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Posted: 11 years ago
JUST READ IT IN ONE GO
MAAN ACCUSED GEET OF TWO TIMING WHICH HURT HER A LOT
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

na,,koi movie nehii dekhi,,,,my frend told vry nys movie,,,
u watchd,,,??



nah... i heard good review..
i think i vl be updating at 10.. vl try to make it before..
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Posted: 11 years ago
last part was lovely... loved the dress too😉

ufff... maan and uska darr... usko mountain dew do ... darr tho sablo lagtha hain... but drinking that darr bhaag jaayega...😆

geets slap... i loved it... though maan ko koi bhi maare mujhe bilkul acha nahi lagtha... but this maan deserved that slap... par ithna zor ka thakka dene ki kya zarrorat ki maan behosh hi gaya???

geet has decided to quit the job... maaan jaago aur roko... am waiting here
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Posted: 11 years ago


sorry for the late commnet remspie

pehe beemar thi and upar se some days full busy...

am sad that this story is ending... but i know i will be getting a new one soon... haina??


ps: i saw krish 3... loved the techs used... bas logic mind ko peeche chodke dekho... i mean just imagine vivek's dna and chameleons combination ka gal🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago
omg superb yaar.. good decisision geet.. maan needs to man enough and say the truth.. cont soon hun
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Posted: 11 years ago

(Thanku Lakshmi for the beautiful banner😃)


Pls add 'Remyapms' to ur buddy list



7. An OMG Moment



Maan's POV

It has been a month, since Geet quit the job. When the HR dept informed I was so shocked. How could she? But then the words I said, rang in my mind. No lady with self respect will continue the job. I thot my attraction will fade away. But each second I yearned for her more. It felt like some thorns are pricked in my heart whenever I glance at her way. I indulged myself in work, but nothing was able to give me peace.

So little bro, whatsup?

Nothing Maya.

Oh really, I thot u were missing geet.

Nope. Y would I miss her? she is just my secretary.

Oh!! So that's y u have been ogling at her pic, rt?

Oh shit!! I forgot that my lappy is open. It was some of the pics I took in Italy when she was not looking.

Its just an attraction Maya. It will fade away with time.

And did it fade away? I mean its almost a week, rt?

It will.

U r crazy. Cant u c u love her?

Love is a big word. I met her only a month back.

Soul mates need only a second to realize their love. Haven't u heard of love at first sight?

There is nothing like that.

Says who?? U confessed ur love for Luc after a year, rt?

U dunno the entire truth Mr. Khurrana. when we met each other for the first time, we did realize our magical connection. He proposed me the instant itself and I accepted it. he wants to marry me the next day, but knowing u and dad, I denied and proposed the plan of courting me. Not everyone will be that lucky. I am lucky Maan and u too. Any blind can c the connection b/w u. Its time to move on bro.

But..

Wait! U should think about it calmly. But for now I need a favor. U have to accompany me to a fashion show.

Not interested. Take ur hubby with u.

Well, he is busy with dad. Pls Maan.. Pretty pls..

Her puppy eyes can make anyone week. Poor Luc.

Fine.

Thanku brother.

She hugged me tightly and ran to her room making me smile. She is such a baby. But what she said can be true? I mean ya, I care for geet. But is it love or like?



I dressed in a black tux, sprayed my body with cologne and gelled my hair. I walked towards my Limo and Maya was already seated wearing white T shirt and brown tight jeans with a jacket over it. She still looks like a model and Luc have hard time to control mens lustful eyes on her way.

We reached the venue shortly and the cameras surrounded our limo. Bodyguards controlled the crowd and we politely answered some questions thrown on our away with photo sessions. We went inside and took the reserves seats which has our name on it. I glanced around and saw models in skimpy dress throwing flirtatious glance my way. Ignoring them, my gaze met a particular woman. She was wearing jeans and shirt, but she looked familiar. Sensing my eyes she looked at me, and her eyes widened a bit. Then she dashed towards backstage. What was that?

Welcome to 'Tempting' Fashion Show 2013. After two fantastic seasons of unparalleled success at Pitchford University, we have decided to take advantage of new opportunities. This year, we are presenting before u the trendy collections of woman's and men's attire from teenage to their wedding, designed by the famous designer Chole Sinclair.

I zoomed out after hearing that name. Now I remember, she is Geets friend. That means Geet is here?? I looked around to locate a particular face engraved in my heart, but was disheartened. But y Maya is smiling evilly.

