and come to the lips,
And so that it could be embraced by words..
But this thing is actually a feeling...only a feeling,
It's like a fragrance floating in the air,
Fragrance, which has no voice...and about which you know and I know too.
It is not hidden from the world, what kind of a secret it is?
{From the movie Zindagi Na Milegi Dubhara}
Her eyes held an unknown compassion which I could not understand. I felt a sudden chill spreading around me was it the dip in the temperature or was it her who was cooling my fire in me. My eyes closed for a brief second to hide the things which it may give away if I look deep into the blue ones it may questioned me anything. There were many things which my heart wanted to convey but words were just not enough to express them. Many emotions were binding me with you bring in a new flavour sweeping us into a different world. This is the riddle which could not be hidden within me or with in her or even the world.
I was still entranced in her when I felt her chilled hands touch my cheeks sending shiver down my body. It didn't even take a second to ignite the fire in me; it took lot of efforts to break the shackles to let my hand to stretch so that I could feel that creamy skin. She closed her eyes to engrave the feel of me on her hand, so did I wanted to engrave it. I was just an inch away when she trembled back and before I could comprehend anything or hold her she collapsed on the ground & like how the water gushes out the gates of the dam when they are opened, the rain poured out on her.
Waiting for likes & comments
Little disappointed with the likes & responses.
Let me know if you guys are not liking this will wrap it up in next 4-5 parts.
Previous: Part 5
Next : Part 7
Jeevana.
Edited by Jeevana. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
chalo ab indono ka touch tho karwaayi par yeh kya wo touch karthi hi behosh hogayi hai😲😆 aur baatein kaise karenge yeh dono😆
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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