INNOCENT FLOWER-UPDATED PT 18 PG 116 ON 18-03-2019 - Page 31

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-2

Start with a shocker...pata nahi Maan ko kaise phasa diya😆...awww my bichara Maan, aap unhe pareshaan kar rahe ho, not fair😡😆


Loved the guys a lot yaar😉...uff their friendship is cool...me toh all 🤣 with Dev's condition

Its always nice to read Maneet as children and Geet's innocence adds so much beauty to it yaar...its wonderful...and the same with all those 3 cutiepies being with each other and so understanding at that age😳

Uff hayee how I wish that its Maan she is talking about, but the age difference...I wonder who it is

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
geet was so happy to achanak se kya hua??
y she is crying!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
updating

anyone here ???????????/😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

RECAP

Present

Meanwhile Maan was feeling suddenly like he has done something wrong, the ink on the paper was spread and he knew that it was her tears..

sometimes Maan too feel that why does he feel this much connected to her..
why does he get worried towards her...
and what was wrong he just advised her to be vigilant..
was his letter and her tears are cause of that guy Varun...
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.
. questions...questions... and questions...

Past

Geet pasted the letter and held the empty envelope.She dint know the address and cutely saw around her.She walked towards the hall holding the letter when she heard her relatives speaking.On relative was searching something in directory and he asked,"Can i get the address from the directory?"Another replied,"Ofcourse along with phone number!"Geet widened her eyes and she got the idea.She saw them getting the address and waited for them to clear the hall.When the hall was empty,Geet took the phone directory and ran into her room.She closed the door and sat to search the address.Geet thought,"I dont know the name of godji!How do i send the letter to him?"She searched the address when she saw an advertisement or rather say the name of residence which resembled the word GOD which was for sale.She dint read the advertisement clearly when she got the word GOD.She wrote the address happily and posted it next morning.

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PART 04

PRESENT

It was Maan's dilemma or his heart that was now beating for the girl.. the unknown stranger ..somewhere deep within the small small corners of his heart she is residing ..her cute talks her everyday routine ..everyday routines till she has started writing .. the clean and crisp writing that has changed from the baby formation of words.. her tears that she wrote sometimes everything meant a lot to him.. it was ever her plea to take care of her mom or her insecurities when she didn't understand her feeling..he was always there for the girl who was his heart and mind.. she was in his mind his soul just like she is deeply absorbed in his veins just like the blood..

Karan's words were haunting him..well the stupid friend of his knew that he is in love he carelessly mocked him , even Rudra supported and he too teased him...

AT THE CAFE..

(continuation of the conversation)

Maan : she's in love ..

The faded color of MSK's face told everything to the genius friends of him.. there was a deadly expression on Maan's face that was telling that he was on the verge of loosing something ..well who is he kidding he loves her , feels for her.. there isn't any other girl whom he had confided himself like her..he knows her each and every details..he can even blindly tell her that she is the one of the most beautiful in this world..well sometimes he thinks off how she appears to be.. but the next moment he always shrugs off the thought just like that

AFTER TWO DAYS...

Maan was alone in his study.. though still his heart was restless but he knew that she will be waiting for his answer .. it was like always that he wont delay in sending his answers and this was the ritual that was started when Maan had got the first letter and he couldn't still come out of that second letter that was having some candies along with the letter that baby Geet had sent to him .. he could literally tell her happiness on receiving his letter that was well reflected in the baby handwriting ..and today he was writing this letter as if his life depends on this letter only...he dint wanted Geet to get painful life and today he was understanding little after little slowly that her pain makes him feel pain.

DEAR GEET

Love is something you cannot explain by seeing anyone..you like the guy and having someone close to your heart is something that feels you contented but if its your attraction and infatuation than you still have to go way far to get someone who you can consider as yours...

Just give your attraction a chance but try not to flow in the emotions that will make you drown in your attraction.. if its your love it wont let you feel wrong.. your heart and mind will be in your control telling you same if the person is for you...

