INNOCENT FLOWER-UPDATED PT 18 PG 116 ON 18-03-2019 - Page 20

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice teaser
Geet is really cutipie
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Ok. Will wait.
Al d best for exam.

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Edited by maangeet9387 - 11 years ago
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Note-Sorry guys for manipulating the ages between maan and geet so here is the correct age Maan when he recieved Geet's letter on that time he was 8 and geet was 5.



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Geet asked innocently,"Is it?Mohinder nodded when she said,"No..am not gonna cry..am gonna eat,study and play correctly.I wont cry further remembering mumma...and is godji gonna take care of my mumma,papa?"Mohinder said kissing her forehead,"Yes dear!"

Geet St:Then am gonna write the letter to godji every week to get to know abt mumma!

From this hope only Geet had started writing letter to god.

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PART 02

Present

Khurana Mansion

Destiny...Fate...when we try to search the meaning of this in dictionary then we only get the answer but not trust.This word gives a strong belief for whom have trust in this who have experience on this.May be Geet's fate is shaping to meet her dream boy which she had mentioned in her last month's letter to her godji.Maan was disturbed becoz of that letter only which he was thinking impatiently.Till now he had fulfilled all her small small wishes from one or the other media.But this one is somewhat a very difficult wish which he cant fulfill.Moreover his heart was feeling restlessness.He felt his heart has been squeezed from the time he had read that letter.He was wishing her happiness only then how come he cant able to fulfill this wish.May be he cant understand what his heart is saying.Sometimes we wont listen to our heart when we were abt to do good to others and this wish was definitely making him very disturbed.

(Guys this is the continuation of the letter which is given from the prologue of this FF)

My Dear God,

Today i passed my graduation with distinction.I thought i cant pass it but god ur encouragement gave me hope.I know that my family encourages me but whatever they do i cant give self-encouragement.Am not that practised but still ur strength made me pass.Thank u sooo much god *smooches*(For Maan was embarassed..he composed and continued)Today pinky was flustered as she was called as hippo.How come she becomes flustered when people see a pink hippo munching chips always?(A small smile crept on his M shaped lips)Do u know god today i got to know how to use the bubble spray!(Maan racked his brain,what is bubble spray and he read further)Dont u know what is bubble spray?I'll tell u.It is a type of spray in which soap water will be filled and blew it to get soap bubble...that's bubble spray!(reading this Maan smiled thinking how much she's innocent)I want to tell u something god...

...Am in love with a guy...he's also from my class only and he's so handsome god...can u tell me this boy is for me...is he my destiny?

This question was bugging his mind...how can he say that when he's not god...till today he was fulfilling all her wishes in the name of god and was answering every questions in the name of god then how can he say that the boy is the destiny of her.Some restlessness and insecurity was filling his heart...he was thinking if he says yes and then the boy becomes bad to her and she leads her life in sorrow then?He cant see her tearful eyes.What an irony...the girl he never seen from the day of her letter he received cant able to tolerate her tearful face.This had made him so occupied that he dint even see when his younger brother Dev came and started his exercise in gym.

Dev entered the gym and looked at his brother he was lost thinking about of something ..well first dev thought that it was usual new KC's project.. or some girls who must be crazy fans of his bro... but again he thought that bro and girls..A BIG NO... girls will get scared of his big big eyes.. is eyes always scare the poor girls... he sometimes wondered that who will be the lucky angel for whom his brother will ready to change himself...

Dev went and started doing the push ups..and it was almost twenty minutes that he had started doing exercise and his brother was silent..

Dev st : silence thrills but kills..this case is well applied on maan bro..come on dev ask him..may be he will answer you...

Dev : umm..bro can I help you..

Maan turned around and looked at his brother , it was unusual for him to share his worries or insecurities with anyone.. and his is related to geet and he cant spit infront of dev .. he is big mouthed person.. he cant take risk...

Maan shrugged off the thoughts and asked him to continue his workout...

Maan : there is nothing dev I am just leaving , you just continue ...

Dev st : why bro is behaving differently..there is something wrong...

He was going to ask when maan's cell ringed he picked up and it was karan ...

Karan : hey dude

Maan: karan , this early are you alright .. did you have fight with kritika or ..before maan could continue rudra too connected to the..now they were on the conference call...

Rudra: yes, tell na karan ...

Karan who was listening to his good for nothing friends looked at the phone and then with his greeted teeth answered them...

Karan : believe me guys .. let your girls come I am not going to leave any chance .. and for your kind information I don't fight with kritika..she always does...

Rudra: let me ask her ..what say maan ...

Maan : yup why not after she is bearing Mr akdu...

