MG: Arzoo#2/Last part/pg46/6nov//

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Amazing ending of Awesome story:)

Epilogue milay ga plzzz:)

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deejagi

@deejagi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#322

lovely ff. Great work. Keep it up

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#323

ithna pyaara ff ka epilogue tho bantha hain bosss...

am waiting...

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priyanka

@doublecross

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Posted: 11 years ago

#324

what a superb story!
amazing!
waiting for an epilogue
please do give one!

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mehak173

@mehak173

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Posted: 11 years ago

#325

loved the last part
The way maan behaved and the way they ignored all peoples comment was nice
I liked maan's character the most
If possible give epi too

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 11 years ago

#326

One of the finest and lovely story !!

Cute and Beautiful.

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Nivedithachand

@Nivedithachand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#327

Awesome ss !! Loved Maan a lot !! I liked the way how ur character sketch for Maaneet was realistic !! Obviously.. No person will at once be able to get attracted & accept someone with physical inability.. But once they understand them & give themselves a chance for their feelings , eternal & beautiful relations blossom !! Loved the ss !!

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custodian75

@custodian75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#328

Just came across this SS and could not stop until I finished it. Beautiful and written from the heart. I have read many stories, where they use passionate scenes to hold the readers interest. But your story was clean, but gripping. It was a simple story with simple characters and the story narrated in a simple manner. Really felt nice after reading the story.

There were so many small things like Maan's sheepish smile, Geet holding her skirt tightly when nervous, this really made the story come alive. Really enjoyed reading your work,hopefully will get to read some more.

Take care.

I hope there is a prologue coming up.