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Jeevana

@Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: CutieTeju
Maneet.. first meeting.. atleast they came to face to face.. Aww.. Maan.. Ur pleasant beauty.. 😳😉nice start..

face to face kaha huvi hai ... abhi tho chori chori chupke chupke hai

thanks dear

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
beautiful update...

maan latoo on geet on first mulaakat itself...

will be waiting for more...

Thanks Lakshmi...

Pehli nazar mein Kaise jaado kar diya Tera ban baita hai Mera jiya

Originally posted by: spvd
part 1
nice start dear...
interesting...
cont soon dear...

Thanks Deepa

Originally posted by: sona-rai
Awesome:)

😃

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: Desire6
maan toh pehle nazar main hi lattu...hahaha...
beautiful start...

jeevu..
WAITIN for next part

Pehli nazar mein / Kaise jaado kar diya / Tera ban baita hai / Mera jiya 😉 😉

Thanks dear (I forgot your name)...

Originally posted by: DantaDeepa
lovely
keep it up

Thanks Deepa...kiske upar raku 😕😉

Originally posted by: COLOGY
totally new feel
loved the contrast between maan's thoughts n reality

waiting for the next part :))

Thanks dear...😆

bechara pura phaas gaya hai pyaar ke jaal maine ...

Originally posted by: leenukiguru
nice part

😛

Originally posted by: pravalika9291
awesome update

😃

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Originally posted by: ammu5
interesting start...

😃

Originally posted by: fantesy
awesome update

⭐️

Originally posted by: Ru_21
Superb

😛

Originally posted by: drashti10
awsme,maan latto in pehli najar..

haan 😆

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: custodian75
Totally different start.

Just getting into the story, so can't comment much except to say interesting and waiting to see what happens next.

Thanks Dear...

wait for more & more interesting things coming up 😉

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
Loved the way u introduced the characters!!
It was a beautiful part so calm n pleasant!!

Interesting waiting for the next !!😊

Thanks dear...

a serene part indeed...

wait for it

Originally posted by: rashmivaish
so ooo
it is the lovestory of fire and water

hmm might be interesting as both can't be one for a moment

they are neemy of eachother

i will now be waiting for love to be happened

Opposites attract right 😉

might be

yep there nature is bound to make them as enemies

huva na pyaar...

Pehli nazar mein / Kaise jaado kar diya / Tera ban baita hai / Mera jiya

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 11 years ago

#175

The description of nature was really the best part of d update.The way darkness,sea etc are described is just beauful.

And then d hero sees d heroine and time stops,Amazing.But d question is will d boy save d girl fm d seniors??????

Waiting for next update.

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aglaeca9

@aglaeca9

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Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Wow gr8 start
omg dat gal ws pari
eagerly waiting 4r nxt

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#177

oh man translation for poem thanks for it

it will help me out the narration was soo touchy and the way u used words just above the say of aesome must appreciate it

good one and tha man who is he hope he is not maan

if he is will beat you until blue up get ready

what she is not geet maan admiring some other girl oops no way

i am highly curious now updatesoon

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: Twilightsparkle
oh man translation for poem thanks for it
it will help me out the narration was soo touchy and the way u used words just above the say of aesome must appreciate it

good one and tha man who is he hope he is not maan

if he is will beat you until blue up get ready

what she is not geet maan admiring some other girl oops no way

i am highly curious now updatesoon

Welcome Poo 😛

Thank you 😃

which man do you think is Maan 😕

then will tell you whom he was admiring...

read again this first & understand na

then will give you next one 😉

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Jeevana

@Jeevana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
The description of nature was really the best part of d update.The way darkness,sea etc are described is just beauful.

And then d hero sees d heroine and time stops,Amazing.But d question is will d boy save d girl fm d seniors??????

Waiting for next update.

Thank you Sampa...

wait for your answers...

will give that soon 😛