Dev who was listening to everything was suddenly fell on the ground with the impact maan came towards him..his hand was having a small cut..

Dev kept his hand on maan's forehead and asked him...

Dev : bhai are you ok.. I mean you are teasing karan bhai... seriously tell me I will call the doctor right now..he said with the worry etched face..

Maan frowned and left him making him fall and karan and rudra were laughing from the other side...

Maan : shut up dev..use your brains sometime...

Karan /rudra : are why are you scolding dev he is saying the truth ... and now listen..we are meeting in an hour at XYZ place..lets hang out together its been a long time...

Maan : no I am having work...

Karan : mr workolic just come ..dont make us drag you from KM...

Maan : karan dare you...

Rudra : he is right maan..meet you..now hurry up...bye

Maan st : let it be..may be they can help me with geet's problems...

Past

A man in his late forties came and kissed her forehead ... She snuggled close to her teddies clutching her photo frame close to herself like protecting that only memory from the mean world ... The man looked at her and kissed her forehead waiting for her to open her eyes...She opened her eyes which was honey brown and was almond eyes.She looked up and saw the man and said,"Good morning papa!"Mohinder kissed her forehead and said smiling,"Good morning angel!"Geet cutely rubbed her eyes and got up and saw around her.Mohinder saw her eyes which was still red due to lack of sleep and his eyes welled up seeing her state.

Little Geet got up and got ready for her school.She dont want her father to be sad or her mother too for whom she was doing everything suppressing her grief.In that age also she dont want her father to be in trouble becoz of her.Geet had her breakfast which was prepared by her chachi prepared who was extra careful with her.Geet was shocked to see her chachi being friendly with her.But little Geet least knew what was going on in her house.They were thinking of bringing new mom to her which she was unaware.

Geet saw her school van coming and cutely sat inside it talking to her little friend Pinky who was all the way munching chips and her another friend Kritika.

Kritika: hi geet ...

Geet smiled sweetly and she wished pinky and kritika too...

Geet : pinks didn't you have breakfast ..

Pinky nodded still munching her chips.. and kritika too looked at geet with her cute eyes darted towards geet ... she noticed that geet was not herself..her bubbliness and her chirpiness was missing ..moreover she was not coming to school for some six seven days...

Pinky : papa..was late geetu...

Geet : ohh..so only

Kritika: but my mumma makes breakfast.. and I am never late and mumma kissed me too... and geet also never comes late..

Pinky was sad , she didn't have mother ..her mother expired when she was few months old so she was used to her papa doing all the things...

Geet with her hanky wiped pinky's tears...

Geet : pinks.. my mumma is also with god.. like your mumma , If you will cry then she will feel bad.. and she will cry like you are crying...

Kritika: haa pinks...

They were just three year old.they didn't know what were they talking but kritika knew that geet's and pinky's mom is with god as she told them...

Geet was quite even her little heart felt bad , her mother used to get her ready take care of her feed her breakfast and she too kisses her ..now she will miss her mama... her little heart cried and the reflection of her heart was seen In her eyes...

Her school bus sat on the usual traffic when Geet started to peek from the window when she caught a temple where she heard a saint's speech about god.Geet listened that baba who was giving the speech about the god.That baba said,"God is omnipresent children,that's why he will listen to all of ur prayers and troubles!"Little Geet thought,"So i can talk with god always!I will surely write letter to ask abt my mom's welfare!"

Present

Handa Mansion

Geet came to her room after having yummy breakfast and sat on the bed and took her mobile which she unlocked to get the boy for whom she was in love...or have to say she like him.A small smile crept on her petal lips and she started to drool over him.Meera who came from behind saw her mobile which she was drooling and snatched it immediately and ran faster.

Precap-Meera shouted to her mother,"Mom,look what i have for u!"Geet pouted and screamed,"Meera give me my mobile back!"Meera smirked and ran and unlocked her mobile immediately to get a boy's photo.Meera's face widened and lips curved with a cute smile.


Edited by maangeet9387 - 11 years ago
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Sweety the dev's pt is too good i was laughing like mad...especially the word big mouthed person to dev!😛
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haye babaji shi likes someone from her class!!😲
Ab hamare maan ka kya ho ga!!
Waiting for the next !!
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yeh kaise ho gaya...

Geet is in love with a boy who is her classmate...and she is asking Maan thinking him as God whether he is good for her or not...

bechara Maan has to answer her so he is in dilemma what to say...

interesting update...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Maan is in a dilemma, what can he do.
Who is Geet in love with? Introduce that character soon.
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hi thanks 4 da pm n interestin update! Well written! Past n present well incorporated! Omg she likes someone else in her class? Dev teasing Maan! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic update dear :)

superb dear:)

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