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oye kamino no update tonight jaake so javo :P wait karne ka no fayda😆
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Originally posted by: dreamyharika

oye kamino no update tonight jaake so javo :P wait karne ka no fayda😆



hehe.. tu sab janthi hain
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hehe.. tu sab janthi hain



yaaa 😎
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my presence after long time uff
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( Some Dialogues Courtesy to Google as those quotes were used in my prologue and now was the right time to use them)

PART 62


You know Jaan... Maan tried to initiate a talk between them. They were in the kitchen and Maan was standing with his back towards Geet cleaning the chicken that he was preparing for Geet. She stood near the gas stove and unknowingly lost in Maan she kept her hand on the heated tawa tat was kept on the lit gas. She just kept staring at Maan who spoke without feeling any pain as she wanted to just get lost in his voice and his presence tat soothed her broken heart.


Your Annie Di had just called... she says Angel was missing Geet Massi... par its not fair Jaan... She does not miss me.. tum sab ek jaise girls ho. She smiled hearing him complaining about the small angel tat her Annie Di had given her. I swear Jaan I will fight with your angel once we are back.. How can she not miss me. Main bhi tho uska hi hoon na.. par nahi your angel does not miss me he said finishing his cleaning.


Jaannn...Maan bit out in pain seeing Geet's hand on the heated tawa the moment he turned facing her. He stood rooted for few seconds seeing her smiling at her but the moment he realized where her hand was he rushed throwing whatever he had in his hand.


Jaan yeh Maan said taking her hand into his only to feel her soft fingers touching his face. He himself did not knew tat he was crying seeing her in pain but the moment she wiped his tears he cried more seeing tat she was not even feel the pain. There was a smile tat would just kill him but he did not stop his tears.


Why he cried painfully seeing her just wiping his tears with a smile. dekho kitna jaal gaya hain and you still don't feel the pain.. aisa kyu Jaan.


Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Kabhi Dard Ye Deta Hai, Kabhi Chain Ye Deta Hai

Kabhi Gham Deta Hai, Kabhi Khushi Deta Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai


He cried hearing her each word. Why his own question seem to be baseless seeing the tears that now poured from her eyes as those were not for the pain she felt but for the tears he had in his eyes. He just kept looking into her eyes as she questioned him wat type of love was theirs Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai.


He walked holding her hand as she continued to question him on the same. How could he answer when he himself was not aware of it? How would he say that he just loved her though he was a curse to their love now? He made her sit while he nursed her hand that was burnt. He kissed her hand all over taking in her pain but she just kept looking at him with a smile.


Why he repeated his question and she only caressed his face trying to take in his feel. She chuckled as she remembered their sweet past. Yeh bilkul rough hain.. just like they were she said touching his lips. She traced those sending shivers down his spine but still he controlled seeing her moving closer. He closed his eyes as he said wat type of love was theirs.


Kabhi Dard Ye Deta Hai, Kabhi Chain Ye Deta Hai

Kabhi Gham Deta Hai, Kabhi Khushi Deta Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai


And she placed her soft lips on his moving into his lap holding him tight from his neck. He could feel the sobs tat were trying to burst from her throat and he let her cry into the kiss as this was the only way she could be free from all pain. He pulled her burnt hand and kissed her back with all love and she struggled to hold him with her both hands. He smiled with the efforts she tried and said it will hurt me Jaan... aisa na karo and she instantly broke the kiss letting him apply the medicine on her palm.


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It looked like Switzerland was bathing in white milk as the whole was covered with snow tat gave a chill climate. People enjoyed walking cozily into the arms of each other relishing the sweet moment of their time. Her heart ached as she looked from one couple to another who were lost in their love. Her eyes refused to even blink seeing the love tat was lingering every corner of the place. It had been days and Maan finally forced Geet to step out of their cottage.


He looked at her eyes tat stared at a particular direction. She pulled herself more into her own trying to shield herself from the pain she felt but her eyes shone with the happiness she could feel seeing the couple enjoying the beauty and love of Switzerland. Her eyes refused to divert as Maan tried to take her into her arms. She walked pushing his hands trying to feel the same warmth like the couple but her heart only questioned him.


Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Kabhi Dard Ye Deta Hai, Kabhi Chain Ye Deta Hai

Kabhi Gham Deta Hai, Kabhi Khushi Deta Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai


She stood watching Maan but her eyes shifted back on the couple who hid each other in their love. Jaan he called painfully seeing her lost as she pointed towards the couple with tears in her eyes. He pulled her into his love hugging her tight feeling her pain. Her loneliness tat she had hidden deep inside her was betraying her now and it came in front of him as her helplessness. He cried answering as he tried to tell her wat she meant for him.


Din to guzarta hai jiske khayaalon mein

Raatein guzarti hai uske hi yaadon mein
.



He held her tight and walked away but her eyes still casted on the couple. Aisa nahi karte Jaan... woh hum nahi hain na. His tears poured with his words as he tried to repeat her words saying tat their love was different from others. Love tat was filled with pain and sadness.. Loved tat was filled with happiness but was hit by their fate cruelly to test their love.


Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Kabhi Dard Ye Deta Hai, Kabhi Chain Ye Deta Hai

Kabhi Gham Deta Hai, Kabhi Khushi Deta Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai


I want Maan.. I want to be loved she cried as he sat holding her tight by her waist making her sit in his lap. He brushed her hair tat blew on her face while she placed her head resting on his chest as her eyes once again caught a sight of a couple expressing their love with their kiss. Her heart cried thinking about their painful togetherness as she wished to have a union full of love with the winds dancing with their tunes. The almighty forces the entire universe to dance with their magical divine union.



Waqt milan ka aaye to baaghon mein

Jhoome bahaarein phoolon ki galiyon mein



He looked into her eyes tat had determination like her words. He smiled feeling the same and wanted to give her the only happiness she wanted. The love tat he had kept deep inside his heart, he wanted to shower it on her, to remove the slightest of any fear she had and wanted to hide her in his love.


Bhanwron ki toli aaye, kaliyon pe voh mandlaaye

Darr yeh fiza ka bhi dil se mitaaye



She smiled hearing him as he pulled her into him more though she was all into him and closed his eyes letting the feel of contentment and happiness to seep into his soul.


Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Kabhi Dard Ye Deta Hai, Kabhi Chain Ye Deta Hai

Kabhi Gham Deta Hai, Kabhi Khushi Deta Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Kabhi Dard Ye Deta Hai, Kabhi Chain Ye Deta Hai

Kabhi Gham Deta Hai, Kabhi Khushi Deta Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai


He felt the loss of his soul and opened his eyes only to see his Jaan smiling, dancing and playing with the kids in snow. She looked like an angel as she smiled to her heart. His eyes turned mist once again seeing her smiling. His legs betrayed his order of sitting and just staring at his Jaan as they walked towards his Jaan his life who now smiled after ages.. the smile tat reached her eyes.


Jaan she gave him a big smile still playing with snow and the kids. His fingers brushed the silky hair tat disturbed her serene smiling face. Wat are you doing here. He questioned seeing her not replying him but only giving her divine smile. Bolo na Jaan wat are you playing with the kids.


Kyu.. you don't play with me na.. so why you want. He smiled seeing her pouting and playing with the kids again. nahi nahi this is like this.. you know he heard her speak to the kids like a small girl. He wondered wat suddenly changed tat she was smiling so much. He kept looking at her when his words were repeated by her.

Din to guzarta hai jiske khayaalon mein

Raatein guzarti hai uske hi yaadon mein.

Bhanwron ki toli aaye, kaliyon pe voh mandlaaye

Darr yeh fiza ka bhi dil se mitaaye

Pyar yeh aisa hi hain.. jaane yeh aisa kyu hain
..



Maan he looked lost as he saw her smiling and touching his face with her sweet voice repeating wat he had just said to her. How could she think so deep on his words that it changed her entirely? She smiled seeing him staring at her and suddenly she smirked seeing him. She giggled silencing the kids who stared at the big Maan Singh Khuranna just staring at the girl who was playing with them and suddenly he felt a chill run through his entire body. He withered with the cool touch inside his clothes and before he could do anything he was attacked by a whole lot of snow being thrown on his from all sides. He tried to stop but his Jaan was just playing and throwing the snow on him.




Jaan he said walking closer and the kids ran seeing his big eyes while Geet stood seeing him smirking taking slow steps towards her. Na she shook her head I was only playing na.. yeh Switzerland hain na.. so your Jaan was playing na... ab ismein meri kya galati.




