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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



hello ... how r u??

priya... aaj gayab kyu hain??



Hi lakshu...🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
jhaapppiisss yaro:)
Babbie update kab milay gi:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

jhaapppiisss yaro:)

Babbie update kab milay gi:)


sona... 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago




For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.














Part - 36




Mahinder was chocked with bolted emotions * his inner pain was visible in his red watery eyes * Rano sensed that something was very wrong * she shuddered with fear and came close to Mahinder * She touched his shoulder with her trumbling hand and with a jerk he hugged her from her waist and broke down hiding his face in her tummy. She was shocked with his action and held him close fearing in her heart * he was crying and pouring out his pain in tears for long * Rano was soothing him caressing his back and head , her eyes were also showering on their fate. After letting out his grief he parted and Rano wiped his face and lifted his face to look at her .

Rano: don't scare me more Mahi... kya hua hei bolo ?


Mahi: I'm a jinx Rano .. a curse .. for u and Guddu * i spoiled ur life and now Guddu's


Rano: no Mahi, essa matt kaho , kya hua hei ? Guddu kahan hai kaisi hei?


Mahinder explained everything to Rano from her childhood to marriage She was stunned and numb at her place. Mahinder hugged her looking her like this * he knew that she loves Guddu like her own daughter .


Rano : 4-5 saal ki thi jab usse dekha tha, aur aaj itni badi ho gai ki Zindgi ki kadwahaton(bitterness) ko jhel rahi hei. Mujhe to wahi pyaari si Guddu yaad hei jisse maine Army mess ke garden mei khelty aur hastey dekha tha , jiski hassi tumhare liye sab kuch thi. Fir tumne uske sath essa ku hone diya ... Apna to hum saha gaye , lekin uska kaise sahenge Mahi. Kya usse bhi humari tarah hi zindgi zeeni padegi .. Adhoori ... Akeli ?


Mahi: Yash's family loves her * they r very caring and responsible .


Rano: Aur Maan ? What about Maan , Mahi ? jab hum kisi aur ke bare mei nahi soch paye to kya Maan sochega? Wo kisi aur se pyaar kerta tha , kisi aur se shaadi kerne ja raha tha .. wo usse respect dega ? Usse wo jagah dega jo uski hei?


Both were looking at each other with countless questions .


Rano: tumne kabhi Guddu se pucha wo khush hei yanahi?


Mahi with creaky voice: wo mujhse baat nahi kerti Rano , kuch nahi kahati , she shut herself in a shell .


Both remained there hugging and consoling each other .


Rano: Mahi , mujhe usse dekhna hei


Mahi: hmmm.. theek hei .

KM .. in morning...


Maan was feeling better now and he thanked Geet for her care . They started their respective works * Geet left for her office after wishing GM to Dadima and Annie in their rooms * Maan was in his room and getting ready when Dadima entered there * he wished her and was surprised to see him in a cheerful mood .


Dadima: Maan hume aapse kuch baat kerni hei abhi .


Maan: ji Dadima bolo.


Dadima : it's about Geet's first Karwachoth * hum jantey hei ki usne ku haan ki hei , sifr humare liye * uss situation mei wo aur kahati bhi kya? Hum Geet se ab kuch bhi kahane ki himmat nahi rakhtey Maan.


Dadima's eyes became teary and she looked helplessly at Maan * Maan felt very bad seeing her like that he put his hand on hers .


Maan: Dadima , please aap dukhi matt hoiye .. I'm sorry ye sab ki wajah mei hu.


Dadima : nahi beta , ye dukh to sabke hisse ke hei . we can't change our fate. Geet is our saviour Maan aur wo hi sabse jyada dukh uttha rahi hei ,, hum sabke liye aur usse kya mil raha hei badle mei ... kuch nahi .. uski insecurity usse hum sabse durr ker rahi hei * Wo iss ghar aur isse judi kisi bhi cheej ko Apna nahi manti, kuch nahi leti humse Maan.


Maan: i knew Dadima , maine dekha hei.


