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JeweledCrown-

@JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#341

Yay back with the update , Riddhi suggestions were super . Let Miss. Parmar take control 😎

lets see how long Maan denies and puts up the resistance 😈

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JeweledCrown-

@JeweledCrown-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#342

Originally posted by: DancinFireflies
NEXT PART TONIGHT

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DancinFireflies

@DancinFireflies

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Posted: 11 years ago

#343

seduction on its way. Its so not easy to write😆

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#344

hi thanks 4 updating! superb update! Well written! Riddi explains to Geet that Maan loves her bt is afraid of losing her! he sees himself as an outsider! Geet gng after Maan! update soon! waiting 4 the seduction!

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DancinFireflies

@DancinFireflies

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Posted: 11 years ago

#345

Guys, update will be up tomorrow. Sorry, couldn't pull it together today. I've written and scrapped for the last few hours. Just not getting it right. And now my eyes are closing.

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punam2712

@punam2712

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#346

Go get your man, lady! Time for subtleties and coyness is past. Take charge. He wouldn't be able to resist long."

GIRLS SOMEHOW ALWAYS BOND BETTER THAT GUYS

AND THE ADVICE GIVEN BY RIDDHI IS SPOT ON

GO GET YOUR MAN GEET

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#347

I've been🤣 reafing 5 parts. Maan is being assaulted by geet 🤪totally crazy.

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kshubhangi

@kshubhangi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#348

Enjoyed each part. Brilliant

Continue soon

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JeweledCrown-

@JeweledCrown-

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#349

Originally posted by: JeweledCrown-
waiting

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#350

just finished reading all the parts..fabulous story.

loved the cute girl and her hero, and the way the childhood flashbacks were written from child/teenage Maaneet perspective..

I was rofling with Geet's craziness and antics for Maan 😆 and was amazed with the strong, brave and independent women she is now..in fact the whole humanity gang.

and there is past which has shaped them the way they are...even for Maan, his inferiority complex, fear of losing restricts him from expressing..but still he is there always to care for and help her..

and it's a practical advice from Riddhi to Geet..if he is unable to, it's Geet who needs to take control..waiting to see how Geet is going to make it happen and how Maaneet together deal with the stalker hunter..

pls continue soon..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 11 years ago