Switzerland mein yeh bhi karte hain Jaan and he ran grabbing her tight by her waist. Nahi nahi aisa nahi she said trying to come out of his grip but he only held her tight and next he laid her down on the huge pile of snow and sat on her without putting his weight or hurting her.




Hmmm she moaned feeling his intimate look at her and without breaking it he soaked her insides with snow tat made her to shiver. She moved grinding herself beneath him but he only held her tight putting as much as snow inside her clothes. Thand she moaned but her moan was swallowed by Maan as he smacked his lips hard on hers. Her trembling lips felt his rough and confident ones as they took her into another world of passion. The same passion and love that he had for her.


Hmm thand lag rahi hain she said betraying her own words as her hands pulled him more into the kiss. He smiled saying m here to warm you up Jaan. He teased flipping her on him as he lay beneath her. His hands slowly making an entry into her insides while she desperately trying to find his buttons to unbutton them. Chunna hain she said into the kiss as she felt his fingers stroking her skin near her waist. Maan... mujhe bhi karna hain she complained while he still kissed sucking her soft lips.


His heart was dancing hearing her. She suddenly turned into his old Geet his Jaan who would complain when he would not let her do wat he did to her. He smiled hearing her say mujhe tickly ho raha hain Maan... I want to do... woh our cottage love.. please na Maan..mujhe karna hain. He shook his head still kissing her lightly while his hands reached her curves and squeezed them a bit. He was drawn into her feel, the love she had in her eyes, the smile tat he had seen after ages was making him mad in her love. He had finally won the biggest war in his life as he won his Jaan all over. He did not want to leave her and in this happiness he forgot tat he was making out openly with her.


I love you Jaan
he murmured into the kiss but I want to do tickly to you. She pouted as she felt his lips leaving her and next moment she was all sitting on his stomach. He laughed loudly and hearing him laugh she just kept staring with her eyes wide open. She probably for the very first time had seen him like this. Why are you laughing? She questioned seeing him still laughing at her.




Are you in real Jaan he asked trying to control himself as he felt the cornesr of his eyes burning with sudden fear of some dream that would break down suddenly. He did not want to break if this was a dream. Bolo na Jaan are you in real.. are you my Jaan... Ya phir koi aur who is trying to take my Jaan away. She kissed his eyes drinking his tears as she poured their dangerous love questions answering them with her understanding of their dangerous love Love me without fear; Trust me without questioning; accept me without change; Desire me without inhibitions. He looked up at her with questions as he remembered the same words when he had first said explaining her wat love meant for him.


If you're not ready to cry, if you're not ready to take the risk, if you're not ready to feel the pain, then you're not ready to fall in love!!!!!! and I have cried, risked, felt the pain... Love is beautiful when it's pure; Love is life when we let live free; Love is soul when you live with love; In all love is as pure as god. She kissed his whole face as he still stared at her with a smile as she repeated everything they once shared. But I don't want to be free as I want to be caged.. feel secured in your love cage... I want to live with my Maan as My Maan is as pure as love and as pure as GOD.. mere liye mera Maan hi jahan hain.. I don't want to live a life with him with love but want to live a life with my Maan's dangerous love... kyu ki tat dangerous love is the purest love tat my Maan has for me... a love tat is beyond imagination for the world but not for us now.



He cried as he heard each word of hers. He did not have anything to say hearing the confession she just made seeing right into his eyes. When you smile I can feel; All my passion unfolding; Your hand brushes mine; And a thousand sensations Seduce me!!!!!!! And I want to do things so wild with you tat I don't know how to say them!!!!!!!!! He replied to each of her words the way her old Maan would reply making her shiver with the intensity of his words.



Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Kabhi Dard Ye Deta Hai, Kabhi Chain Ye Deta Hai

Kabhi Gham Deta Hai, Kabhi Khushi Deta Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Kabhi Dard Ye Deta Hai, Kabhi Chain Ye Deta Hai

Kabhi Gham Deta Hai, Kabhi Khushi Deta Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai


Maan she moaned feeling his hand once again stroking her skin after long time. She slowly raised her heard from his chest and its then she realized that he has been laying on snow since long and she is resting over him. She pouted seeing him not even complaining and instantly tried to get up but he only pushed her back into his body. It's cold and you will fall sick. She said pouting seeing him still touching her bare skin and making her vulnerable.



