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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Onir
Congrats For Thread # 14 🤗

Bambi is here😃 Thanks Doc🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: dqno1

Bambi is here😃 Thanks Doc🤗

Late but will always come 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Onir
Late but will always come 😃

VM dekha?

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honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: dqno1

health is good, work is insane

update is long so may take time.. am thinking of posting it in 3 parts

ok do ur work...update , you can take tym...i dont wish to see it ending...so am very much ready to wait😃

3 parts...ook as you wish...whichever u r comfortable with...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: dqno1

VM dekha?

Nahi re ... abhi tak kal ka update padhna hai... phir teaser phir VM... 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Onir
Nahi re ... abhi tak kal ka update padhna hai... phir teaser phir VM... 😉

😆 the song is buzzing in my head for so long.. hopefully it will come out good

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

is there a need now to say that i love the update??? actually am fida on u avi😳 and with each update this only rises😳

love makes even the strongest person bow down👏... dev tara part was serene... the strong gal tara was so weak just thinking that dev may not be there in her life... and dev the perfect partner... when he saw that tara was weakening, he took step to bring back his strong tara!!

and the whole marriage scene... though the scene was of dev tara... bambi stole the show for me 😆... ur description of geet there standing mouth open ... and dev ne bowl of rice and roses pakda diya...i was just imaging that scene and could stop smiling...😃

but i loved the whole... how u described marriage by spirit...👏

maaneet... DD is hell bent on trying to push geet off... maanna padega... banda try mast kar raha hain... but kya faayda... even he couldnt rejoice his tasty fav dishes due to her...

His favorite dishes tasted like wood in his mouth.⭐️...

loved how geet went to him and asked him directly... bambi ... tujhe hi is tedhe DD ko seedha karna hain...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: dqno1

😆 the song is buzzing in my head for so long.. hopefully it will come out good

It will re.. itna tension mat le 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-
is there a need now to say that i love the update??? actually am fida on u avi😳 and with each update this only rises😳

love makes even the strongest person bow down👏... dev tara part was serene... the strong gal tara was so weak just thinking that dev may not be there in her life... and dev the perfect partner... when he saw that tara was weakening, he took step to bring back his strong tara!!

and the whole marriage scene... though the scene was of dev tara... bambi stole the show for me 😆... ur description of geet there standing mouth open ... and dev ne bowl of rice and roses pakda diya...i was just imaging that scene and could stop smiling...😃

but i loved the whole... how u described marriage by spirit...👏

maaneet... DD is hell bent on trying to push geet off... maanna padega... banda try mast kar raha hain... but kya faayda... even he couldnt rejoice his tasty fav dishes due to her...

His favorite dishes tasted like wood in his mouth.⭐️...

loved how geet went to him and asked him directly... bambi ... tujhe hi is tedhe DD ko seedha karna hain...😃

🤗

Glad you liked it.

DD sirf apne letter mein diya hua vachan nibha raha hai..

Chahe kuch bhi try karein wo uss se dur nahi reh paata hai...

Poor guy, Avi kitna sata rahi hai😆

Thanks Lakshmi😃