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Originally posted by: Shruthe

😡 mein waiting to read and go... and aur bhi time lagega???

Originally posted by: Shruthe

this maan is so cool ... cute and awesome... not the usual angry wala... <3

DD ka naam o nishaan tak nahi hain... but the way he handles geet... just too good

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

DD ka naam o nishaan tak nahi hain... but the way he handles geet... just too good

Don't bhaging without updating !

Originally posted by: Shruthe

haan.. truly awesome blossom guy

cute title suits this maan

Part 15

She sat down on the couch as she looked at the cell phone in her hand. Yes he had given her chance today, given her a chance to decide what she wants from life. For the first time she can choose freely whether she wanted to go on with him or leave him forever, but alas it was so difficult to choose now. Earlier she wished to be independent to take her own decisions but today when she has chance, she feels helpless and confused.

She knew if she went out today, he won't come back to bug her, to force her or kidnap her again. The stance with which he left, it clearly showed he is hurt and today is the deciding day. If she goes with her earlier decision and believed her fears, then she will lose him forever but if she gave him a chance may be, may be they can live a life of love and togetherness.

But its like taking a real big risk for her, come on, she would be risking so many people's happiness and what about future, she is still not sure about her future, about future of their relation, whether he will regret his decision in future, or will give her his hand for rest of their lives and support her like her crutches have supported her all along.

She closed her eyes and remembered his smiling face, the immature happiness that sparkles in his eyes whenever he smiled how nice it will be to wake up seeing that smile and be in hold of those arms which support her whenever her leg slips. Yeah it would be like a true dream, a dream from which she will never want to wake up, but that would take lots of sacrifices from him and give her so much happiness that she won't be able to hold it properly.

Is she ready to take those sacrifices from him??? She knew he is childish but he isn't a kid, he isn't scared of his choice, instead he was more confident than her. What it would be like to dependent on him rest of her life, it won't be suffocating as she had felt when she had to depend on her jiju-dii, but it would give her a sense of right on him.

Is it worth a try??? Is it worth to trust but she already trusts him because she loves him. We can't love a person whom we can't trust, trust is basic need of a true love and her love is as blessed as nectar of a flower because he reciprocated it too. She hadn't even thought in her worse dreams that he would ever love her back, but he did, he loved her more than she could ever imagine.

She took the packet he handed her and opened it, she thought it must be having some skirt and top as he had said he loved it most on her, but was surprised to see a pink-orange colour saree in it. She touched the fabric; it felt satin soft on her fingers.

She smiled as she realized when she wore saree, it was the day that boy rejected her, she could believe he was bowled seeing her in a saree!!! When men of today generation prefer skirts over Indian wear, he preferred her in a saree.

A smile formed on her lips and tears started flowing remembering his expression of love, he never had to use fancy things to express himself, just his small gestures made her heart jelly. She started laughing with tears in her eyes as she held that saree close to her heart and actually prayed god to bless her with his happiness.

It was 10 pm when he drove back to farmhouse where he had took geet. Somewhere he knew she was still there. Though lights were closed of the room, whole house looked dark, but still he knew she couldn't leave not after the way he walked away from here.

When he stepped inside the house, he called for geet, while his hand moved to search for the lights, but she didn't replied. He again called but only silence answered. His heart started getting heavy thinking she left but no she can't leave me, he assured himself.

Before he could switch on the lights, he heard the sound of match stick striking and soon a yellow light cover the entire dark hall. He looked at the direction from where the lights came and saw her standing over there, with a candle in her one hand while with her other hand she supported her crutch.

The faint yellow light fell on her face, enhancing her features, making her look like an angel dressed in that saree which just looked nothing in compared to her beauty. Her eyes were covered under the veil of her lashes as she kept looking down, avoiding his eyes.

Involuntarily, his legs moved toward her, his steps like a predator who was following his prey. Both of them were just, just the heavy breaths disturbed the silence of the room. Soon he was standing near her, his body just a foot apart from hers.

His hand held the candle from her hand and kept it on the table nearby, and then he held both of her hand in his, looking her from top to bottom, while she just kept looking down. He held her cheek with his hand and lifted her face making her eyes look at him, while his orbs looked deep into hers, searching for the answers for which he was waiting from long.

"geet agar aj mai kuch bol na paya na to sirf tumhara dosh hoga' he said looking deep in her eyes, while her eyes looked confused with his statement. "aj tumhare noor ke samne wo har chamak kam lag rhi hai jiski kisi insaan ko chah hoti hai" he said still looking deep at her face, her white skin glowed under his gaze, while her hesitating pink lips quivered under his gaze. "tum us din sundar lag rhi thi, par aj kisi pari se kam nhi lag rhi"

"maan' she said as hot red blood rushed in her veins making her turn scarlet. "mujhe apko kuch kehna hai" she said seeing him still lost in her. "hmm mujhe pata hai, bolo am listening". "woh mai ye keh rhi thi ki, wo maine faisla kiya hai ki..." "jaldi bolo..." he said as he stepped more closer to her, stepping in her personal space.

"ha bol rhi hu na... thoda time to do" she said as she twisted her pallu. "abhi yahi mujhe kuch sunana ho to your tongue works as a machine gun but abhi pyaar ki baat ho to itna sochna pad rha hai" he said moving his hand in her hair, caressing her soft curly tresses... "maan" she whined seeing him smirk at her condition, while she was feeling so emotional at the moment, this moment she feared to even see in her dreams and today she has the luck to live it in all her senses, really she still couldn't believe if it's a truth or a lie, but if lies are so sweet then who want to live in reality.

