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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 58 second half... 😳😳
So much happening altogether... but yet too good... 😃

Loved the return of "true love is forever" 😳 The way Dev made Naina the strength of tehir love and bonding was beautifully put together. Her fears were justified after all that she has faced in her life... but then now she does have someone she can share it all with and who can support her.

Maan is a khotta .. but yet can't stop loving him... all his anger, fight with self and living with the hurt of having hurt her, I love the way you've shaped and build his character here.

Geet has her own confusions as well as she can't help but be the Bambi she is ... Hopefully her Maan like his brother will make all her fears disappear. 😳

Male PMS 😆😆 Sachi kya 😆😆

Ranbir in next update ... going to read it 😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Onir

Part 58 second half... 😳😳

So much happening altogether... but yet too good... 😃

Loved the return of "true love is forever" 😳 The way Dev made Naina the strength of tehir love and bonding was beautifully put together. Her fears were justified after all that she has faced in her life... but then now she does have someone she can share it all with and who can support her.

Maan is a khotta .. but yet can't stop loving him... all his anger, fight with self and living with the hurt of having hurt her, I love the way you've shaped and build his character here.

Geet has her own confusions as well as she can't help but be the Bambi she is ... Hopefully her Maan like his brother will make all her fears disappear. 😳

Male PMS 😆😆 Sachi kya 😆😆

Ranbir in next update ... going to read it 😉

😃 kaise miss ho gayi yeh comment?
Thanks Onir🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
so good to be back...

ch56 - what an update girl!
tara dressing up geet...love their bond...loved her dress...i like summer-ish/flowery dresses
Sasha - i like a smart, intelligent girl though always portrayed negatively...
thinking of that you know you've almost shown everyone amongst the younger lot as a positive character in TL...how i wish she also gets someone for her here...she's not that bad technically speaking...a bit show off but still...
by the way what's with this Maan dude and his misunderstandings...his brain needs fixing...lol
jealous of kabir...really does he even know his Geet...i doubt that...
but loved the inventory done...lol
awww kaala tikka part is so sweet...innocence personified...
Really Geet torn skirt, really now...i hate to call anyone dolt but really... i thought she studied in one of the good colleges of Delhi...ufff...but all in all hilarious conv b/w girls...
love the mention of pinky and her running a store...feels like everyone is connected and story is not just one dimensional...
Daadima is a real champ or to say director of this story...loved her part...is it only me who's getting a little sympathetic towards sasha and the secretary treatment to her...i guess i am...result of poking ur nose everywhere Ms. sasha
Sulking MSK is busy thinking what magic she's done on his family...i am sure you will make him repent a lot once the reality strikes and he comes out of his My Brain, My Mind and I world...
Finally, Manisha and his aadhi raat...you cracked me up on that
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Did i write so much on your update...me impressed by myself...u see i am normally a one or 2 line person but i surprised myself today...hehe



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Posted: 11 years ago
ch57 -

emotional first half: poonam-tara-chandan reunion and adorable bond that tara and chandan share...the way guilt is shown amongst the three is something that looks so real than fiction...chandan is guilty whenever he sees poonam and poonam is guilty of missing so much in the life of her daughter and not being there for her when probably she needed her the most is so well portrayed...

In my mind I am analysing their situation but i guess not going to write it here and take the attention away from the story...

By the way does tara know that chandan is her step dad and how chandan and poonam got married? not that it matters looking at the awesome bond the 2 share...

Now their 2nd daughter being alive is a big reveal and i believe it's going to be Megha since u already disclosed a bit of her history/geography before...so waiting to see how they are going to find her...

maan-geet

Maan with his akdrooness and Geet with her complaints and self talk made the update so lively after the initial high on emotion update... her transition from "piya moh se bolat nahin" mode to "aa dekhen zara kismein kitna hai dum" urf jhansi ki rani mode is so good.

