MG- SS-The Mist-Thread 6 - UPDATED Pt 53/Pg 122/10 Dec ... ... ... ... - Page 44

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Posted: 11 years ago
BABIE... WILL COME IN 10 MIN
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

BABIE... WILL COME IN 10 MIN



😛 OK... ja,,😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
msk dr ji ban aye hei,,kabhi hd per ontmnt to kabhiii foot dressing,,,,😆
pam ki band bjiii,she welldeserved it,,,bt mujhe dout hei,,kute ki dum hei always tedhi hi rehegiii,,,
ab yeh ring ,,,maan ko yaad bhi nehii hogiii,,,,osm babie,,,,😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Kahan ho sab...??
priya bhi gayab..?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.












Part - 49





Maan left from there settling her properly in her settee and Geet drown in deep thought * Geet was very restless thinking over his changing behaviour * lots of questions were roaming in her mind and there was an argument between her mind and heart * from afternoon till now he was taking care of her * he skipped his office to drop her at mall then shopped with her patiently * he scolded Pam for talking nonsense about her * now taking care of her and i'm sure he is not faking * d care and worries in his behaviour were genuine but why he is doing all this ?

Does he really ashamed on his bad behaviour and feeling guilty ? It could be quite possible for a human being to react indignantly in that awful situation * he faced betrayal and his and his family honour was at stake , but he is still living in d memories of his love ... his first love . It's said that people never forget their first love.


We r forced to tie and there was no other option * he belonged to someone else and we r strangers then how could i think a normal behaviour from him... agar meri life bikhar gai hei to uski bhi to bikhri hei ... shayad mujhse kahin jyada * wo to shayad kisi ko apni life mei shamil hi nahi ker payega * kam se kam apni family ke sath to khush raha sakta hei * let him give a chance if he wanted to live a normal life . He is luckier than me having a loving and caring family.


Mujhe to na koi rishta suljha hua mila na ye zindgi ... sab kuch aadha -adhura . She was lost in her thoughts when Maan entered in d room and Nakul followed him with a tray * he placed that on table and moved back giving her a smile. Maan sat near her on d settee , prepared a plate and forward to her * Geet looked at her reluctantly .


Maan: Geet , no argument .. Please * he took her hand and placed that plate in that . He made his and started eating gesturing her to eat .


She didn't say anything and started eating quietly * her mind was still disturbed and confused over these changing circumstances . Maan gave some looks but find her lost in thoughts and taking her meal mechanically* he didn't like this quietness and wanted to talk to her but seeing her like this he kept quiet and thought ... kya hua achanak se ? etni ku chup hei ? Kahin Pam ki baat sun ker to dukhi nahi ? Kaise punchu , dekh bhi nahi rahi meri taraf .


Maan: Geet kuch aur logi ? She nodded in a NO.


Maan: dard jyada hei per mei? Again she nodded in a NO.


He looked at her confused ... kya ho gaya esse? Bole ku nahi rahi ?


Maan: coffee peeogi , Nakul ko bolu ? Again No and he helplessly looked at her.


Aapko peeni hei ? she asked without looking at him * she knew he too wanted coffee but made by her.


He beamed with her response ... hmmm , lekin akele nahi .. tumhe bhi sath dena hoga .. bolo manjoor ?


Geet looked at him and gave a faint smile .. mai banati hu and tried to stand up from her bed.


Maan: Geet tum rahane do , Nakul la dega ... Tumhe chot lagi hei.


Geet: nahi abhi theek hei , etni bhi jyada nahi lagi .. it's better now.


She came out and Maan came with if she need any help * she made coffee and handed him his mug saying .. i know u like this .


Maan: thanks Geet and Yes .. i love ur black coffee , he said with a cute smile and she felt that butterflies r moving in her tummy * giving him a faint smile she came in .


She felt jittery when he came close to her * her body was reacting against her will and she was feeling a change in her but didn't know d reason . She was very organised and calm few days back , but now why this restlessness without any reason ? she sat quietly and tried to divert her mind on IF but failed * she was looking at d screen blankly lost in her thought .


Maan noticed her lost state and became worried ... kya ho gaya isse ? Ku etni khoi - khoi si hei ?


Maan: Geet ... Geet .. but didn't get any response * he got up from his bed and came close to her * patted on her shoulder .. Geet .


She jerked and looked at him confused ... kya hua ?


Maan: wahi to mei jana chahata hu ki kya hua hei ? kahan khoi ho ? etni tense ku ho ?


Geet: tense .. nahi to , mai theek hu .


Maan: Geet agar kisi baat ko leker pareshaan ho to tum share ker sakti ho .


Geet: nahi essa kuch nahi hei , mai theek u , she replied with a fake smile. She herself was very confused and wanted to live alone to find out d answers of those questions which r nailing her mind.


He gave a brief look to her and tried to read her state .. No , she is hiding, something is bothering her.


Maan: Geet tum ... Please MK , i don't want to talk * she became tetchy with his trespassing .


Geet: please .. mujhe mere haal per chod do , matt karo meri etni care * nahi chahiye mujhe kuch bhi * mai khush hu apni akeli duniya mei * ku ker rahe ho tum ye sab ? nahi chahiye mujhe tumhari care * dur raho mujh se. Tears rolled down from her eyes * she looked at him painfully and pleaded .. matt aao mere paas , dur raho mujhse.


Maan startled with her outburst . ... dejectedly he came back and sat on his bed but his eyes were on her * she turned her side and lay down covering herself with a spread. He knew that she is crying but helplessly he was looking at her back . He was hurt , deeply hurt not because of her outburst but for her indifference . He rested his head against bed rest , closed his eyes to suppress his pain ... ku nahi kahati mujhe se kuch ? ku dur rahana chahati hei ? Ku etni dukhi hei ? Kya hua hei esse ... mai kaise jaanu , kaise samjhu eske dil ki baat ? He slept with a heavy heart .

Precap - Geet apologized and Maan ??? ...


Part - 50

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3832914/mg-ss-the-mist-thread-6-updated-pt-53-pg-122-10-dec?pn=78




Sorry for mistakes.

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😛 me ist,,,,,





asha hua ab maan geet ke pains ka karan janne ki koshish karega...
again gud one babie,nxt prt s haf century,,,,,cngrts in advance sweety,,,,👏
Edited by LILY111144 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part..
kbhi2 ho jata hai aise.. koi nai... maan smjhega!!!😳
Edited by Appy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor maan... he isn't understanding geet's dilemma and geet is unable to understand her growing feelings for Maan...
Edited by vibhashekhar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
mera lappy cheen gaya tha...

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