DONOT PROCEED IF YOUR HEART AND SOUL DOESN'T AGREE WITH WHAT YOU THINK ...WITH WHAT YOU FEEL.. LET LEAVE SOME DECISIONS ON DESTINY ...

Maan dropped the pen , though he wanted to write hell a lot telling her clearing to stay away from who ever she like ... but how can he hurt a baby princess heart ..she is so naive and somewhere he has written enough that will keep her away from the guy.. maan desperately wanted to know about the guy but she haven't written anything about him.. or he would have the guy's janam kundli right now...

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Maan came out of the reverie and took out a purple envelope that was having same patterns and a white rose that for the first time he wanted to sent ..

The stark and crisp white paper was having his red letters that will console her but he would love to mark with the words that will reduce his anxiety but certainly her problem was way too big for him, for his restless heart .. it was just not his heart but even his senses betrayed her after reading her letter and then that nightmare...

It was midnight and a man got up sweating badly.He called a name,"Geet!"He wiped the sweat from his hands and messed his hairs and saw around him.He got up and poured some water to the glass and took a sip.The cool water calmed his nerves.He was scared of something and he knew the reason as he had received her letter.It was so painful letter where he saw smudges of letters.He felt as if his heart has been squeezed by someone seeing that painful letter.Reading the letter,part of his mind declared to say that he's not god but is a normal human being and part of his mind stopped him thinking how she'll takes that.He cant see the accusing eyes through letter.He would feel that she's accusing her in front of him.He dint wanted that but still there is the mistake which has been done from Geet and she was blaming Maan.But one good thing had happened that she had followed his advise and had stayed away from her lover which made her to see that guy's true colors and her father too.Everyone dint blame her as they knew that she's naive but the guilt which she felt and the ego in which she dint see his true colors and showed blind trust made her cry continuously.

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It was weekend , but she was not in her usual self..her eyes were red ... and still tears were brimming in her eyes .. still she was feeling aloof and alone..
Geet quickly took a red color ink pot and dipped it in her feather pen she was crying and her tears were soaking the sheet moreover she wants to fight with her godji , she wants to ask him..she wants to say so many thing to him...
the guy she liked and why did he not say her that ...
she was angrily looking wiping her tears with her palms and sniffling...


Geet just like she writes when she is upset started writing

i am angry on you..why didn't you said this.. she was feeling heart broken.. and she wrote...

MY DEAR GOD..

No no ..she put a big black line on the red color striking it.. and just wrote..

GOD

Why didn't you tell me .. you said that he's not the right guy.He...he kissed me god and i feel disgusted.Is this the feeling of love which makes me disgusted?He kissed me forcefully and i ran from there becoz he hit me for not giving myself to him.I hate him god and he even told me that am not virgin in front of my family.Do u know how much i was humiliated?Waise what is the meaning of Virgin god?He humiliated me and u...u saw this silently whatever happened...u dint came to save me...my father says that god help us always from one or the other way and makes his presence true.

But u dint come to save me.Mein aapse katti hoon...mein aapse baat nahin karoongi!Yeh meri last letter hogi samjhe aap?

Geet

Reading her letter Maan was so hurt.His instinct knew what will be her future with that guy and had warned her indirectly.But she dint understand that & had took Maan wrongly which made Maan so much hurt.His eyes became moist becoz of her accuse.The way she accused him as if he was at fault made him feel so much pain.Moreover he slept like that with those thoughts and had seen a nightmare which made his entire existence to shake.He had dreamt of her death.He had not seen her face but had imagined her from the body only.He was wondering himself how she will be seen hearing his racing heartbeat and that thought made his lips widen with a small smile.He had a picture in his mind of her and had always imagined her like that only.But her accuse made him sad.When he got letter from her for the first time his mind had said to throw it as a junk mail.But seeing the sweetness in that letter his heart has been captured.He had got to know that the girl was naive and innocent and he always fulfilled her wishes.If it is buying her favourite dress or any other thing and today what she expected has been snatched from her.The happiness which he gave her indirectly and felt peace by fulfilling her wishes made him happy but today everything has been came to the halt.She had said that she dont want anything from him and she dont ask anything from him.