Is there a competition going on between Geet, Nakul and Manish-a to see who wins Maan's attention or rather who makes him more mad? i guess it is, but jhansi ki rani is going to achieve both of that pretty soon as we all know...hahaha

So daadi and darji are together in this, so adorable...it's always nice to have sweet daadu daadi type people in life with added tadka of naughtiness...what say!

Pehle SRK, phir Salman, phir Dev aur ab Teji...no wonder Maan is confused and in MSK mode...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoviefan

so good to be back...

ch56 - what an update girl!
tara dressing up geet...love their bond...loved her dress...i like summer-ish/flowery dresses
Sasha - i like a smart, intelligent girl though always portrayed negatively...
thinking of that you know you've almost shown everyone amongst the younger lot as a positive character in TL...how i wish she also gets someone for her here...she's not that bad technically speaking...a bit show off but still..


by the way what's with this Maan dude and his misunderstandings...his brain needs fixing...lol
jealous of kabir...really does he even know his Geet...i doubt that...
but loved the inventory done...lol
awww kaala tikka part is so sweet...innocence personified...
Really Geet torn skirt, really now...i hate to call anyone dolt but really... i thought she studied in one of the good colleges of Delhi...ufff...but all in all hilarious conv b/w girls...
love the mention of pinky and her running a store...feels like everyone is connected and story is not just one dimensional...
Daadima is a real champ or to say director of this story...loved her part...is it only me who's getting a little sympathetic towards sasha and the secretary treatment to her...i guess i am...result of poking ur nose everywhere Ms. sasha
Sulking MSK is busy thinking what magic she's done on his family...i am sure you will make him repent a lot once the reality strikes and he comes out of his My Brain, My Mind and I world...
Finally, Manisha and his aadhi raat...you cracked me up on that
:
:
Did i write so much on your update...me impressed by myself...u see i am normally a one or 2 line person but i surprised myself today...hehe



Thanks so much. 2 lines bhi chalti if that is what you are comfortable with but I am loving these long comments so much more.
Catch up soon. We are nearing the end.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: newmoviefan

ch57 -

emotional first half: poonam-tara-chandan reunion and adorable bond that tara and chandan share...the way guilt is shown amongst the three is something that looks so real than fiction...chandan is guilty whenever he sees poonam and poonam is guilty of missing so much in the life of her daughter and not being there for her when probably she needed her the most is so well portrayed...

In my mind I am analysing their situation but i guess not going to write it here and take the attention away from the story...

By the way does tara know that chandan is her step dad and how chandan and poonam got married? not that it matters looking at the awesome bond the 2 share...

Now their 2nd daughter being alive is a big reveal and i believe it's going to be Megha since u already disclosed a bit of her history/geography before...so waiting to see how they are going to find her...

maan-geet

Maan with his akdrooness and Geet with her complaints and self talk made the update so lively after the initial high on emotion update... her transition from "piya moh se bolat nahin" mode to "aa dekhen zara kismein kitna hai dum" urf jhansi ki rani mode is so good.

Is there a competition going on between Geet, Nakul and Manish-a to see who wins Maan's attention or rather who makes him more mad? i guess it is, but jhansi ki rani is going to achieve both of that pretty soon as we all know...hahaha

So daadi and darji are together in this, so adorable...it's always nice to have sweet daadu daadi type people in life with added tadka of naughtiness...what say!

Pehle SRK, phir Salman, phir Dev aur ab Teji...no wonder Maan is confused and in MSK mode...

@underlined: The insecurity that comes when love is not expressed by both is what Maan is suffering from.😆 I like harassing him.. Made us crazy for the last 3 yrs ab uski baari..
Thanks dear.
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Posted: 11 years ago
What is a dolt ...
Nice update loved geets description of Sasha's dress

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Posted: 11 years ago
Sachin ab hum Dev ko miss kar Rahen hei.ye mu jaldi finish karo pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thoroughly enjoyed each and every part of this thread :))

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