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sumaiyariya

@sumaiyariya

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#621

pic dekh ne me more confuse

tabby crying n maan bhi 😲

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Annu8193

@Annu8193

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#622

very nice part 18...

do continue soon...

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TheSunShine

@TheSunShine

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#623

Part 17: Geet irritating Maan. Her come backs are ultimate.

Part 18: Sasha is always after Geet and Maan does not bother to listen before punishing Geet

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friend_lee2006

@friend_lee2006

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#624

Nice part s 17 and 18
For me geet is fighters is alone in whole world but she still fight for herself
Maan always get angry but later he also get worried for her
And teaser is nice but what happened with geet who is the old man

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huma

@huma12.

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#625

Awwwsssmmm hate sasha and Some Where Maan Also

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#626

hi mitu ...

FINALLY ...read this story too ...

enjoyed it ..

best part was name of geet ..TABBY ..Its my IF name ..so i simply loved it ...

geet is orphan ..poor child faced so much and still facing ..

maan trying to be nice with her but he has lost his senses ..he made a grave mistake in spite of his knowledge that it is not easy for a girl to live alone in this world ..

when many shit men r behind girls who have family too ..how ugly men will not be after innocent geet ..

her insecurities r the major reason for behavior ..she can't trust anyone blindly as may be later she can be harmed by them ..

her behavior is justified to a great extent ..she is poor soul ..u needs proper care and love ..then one can easily see the transformation ...she is nice with pinky ..geet follow her what ever pinky tell her to do ..

geet insecure abt her past life ..may be someone try to moles her in her orphange..even when she wore suit all lustful eyes were on her ...

my heart really feel sad for geet ..and even brought tears to my eyes when she was ill at hostel ..no one was there to take care of her ...

maan is nice but his temper is too much ..though geet surpasses him but he must see how other idiots like sasha r doing and behaving with geet ..his unwanted punishment will not lead geet to sophestications but will make her more gloomy and sad ..

he must try to understand real problem of geet first ...

if he will get to know abt her lonely life and suffering then only he can judge her better ... i want to punish sasha this time

i enjoyed reading this story too mitu ..now waiting for u to update it

thank u for awesome story ...