I have my personal warmth to heat me up Maan said winking making her to blush. He was blunt with his reply but soon her blush turned red with anger and she hit his face saying but m not fit enough to heat you up... pata hain na m stil weak and I don't want to faint when you are making love to me.

Let me check if you are not and he pulled her lips into his kissing her hard like the olden days. He was rough and passionate and she was tender in kiss the way he loved. He slowly raised his body in the sitting position with her still in his lap and lips fused together. He smiled feeling her struggling to match his intensity and he knew that she was truly back for him. He pulled her closer and slowly stood up trying to walk when she bit his lips making him to gasp.


Wats wrong he asked seeing her seeing her pouting her lips that were covered with his love. I still don't know to kiss properly... And I know you still laugh at me the way I struggle to kiss you back trying to match you up. Maan smiled walking with her back to their car. He was truly happy and would have stopped the time if it was in his hand. It's ok... My Jaan is still a baby and will always be... aur waise bhi I have lots of time in Switzerland to teach you about love making... and I want to make you fat also... yaad hain na wat I had said that once we get married I will double your size... and I think even your Angel would need a baby to play with her... nahi tho she will say ki how come you had Di and she does not have anyone with her.


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He smiled faintly staring at the sleeping form of his Jaan. She was tired and after feeding her dinner along with her medicine he made sure tat she was fast asleep. Somewhere the sudden change in her was disturbing him and a fear as lurking inside his heart. He tried to shrug it off but he could not as such sudden change though he was happy was making him to think in negative way and finally he decided to call her doctor who had been treating her in Delhi.


But doctor, this sudden change.. How can it be he tried to sound a bit confident but the doctor could understand his worries. Mr. Khuranna the day when she broke up at the Chopra's party was the biggest change in her... this is only a minor one and it good that she herself spoke her heart to you.. You know Mr. Khuranna her case was not difficult as she was just waiting for her love and you and your presence is only the cure for her. I would just say that just do as she says as this will give the much needed rest... are you physical with her Mr. Maan


Not yet doctor, but she has been openly asking me to be... she even tries forcibly to get closer when its becomes impossible for her to control. Maan said wat he felt while the doctor replied it's only the way she can get rid of her fear Mr. Khuranna. Though she believes that you never cheated her but somewhere her mind is still on it and she wants tat to be cleared and so she will be forcing you but as you say I can feel that there is much more improvement in her and I think it's the right time that you take this step now but before that just observe her behavior for two days and then I can say that you are ready for the last step to make her forget every pain she went through.


Maan sighed as he cut the call and slowly slipped into the bed next her. He just kept staring with tears in his eyes as he smiled feeling the fear vanishing from his heart. He pecks her forehead and pulls her on top of him and sleeps holding her tight drifting into the most peaceful sleep ever in this so many years.



Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Kabhi Dard Ye Deta Hai, Kabhi Chain Ye Deta Hai

Kabhi Gham Deta Hai, Kabhi Khushi Deta Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Kabhi Dard Ye Deta Hai, Kabhi Chain Ye Deta Hai

Kabhi Gham Deta Hai, Kabhi Khushi Deta Hai

Pyar Ye Jaane Kaisa Hai, Kya Kahein Ye Kuchh Aisa Hai

Precap: The most beautiful Union of Dangerous lovers.

Fabiya I hope I have done justice to the song tat you gave me and I tried my best to make is special..hope u all love it guys.

Do like and comment guys.

Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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didu what to say!! this part was a divine love not dangerous love😉 😆

a kind of rekindled love bt still it need to burn 😳☺️ and that burning in the precap🤣 seriously i was cracked up with the way you gave it away as dangerous i mean i was like 😲

maan is trying his best to get his misti back and i am damn sure he would, i pray geet doesnt let herself into that world of depression

both of them are in pain that hurts bt i was happy when the doctor advised 😳 things got cleared indeed which was much needed at this stage

inni angrezi mein maine comment jhaad diya😆

chalo di next wala part jaldi dedo😊
Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice dear
Wow.geet has some changes
Geet wants to be.love by maan
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely
Geet somewhere ia feeling insecure
She want onlu maan dangerous love

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely song fit perfecty to the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
So emotional and lovly part

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