New OS--Meri kahani--Epilogue Part B on Page 53

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Bindu sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: LILY111144
butiful ending 2 a butiful stry,,,written vry well
maan cnvincd jsmeet nd dadi,,expectd 4rm MSK
mneets cnfession nd ist dt s osm,,,
cngrts dear 4 dis wnderful nd diff. stry.
waiting 4 epi,,,,,😳

Thanks lily...

MSK hai kuch bhi karr sakta hai😉😆

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Bindu sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams
Very beautiful ending. your ss has a pleasant wind and filled with realistic emotions. congratulations for successfully completing your first work. waiting for an epilogue😊

Thank You...

I am happy u liked it...

Epilogue...will surely so...

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Bindu sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: ghsp2fan
nice ending...
loved geet's confession...
ye kahaani bahut pyaari jai...
Waiting for the next story...

Thank you...

Next story...😆 Maine kuch socha nahi hai...

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Bindu sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: valli30
awesome updates👏
apne tho roller coaster par chada diya sabko
so rohan,veer,anu came to know about maaneet's love 😃
maan ko tho shock hi lag gaya mallika ki rishte ki baath sun kar
haha MMS but makki accha lag raha hai 😛
she is the one who listened to their talks in the mall
makki bani acchi ladki
maan yaar itna late karogi tho aisa hi hogana isliye jaldi karo warna patha nahi dadi kya naya plan sochegi
finally maan deciding to talk to jasmeet
loved the way geet trusts maan and she is sure that jasmmet will agree
haha sab maaneet ko bachane ki koshish kar rahe the dinner par
loved their confession and first date in outhouse
dadi came to know about maan and geet
finally unki kahani puri hogayi
loved it
epilogue tho bantha hai boss

p.s Di ek doubt hai kya maaneet jaha rehthe hai waha ek hi maal tha kya jo sab wahi par the😛
no emos di sorry time lagtha haina dudne mai isliye

Ha ha Thanks Jerry for the lovely comment...

Unhone late nahi kiya...haalat kuch aise the aur Maan ne socha ki Geet abhi padh rahi hai...

I was very nervous about writing the confession part...i dont want it to be filmy...i wanted it to be simple...so the idea came...thank god sab ko acha laga...

Date bhi Maan ne instantly decide kiya...Mauka dekha aur chouka maara...😆

Epilogue...sure😛

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Bindu sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: annbell
loved it .. really .. 😃 ..
a sweet beautiful love story .. 😊 ..

Thanks

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Bindu sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: singh24

Thank you

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#237

HAI

read all the parts in a go... sorry couldnt be there from the beginning ... but i loved the story...

the fact that maan and geet were already in love was shocking... i had thought that may be their love story will begin when geet arrived at km... but that was an interesting twist...

geets moms story was really emotional... admire her😳

even the great msk feeling nervous before asking geets hand to her mom was sweet ... realistic too...

hope we will be getting an epilogue too... thank u for the awesome story..

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kkiddoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#238

comment edited on pg 37 😛

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Bindu sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: kkiddoo
I was shocked at first to know that its the last part 😲

But then i was happy too i hope u know why 😉

Mms is a nice girl like the way she understood and handle the situation with her parents 😊

At last maan talked to jashmeet and jastmeet is shocked thought happy for geet as in this way garv too will get his massi as mother with him 24*7 with him so their wont be any prob and geet to will be happy after getting her love 😉 so all in all its a amazing idea na 👍🏼

Dadima got the shock at last happy wala 😆

Waiting for epilogue update soon di