What?

Don't u want to ogle the models in the ramp?

Not interested.

I don't think so. I think u will like this particular one on the stage.

I looked at her confused and then to ramp. My!!! Geet!


She was wearing a orange dress that reached her mid thigh. She was looking fabulous. That dazzling smile and hazel eyes were a deadly combination. All the restlessness I have been bearing, vanished. I believe I got my missing part. It erased all the tiny doubt of my feeling. I Love her a lot. she may get a better person than me, but she is the only one I want in my life. I m not going to lose her. She will be mine soon.

I was about to walk towards her when I saw a man standing next to her. But what irked me was his hands were resting on her waist and they were acting as if they r the most sensuous couple. Damn!! I m not going to allow this. I looked at her and her eyes met mine, making her smile vanish.



Geets POV

I m so nervous. Its all chole's fault. She emotionally blackmailed me to this show. I dunno y she is so keen to make me do this and above all that she wants me to be the show stopper. This is the first time I m doing that. When my name was called, a man joined me and we walked out with oozing confidence. I met the eyes of each and every audience, but I was not prepared for a pair of chocolate browns.

His eyes softened for a second, and then rage was building in those. He looks like sex god. Whenever I see him, I feels like god took an off from heaven and created this beautiful sculpture instilling all sex appeal. Its so sinful.

He then gave me a sexy smirk and vanished. Where has he gone? The man next to me nudged, without making it obvious and I walked back.

Breathe woman.. Breathe in.. Breathe out..

Geet.. Get ready for the bridal attire. Gown is in chase's hands. Get it fast.

Chole. Maan?

Yea.. I noe. We will talk about it later, k?

She rushed out making me more confused.

The white gown was studded with rubies and diamonds!! It was an one sided-off shoulder dress, and the veil added its beauty. When I looked at mirror, I felt like I m the most beautiful bride. This dress is made for me.

U r looking so beautiful dear.

Thanku Chase.

I wished I was standing next to maan and we were gazing at each other lovingly. Now from where that thot came? Concentrate Geet!!

I heard the final announcement and looked around for my partner. Where is he? Suddenly a hand clasped mine and we were walking to ramp. The touch felt so similar... Like Maa.. Shut up Geet!! He is ur partner in the show.

Confidently, I walked gracefully, but since the veil was covering my eyes, I allowed the pair of hands guide me. when we reached the front, we posed and then I and my partner faced each other. Chole directed it as an act where the partner will lift my veil and we have to gaze each other as a couple.

I felt my veil being lifted and my gaze slowly met my partne.. Maan!!
He is dressed in a black tux and he was looking at me lovingly just like in my dream. His eyes were conveying so many messages, but I was so stunned to c one emotion in those. Is it Love??

(Imagine a veil too)


Note: Thanku guys for the support. Love u all

@Rashmi: This update is dedicated especially to u dear.. Thanx for the idea..

@preeti.1: Thanku dear

@chavvi: that was a gud one

@princesssarah: Missing u too sweetheart.

@tanvinangia: Will try dear

@poo: oye.. thanks for such a lovely comment 😉

@pop77: thanks yaar. but i hv to end it. sorry..

@18mypride: Thanks a lot yaar and welcome back!!

@laks: its k yaar.. Take care dear..

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update

Poor Maan thought it was attraction but fell in love with geet

Did Maya and Chloe planned this show . as i do feel maya has some connection with it

but gosh maan was so jealous tat he went to walk the ramp with geet
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Maan realized his love and possession for Geet...

and he ramp-walked with her...

wow moment...

wonderful update...

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago

haiyye rabba jaan le lenegi aap

oyye teri so thats why she wanted maan to come with her

hmmm maya and chole our cupids

or these two love stupids it seems

man she sure blew him away

oh my he was finally struck with the relisation that he loves her

took him long enough didnt it

he may be MSK but in such cases he is bit slow

well about time he got it yaar

oh ho this is one fashion show neither is gona forget

wow that dress is just so beautiful

and with them both on ramp and looking into the others eyes just perfect

like a dream come true

wait since they are already dressed for the part why don't they utilise it

naah too early right

so whats gonna be his next move

and they meet again right

cant wait for next now

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful part
loved it
maan thought it's attraction and it will fade away by time but nothing happened like that
he went to attend the fashion show with his sis and he saw geet on ramp
geet has to come on bridal dress with her partner and maan became her partner
waiting for the next part

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