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Posted: 11 years ago
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babie ,,mona updtt kar do ,,,,mein knhiii bina rd kare nareh jaun

raat ko neend bhiii nehiii ayegiii,,,,,,rehem karo mujh per,,,,😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




(This FF i update daily so please don't wait for Pm.. please do check thread yourself, it's my kind request to all )



Part 50


Geet was circumstantially invited in this event so that she couldn't participate with full command. She couldn't understand what was happening her. Why the world she had been living in, seemed leaving behind and a feel of flying in open sky, runs to cover her inactive mind. Why everything inside her body seemed moving, why no sound of environs she could have heard but relishing only one sound inside and that was song of her own fast running heartbeats. Her breath mingled with his. It was new, it was so fresh experience so she couldn't have defined this properly but it felt pleasurable for sure. The touch of his mouth tasted differently yet it felt an extraordinary example of his love.

Maan moved back after few minutes. He was exhausting and so was Geet. She couldn't open her eyes, was still pulled in pioneer of passion. Maan cupped her face for getting assured, was she alright? Her face was red and lips were swollen. He smiled, it was the first time he had marked his right over her so confidently and she didn't objected. Nothing could be better start than this. He wanted her to open eyes and see him but didn't command. He couldn't force her for everything, whatever he had, was much more what had been expected from life. Geet was back from open sky to the ground and now she was hesitated to face him. She knew what his eyes would have been keeping inside for her and that alarmed her. She didn't have spirit to face his teasing gaze. It was her first kiss and she was shied.

"How you feeling'

His voice hit her face. Geet was waffled to reply. She swung face side, hiding from his eyes. She was smiling in her own way which displayed the pleasure she had gotten but couldn't describe it. She moved to go up but Maan blocked her way out. His rigid hand caught the corner of her Dupatta when she was hurrying up to leave. Shockingly Geet held the rest material over her chest.

Geet was anticipating in farther when she felt his arms encircling around her waist from back. She held her breath inside. After their intimate episode his touch interrupted the total function of her bodily senses. And then she felt warm air coming out from his mouth which collide with her cheek,

"You can't leave. You haven't beat the challenge yet'

Now this surprised her. After spending that closeness still he was thinking about her confession! "But I had confessed already', she thought. His becoming perverse now drew her to become same. "How can he do this to me?

Maan was sure she would've been begun thinking plans; that what he wanted. He had gotten her weak point and just started loving to annoy her, seeing her puffy face.

Geet started removing his hold, "Maan leave me. I've to go' and her voice was not at all, soften. She was getting devilled. "leave me!!!' but his hold was firm intentionally. And then she pinched his hand with all strength. Maan immediately left her shaking his hand groaning and getting chance she hurried to go out.

"Geet, you devil!!' he chased her but before she had fasten hasp outside locking him in room. Maan was shocked. "Geet, I'll not leave you heard me!!!'

She laughed catching breathe, resting head on door from outside. She could hear him muttering in anger. "You're so dead Geet!!'

Geet was scaring enough knowing well, he will not leave her once after coming out but for now, she was safe. She got fair time to hold her senses, to balance the gone heartbeats.

"Open the door otherwise .. you're so dead Geet!!!', Maan banged on door furiously. She was laughing yet was shivering with the intimacy she had experienced inside. At same time someone rang the door bell. Geet startled with sudden sound and so was Maan.

"Geet don't open before looking well who is it!!', he shouted. His over protective consciousness awoke, thinking how carefree she is. Geet nodded and without reply rushed to unfasten the door. It was Panna. Both the girls heard Maan shouting from up but Panna couldn't hear Maan clear. She was shocked to see Geet state; she was breathless, her face was red and swollen and her hair was totally mess.

"Geet what happened? Why are you panting and where is your Duappta!!'

Immediately Geet hand reached to neck to be found that her Dupatta was gone. She understood must be in while, running away from Maan it would have fallen in room. She remained silent, couldn't find words to reply. Geet hadn't expected Panna. She was still trying to cope up with the situation and at same time Maan yelled once more time, making Panna narrowing her forehead in frown.

"What's happening Geet' she was worried. Geet silence was confounding her mind. Panna had already doubt on Maan intention, as how he had convinced Geet to let him stay there, in her house, when her parents were away and now finding Geet disordered, everything was pointing toward wrong direction

"Shall I call police??'