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PAST

Next Day

A small boy of abt 10 yrs came back to his new home after having an drill session in his school.He had one free period after that session so he came to have breakfast.When he entered then he saw a servant standing there with confused look holding numerous mails.That little boy had dark chocolate eyes and went towards the servant and asked with gentle voice,"Nakul kaka,what r u doing here standing?"Nakul said still confused,"Maan baba,am confused that from where this letter came!"Maan looked towards the pink envelope and the fruity smell which was coming from it made him slightly attracted and said,"Nakul kaka,u give that letter to me.I will see to that!"Nakul gave the letter and went away.Maan was so curious to know so he went to his room and threw his football shaped bag on his bed and sat to read the letter.After reading the letter he felt she's naive and she has lost her mother recently.Somewhere he pitied her and his courage budded to answer her back.

From that time,they became god and deity...Geet was his deity and Maan was her god.She started to share everything with him and asked his advise which he was more than happy to give to her.



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disappointed with the likes

well what to say .. this ff will be finished in more ten parts max.


Edited by maangeet9387 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yeppiee me first
awesome update
oo maan got to know about his feeling regarding geet , he got to know that he is in love with his innocent angel bu what to do maan ko uske naam ke alawa aur kuch bhi nahi pata nd when he got to know that geet have some feeling for someone, he was sad nd restless bcoz maan yeh nahi pata laga sakta ki woh ladka kaun hai kaisa hai aur geet se pyaar karta hai ki nahi but maan tried to make geet understand to stay away from that guy but geet ko samjh nahi aaya nd when that guy forcefully kissed her nd humiliated in front of her family geet apne god ji se naraz ho gayi nd said that she will not write more letter onward nd reading that maan was also hurt nd sad thinking of her accusation of not telling her about that guy properly but geet tu hi itni naive hai ki maan ki baat samjh hi nahi payi nd maan nightmare was very bad plz usse sach mat hone dena

past

dear one confusion in second update u wrote when maan received the letter his age was 8 but in this update u showed him 10 year old boy😕
nd dear i m still not able to understand how letter reached to KM

Edited by lovesia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update...
maan accepted that he loves geet...
maan is restless after reading geet's latter n abt her interest in the boy...
maan tried to warn her bt geet didnt understand...
that guy forcefully kissed geet humilated her in front of her family...
geet is sad n angry with her god...
she wrote a latter n told her god she will not write from next time...
maan is sad n hurt after reading the latter...
so geet send her first latter when maan was 10...

Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic update dear :)

loved their relation through letters :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

Yeppiee me first

awesome update
oo maan got to know about his feeling regarding geet , he got to know that he is in love with his innocent angel bu what to do maan ko uske naam ke alawa aur kuch bhi nahi pata nd when he got to know that geet have some feeling for someone, he was sad nd restless bcoz maan yeh nahi pata laga sakta ki woh ladka kaun hai kaisa hai aur geet se pyaar karta hai ki nahi but maan tried to make geet understand to stay away from that guy but geet ko samjh nahi aaya nd when that guy forcefully kissed her nd humiliated in front of her family geet apne god ji se naraz ho gayi nd said that she will not write more letter onward nd reading that maan was also hurt nd sad thinking of her accusation of not telling her about that guy properly but geet tu hi itni naive hai ki maan ki baat samjh hi nahi payi nd maan nightmare was very bad plz usse sach mat hone dena

past

dear one confusion in second update u wrote when maan received the letter his age was ten but in this update u showed him 10 year old boy😕
nd dear i m still not able to understand how letter reached to KM



lolllzzz
hey regarding first letter geet ne directory se some random address liya that matched KM and there it landed in MSK's heart
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeet9387



lolllzzz
hey regarding first letter geet ne directory se some random address liya that matched KM and there it landed in MSK's heart


letter pahuncha bhi toh geet ke sasural hi pahuncha aur woh bhi uske future would be ke paas😆

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