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Posted: 11 years ago

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Bhanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#655

Part-18

Aahhh...thats an unexpected one...gosh

Well, in the order of it...I was laughing after reading...Geet doesn't consider him God, not even human...awww😆😆

Glad that u gave the insight of Tabby here as to why she is different from others and Maan's pov too😳...we already kind of understand it, but when it comes from the writer in the story it makes us understand the depth of the character more clearly👍🏼

Erggghh this Sasha😡😡..hate her so very much

Geet is so insecure, sensitive and emotional yet try to be strong, stubborn just not to cry or show her weakness to others as this world will make fun of more and who can know it better than her, but Maan oh my god..what doesn't he ever understand and makes his decision...his anger and Geet's these acts to provoke him, but he doing everything always without knowing the matter is what I hate the most..he knows tabby a little bit at least I guess and seems he didn't learned anything from his past experiences

What Geet is good and I thoroughly enjoyed😆, but I guess she should have done it in a diff way, which I guess she will do soon in the future..more sophisticated in Maan's and Shasha's way😉

It defo was emotional to see tabby all alone and crying...I too cry along with her...so very sad😭😭 and Maan being so rude what eats me up a lot..he isn't any less, how bad he was

After everything, the way she turned to her shell, herself was so heart-wrenching and those lines...Apke phake hue tukde khana ka koi shock nahi hai mujhse...choked me😭...poor soul...so angry on Sasha and Maan

Precap is very scary and guess hell emotional...I guess the face-off where Maan makes it all the more worse and Tabby not gonna lie down and listen to it..and thus a complete mess...just can't imagine whats in store for us except waitinggg

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Bhanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#656

Teasers...omg lots gonna happen now

1st teaser padhne ke baad me thinking is it dadu of Maan...ahhhaaa it will be so good to read😛😳

Again got to see a glimpse of innocent Geet...a little girl who is very sad and at the same time trying to show that she is strong and of course powerful...oh I love tabby so much

2nd teaser...seems like the buddhu Maan is here..what again he realized his mistake of talking things in haste and doing all stuff around and came to pacify her...or is it when he says those dreadful words to geet that u mentioned in the precap

Waiting eagerly to know what all is gonna happen and the updating status just makes me more anxious to read already😛

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Mitu

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Posted: 11 years ago

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tabby999

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Posted: 11 years ago

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hi mitu

update is so nice ..i simply love this story now...one of ur best..

update is too small but can't say anything as u have already pointed out that u r busy with ur personal problems and u don't want to write too ...

i can only wish to god that whatever problems u r facing in ur personal life solve as early as possible and u start writing again with full zeal and happiness ...god bless u dear and solve ur problems .

rest now to update ..

geet showed her anger in wrong way ..but what can she do ..she was out of her control 😡...she can't bear her insult but rather than insult ..her insecurities were speaking aloud😭 ..in her heart she may be fearing that if one is pointing at her character today later can may more crop up with unwanted accuse against her 😒..

she in anger tore maan's file😲 result contract cancelled 🤢..and she is thrown out of kc😭..

two loggerheads together 🤪..so explosion toh hona tha🤣 ..ho gaya ...feeling bad ...

geet crying ..me too with her ..🥺

the new old uncleji is so sweet ❤️..awww giving good advice to geet ..👍🏼.

now waiting for geet to go back to maan ...🤗ask for forgiveness😉 ..and ask for solution 🤗..

plz maan zayada stubborn mat hona😎 ..geet innocent si thode zayada gusse walli girl hai but dil se toh acchi hai ..

plz jaldi se maaf karna tabby ko .❤️...

thanks for this update

waiting for next soon ...

Edited by tabby999 - 11 years ago