Dadima : Maan uska pahale KC hei aur hum usse bahot si cheeje aur khushiyan dena chahatey hei jo usse nahi mili , lekin derrtey hei .. wo nahi legi . Wo humari Sargi nahi legi Maan. Hume aur Yash ko badi tention ho rahi hei , Gayatri sab kuch dekhna chahati hei aur bahot se rituals hei jo tum dono ko sath-sath kerne hai * hum kya karen? Tears flow down from her eyes and Maan's hearts cried to see her like this.


Maan: aap kya chahati hei ? Mujhe kaho ... mai Geet ko request ker lunga , usse mana lunga kaise bhi , lekin aap ro matt Dadima .. Please . aap ki khushi ke liye , apni iss family ke liye mai usse mana lunga .. i promise Dadima . aap jo chahati hei wo sab hoga .. bas aap dukhi matt ho.


Dadima : lekin hum aur Yash ye bhi nahi chahate ki Geet ko baar-baar force kiya jae compromise ke liye.


Maan became very upset with all these realities , he too was in fix , dinner ke lilye hi usse kaise manaya hei wo janta hei aur ab itna sab , wo bhi sabke samne,,, kaise agree karunga usse?


Maan: Dadima aap shant ho jaiye I'm sure wo aapko ya iss family ko kabhi nirash nahi karegi * aapko to ussper vishwash hei na to fir ku derti ho?


Dadima : hum jantey hei agar hum kahenge to wo na nahi kareki , lekin hum baar-baar usse kaise kahen ... Ye koi normal fast ya pooja nahi hei , Maan aap samajh nahi rahe hein .


Maan: Mei samjhta hun Dadima, mei usse manaunga ... Aap shant ho jaiye. Chaliye aap tayari kijiye , mai bhi office nikalta hun.


In office Maan got in meetings and other works and didn't get time to think matter . Dadima GD and Pam went for shopping * Annie and Meera were busy in their fall winter fashion show which was held in their college and students participate in that and shows their works. YSK and Dev were at new site.


Geet was in her office when she got a call on her office number from Mahinder * he complaint that why she was not picking her cell phone and she replied that she forgot her phone at home * he was talking to her and she was listening him quietly and at last replied.


Geet: Mujhe kya kerna hoga ?


Mahinder: tum mere sath market aa jao and select d things according to their choice and Rajji'll narrate u on phone. Mahinder ringed Rano to come at XYZ mall if she wanted to see Guddu.


Geet: OK , pick me after office and cut d call * she has all numbers in her cell ,only KM's no was in her office record * she searched that and called at KM no to informe Dadima that she will come lil late at home , but Nakul attended d call and informed her that Dadima was not at home , she gave him msg to convey her.


In eve Geet was at a mall with her dad for purchasing clothes and gifts for all d members . Rano came there at mall and met them in a casual way to Geet * she told that she and her dad were at same station coz she is also from Army* Geet met her with all respect and love and Rano was deeply touched with that * she came back after talking to her for few min. Rano was very happy to see her after many yrs.


Dadima was back in eve and she was waiting for Geet to show her d things she purchased for her. Maan,Dev and YSK were back * all were settled in living hall and chatting .Maan wanted to meet Geet so he came lil early today but she was not there . Dadima was becoming worried for Geet because she never come late * She tried her number many times but no reply. Geet came by private Cab that why Dadima was worried for her security when it was getting late. YSK too tried many times but d result was same.


Precap --- Maan yelled at Geet.


Part - 37

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Sorry for mistakes.
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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yaha par bhi main first aayi hoon


dadi became emotional and maan took responsible to convice geet for karwachauth dekhthe hai kaise manage kartha hai


ab yeh kya honewala hai geet coming late and maan gussa
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


Hi priya...🤗
how r u now...??😊
take care and drink coconut water.. it's too good for
stomach. 😛




hi babie

ab teek hai subah se sirf coconut water hi liya
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Posted: 11 years ago

hai sona... kahaan gayab ho jaathi ho???
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Posted: 11 years ago


yehlo sona phirse laal hogayi hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
aaj sab hai phir bhi koi nahi hai😡😡

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