"No!!' Geet blurted out. Panna looked her suspiciously.

"Don't tell me Geet that you both were romancing and that is why you are looking worn out and tensed and panting and Maan screaming from up. By the way what you did with him that he has to shout'

"Um.. he is locked, upstairs' She couldn't meet eyes with her.

Panna moved hand in air in disbelief. "And still you are saying not to call anyone? I don't believe you Geet'

"No Panna you are assuming everything wrong'

"Ok, fine, I accept I'm assuming things wrong but will you tell me Geet, what the entire matter is!!

Geet bumbled with words that which part of their moment should reveal to make Panna assure there was nothing to worry about. Looking her flushed Panna guessed her discomfort. She hold Geet hand keeping calm,

"Geet, relax, don't be nervous. I'm not asking you about what you both were doing. I just want to be sure that you are alright. I was worried for you yaar'

Geet hugged her instantly. She was glad to have Panna as friend. "I'm completely fine Panna', she spoke softly. Panna could sense rejoice in her voice. She nodded in approval. Maan was still anticipating thinking who it was, but he couldn't shout. He couldn't give hint of his being there with Geet and so softly he knocked on door, just to get Geet attention back on him.

Girls smiled looking each other. Panna was indeed very happy to see Geet glowing face but still somewhere she was not completely convinced. But she didn't want Geet to ask it. She knew, Geet would take Maan favor and so she thought an idea to test Maan intention and his thought about Geet. She whispered something in Geet's ear.

"No panna, I can't', Geet denied imaginings Maan temper but Panna made her agree, saying it will be good fun. Geet had to nod. Both started climbing stairs up slowly.

"Baba, how was your trip?' Geet spoke little loud, so that Maan could hear her easily. "Baba why are you going upstairs,?'

Both giggle thinking Maan must be trying to hide somewhere, thinking it was Mohan and Jagan who had come. Panna altered her voice and spoke, he heard someone is staying in home with you.

"No Papa I'm alone here' Geet cried. "Uncle please you tell na Baba how can anyone stays here with me. I was all alone!!'

And then Maan heard door was getting unfastened. Geet prayed God to save her from his anger later. Both giggled guessing Maan would have hidden and they walked in straightway. Both surprised to find Maan in front of them, stood in attitude with crossing arms across his broad chest. He was wearing white cotton crisped shirt with black formal pants. His hair was well combed. There was an extraordinary calmness was casting over his face that amazed Geet. She had mostly seen his naughty side and this rigid posture impressed her. She smiled, thinking he didn't try to be hiding out, she was pleased in fact. Geet turned toward Panna feeling proud when found her gaping over Maan with frozen eyes which, she didn't like.




Precap: (Same 😛) ''Miss Panna, I'm not responsible to clear doubt of any person outside from Geet and my family'' Maan announced



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Posted: 11 years ago
#43




congrats on the half century dear👏

mein first aayiii

even though they kissed, maan is still to hear that 3 words from her!!!

geet kya muhurat nikaalne waaali hain???😆

i loved panna... though she came now as a haddi... but still she is a tru friend of geet... worrying for geet!!!! but was she drooling over maan??😲


Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44


kar di ..uper dekho 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites



kar di ..uper dekho 😛

lov u sweety,,,,cngrts 4 half century,,,,nd its super dupr 50th prtmaneet mmnts r supr,,,panna nd geet maan ko nehi jaante,,,,😆abhi panna ki band bjayega,,,,Tongue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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achha suno.. kal di aayegi 1 din ke liye ..toh cant say sure mai aa paaungi ya nahi .. jaisa bhi hoga bata dungi
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
congo for new thread
amazing update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
awesome part
loved it
geet pinched his hand and ran away from the room locking the door
panna came and saw the flushed look of geet and asked her why is she looking like that
nice precap maan told panna that he is not answerable to anyone who or not from his and geet family
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

lov u sweety,,,,cngrts 4 half century,,,,nd its super dupr 50th prtmaneet mmnts r supr,,,panna nd geet maan ko nehi jaante,,,,😆abhi panna ki band bjayega,,,,😛



geet ko toh panna ne fasaya 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
awsum update ,deir first kiss ws so beautifully written...
precap is interesting
loving it...

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