MG(SS) A COLD BLOODED KILLER THREAD 1 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Rose.Mahek22

Congrtz Rose

wow

what a start 👏

me so happy to see vampire stroy from u

maan is attracted to Geet's blood

bechari geet not aware of his killer intentions 😭

pari is negative here 😡

what was about her brother thing? something is missing here.

poor he and his family

geet carefree girl but did i see her J here ?

over all

its interesting start and me sure it will be lovely experience for u too to write such story

best of luck with new work

will b waiting for further parts

Wow!!! Again awesome story by you🥳

Fantastic part

cant wait for read more.

nice start...
Omg maan is vampire..
Wat happened to geet's bro???
Precap is interesting...
Continue soon...
Waiting...

Originally posted by: LM1991

Very creepy! It gave me the shivers!!!

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

kal dona 😛

Originally posted by: drrose31

not possible for me .. am busy tomorrow

Originally posted by: tiakashyap

first of all woowww
wt a title
i liked it😉😉😆
hayee wt a story
u know vampire stories r my so fav
n geet felt attraction for him at the first sight
well i have listen that vampire's personality is to attract
aww me already in lv with that
bt geet b na first angry seeing pari with maanu
n wah she took her anger by slapping him
well wtever the reason of her slap bt she didnt like him with pari
oh ho😆😆
i wish i made it more long rather than 2-3 parts plzzz na
n ya one more thing dev also there
n wt u wrote all her friends treat her like a sister awww it was so sweet n funny to knowing that dev also treat her like sister bt really kya??😆😆
n her bro. wts the mystery behind his death
waiting 4 more

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

tho aaj hi de do 😆

Originally posted by: drrose31

you wish 😆