GOD's WILL SS on MAANEET Part 4 on page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Intro of Story

Love is most precious gift for mankind by God but sometime we refuse to take this gift bcoz we thought Love always make us weak and take us far from reality. But its not like that and God always make us realize this so many time.

This is also story of Man who doesnt believe in love and hate that feeling but God's will take him there where he cant come back without his love...


Note : Hello frnds this is my first attampt to write on Maaneet and i am getting nervous after posting this bcoz i am not that flaunt and magical in writing story but still small try to revive Maaneet's Magical Love Journey.


Part 1 - Below

Part 2 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3804533/gods-will-ss-on-maaneet-part-4-on-page-4?pn=2

Part 3 & 4 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/95949565
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HEY I LIKE THE PROLOGUE
SEEMS DIFFERENT
GOD UMMM
DO CONTINUE IT👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 1

Geet!!! Geet !!! Putar jaldi karo warna late ho jayegi college jaane mei (Geet's father Mr Dhir Handa is calling her still not getting any response from her side then he enter in Geet's room where she was lost in her thought)

Dhir Handa - Putar aap ko kitni derr se bula raha hoon aur tum yahan ho then he made turn her towards him and shocked to see tears in her eyes.

Dhir Handa - Kya hua putar ji aap ro kyu rahe ho.

Geet is sobbing and hugging his father

Geet - Papaji mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai.

Dhir Handa - Magar kyu putar ??

Geet - Mein itne bade college aur itne saare log ke beech mein kho gayi toh.

Mr. Handa smiled and said

Putarji aap aisa kyu soch rahe ho aapke papa aap ko kabhi khone nahi denge aur aap ko apne Papaji par bharosa hai na. Mr. Handa broke the hug and made her to look at him.

Geet - Papaji, hum toh chote sehar se hai aur itne bade college mei ... Meine toh aaj tak college nahi dekh bhi nahi phir aaj ek dum se itne bade college mein jaana.

Putarji aapko pata hai mein bhi pehel aisa hi sochta tha, mein kaise akele aapko sambhal paunga aapki Maa ke jaane ke baad par dekho aaj kya aapko apne papaji se koi shikayat hai.

Geet nodded her head said aap dunia ke sabse aaj papaji ho and then Mr. Hand replied aur aap sabse pyari aur bohot jayad aachi putarji ho.

Mr. Handa and Geet reached at college and completed all admission formalities.

Next week her class will start and her journey for magical love life too.


Next Part - Maan's entry




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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats dear for first story😊
liked the first part😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww the first part is cute
first i thought y geet crying bt soon relieved that she was just nervous 😆😆
bt her dad made her understand
so sweet part
now Tia waitign 4 my maanu's entry
ps - hope u dont mind me commenting on ur story
as im uninvited😆😆😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww!!!!
Amazing prologue...
Loved part 1
waiting 4 next
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 2

KHURANA MANSION


Dadimaa - Mery !! Mery !!

Mery(Maid) - Yes Mam

Dadimaa - Info Maan that I want to have lunch with him today.

Mery - Ok Mam I'll info him.

Dadimaa - Are Geet and Mr. Handa back from College??

Mery - Yes Mam !! They have just arrived at outhouse.

Dadimaa - Ok !! Call them too on lunch time.

Mery - Ok Mam

Dadimaa - Ok !!! Now Go


KHURANA CONSTRUCTION

MSK is Sipping his coffee.

Adi (Nervously asking) - Ss..irr Dadimaa wants to have lunch with you !!!! Caaan i cancel the meeting with Aroras.

MSK - No !!!!

Adi - O kkk Sir !!!

MSK (Sternly said) - Send Ayesha with blue prints.

Adi - Ok Si rrr !!!

MSK - Fast !!!!

Adi run away after hearing Maan's angry voice.

Adi - Ayesha Maan sir is calling with Aroras's building blue prints.

Ayesha - Ok Adi !!!


*MSK CABIN*

MSK - Ayesha !!! Show me blue prints

Ayesha - Sure Sir !! Here it is.

Maan's phone is ringing at same time and see caller ID.

MSK - I have lots of Dadimaa plz i cant come.

Dadimaa - Ok Maan fine !!! I will not disturb you and will not have my lunch either too and she cutted the call.

MSK - Ayesha !!! Handle today's meeting with Adi.

Ayesha got confuse but didnt dare to ask anything for her gud sake.


*KHURANA MANSION*

Dhir Handa - Thank you Beeji agar aap na hoti mein kaise itne bade college mein Geet admission nahi karva pata.

Dadimaa - Dhir !!! Geet aapki nahi meri bhi beti hai aur mera haq banta hai uss par. Waise meri gudiya hai kaha par.

Dhir Handa - Ji wo thoda outhouse mein khana bana rahi hai.

Dadimaa - Khana ?? Par humne Mery se kaha tha ki aaj lunch aap humare sath karenge.

Dhir Handa - Ji unhone mujhe bataya wo mein ussi silsile mein aap se maafi magane aaya tha. Meine aur Geet aapke sath lunch nahi kar payenge.

Dadimaa - Magar kyu Dhir ??


Next Part - Geet and Maan😳




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank You Note

Thank you guys for liking my story and beautiful comment and feeling blessed🤗

I usually update through my cell so sorry for short updates but i will update reguler when i get free after few days.

Again Thank You So Much.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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me first 😆😆😆
aww first glimpses om my maanu hayee
i lv his rude n arrogant avtaar
uff daddi ke saath lucnh ke liye b itna nakra n appointment😆😆
so geet n her add living with khurana bt how they relate to them
n y refuse to lunch with them
me already curious
n waiting to see my maaneet together😉
lvd it

Edited by tiakashyap - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey sweets i think u should post ur ff on daily update thread
this way ur ff can catch other maaneetiens attention😉
here is the link

Daily Updates Thread


Edited by tiakashyap - 11 years ago

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