She took a deep breath and in a single breath said, "I Love You" as the words left her mouth, he hugged her tightly, so tight that she couldn't even breathe, he pulled her as close as he can and then lifting her in his arms by waist, he swirled her in air, they both chuckled as he swirled her fast. Awww he was so happy, he cant even express, he just felt he had won the world today and this win was the most precious thing in this world for him.

"I love you maan" geet said placing her hands on his cheek when he lowered her down, but held her tight from waist to keep her up straight. "I love you so much, I cant live without you" she said again as tears filled her eyes but she didn't cried, and then lifting her face, she kissed his face all over, his face, forehead cheeks, chin, nose her full face and then looked at him while he was all the while grinning seeing her like that, so expressive for the first time!!! For the first time she let all her barrier down, letting all her restraints away.

He pulled her as close as he can and finally replied, "love you too geet, my geet" he said as he bent toward her face, looking deep in her eyes, then looked at her lips and then at her eyes, while she was just smiling all the while. He got his cue and pressed his lips on hers, softly caressing her soft ones creating heat between them. Her body melted with his each simple caress on her lips, while he just kept pressing her lips with his.

Soon he started sucking her lips with taking them in his, pulling them licking them wetting them. She too responded with the same fervour, giving him his share of pleasure. Soon he was breathless as he left her lips, while she just hugged him tight breathing hard and red, blushing as hard as she can. Her crutches were long on floor, while she was standing just on his support, while he took all her wait on his without even a flinch.

Seeing her blushing, he picked her in his arms, in bridal style and took her to couch and sat her down. He too sat next to her and said, "tumko pata hai kitni baar maine imagine kiya hai ki how will I kiss you... and my dreams were nothing in comparison to the reality... aha it was so amazing" he confessed sheepishly while she just turned redder with his every word.

"besharam" she hit him with the cushion while he laughed and said, "madam don't act as if you don't dream about me, I know you girls also have passionate dreams with your man bas mai bolta hu aur tum chupati ho" he haughtily replied making her blush more while she just looked away in embarrassment. He suddenly got serious and held her hand in his and said, "promise me something today seriously, aj ke baat se kabhi bhi tumhare man me koi bhi baat ho you will tell me all instead of keeping it with yourself... jaise is baar you tried to hide your feelings thinking it will make me happy, but aisa nhi tha na... and I know there will be circumstances jab tumhe aisa lag sakta hai ki you don't fit with me ya log tumhe aisa sochne pe majpur kare but you know you have to do what!!! Just come and tell me... and if you didn't do that geet, trust me mujhse bura koi ni hoga"

"maan itna asan nhi hota..."

"but itna difficult bhi nhi hai na..." he cupped her face and said, "geet jitna confident I am about our relation utna mai kisi cheej ke lye nhi tha life me, and thus I know we are perfect for each other... no one is better or worse... just equal we are right"

Geet just hugged him tightly as she said, "I never knew god has blessed me with such a love maan... lifelong I cursed him for making me like this, but now I know it was his blessing to make me meet you..."

They too just stayed in each other's arm for some time, when she realized that her maggi must have been turned cold by now and shrieked, "kya hua achanak" maan asked. "meri maggi... I cooked it for dinner and then u came, ab wo thandi ho gyi hogi... jao leke aao kitchen pe hai, am hungry, and take the candle with u, lights nhi hai"

He just shook his head for her over reaction for maggi and obliged with her order and went to bring her maggi. Well it had turned cold, but they had nothing else left so they had to settle with it for their first date, as maan had declared this evening as his first candle light date with geet. They both fed it to each other, relishing it and then fighting over the last bite.

After he was done, he went in the room and brought a packet with him. "ye kya hai" geet asked as she looked at the yellow box in his hand. He went and sat on the other end of the couch and then bends down and lifted her legs and kept them on floor. "ye aap kya kar rhe ho" geet asked as she felt faint touches of his palm on her legs, they don't have much senses since childhood.

"mai London se sabke liye gfts laya tha na, tumne manga kyu nhi apna"

"mai kaise..."

"tab to achi baat hai, shadi ke baad my money would be saved from you as you won't ask for it right!!!" he winked at her while she looked for another pillow to throw at him, but then she realized she had used all the pillows that were close to hers.

Maan opened the box and took out a pair of silver anklets. It was a simple anklet with single string and lots of ghungroos were attached to that string. Lifting her saree a little, he tied both the anklets on her legs, while she just looked at them and then at him thinking why he brought them when she cant even walk properly.

He just admired the way those anklets sparkled on her white legs, they looked really beautiful there. He bent down and kissed her where those anklets were ties, while she tried to feel the faint touch of his lips on her legs.

"ye kyu... I mean"

"I want to hear the tinkling sound of these ghungroos when you walk instead of the thud sound of your crutches. Pata hai why I only chose this one, because it have lots of small ghunghroos in it, dekhna pura ghar goonj uthega tumhare kadmo se..."

Next day he took her to geet's house in the morning. Suhana opened the door and smiled warmly as she saw geet in the saree (the same saree she wore last night as she hadn't changed yet). The glow on their faces clearly showed that everything has solved and she had accepted maan whole heartedly. She welcomed both of them insides and that's when she heard the chun chun sound with geet's every step. She looked at geet with a confused look and then said, "geet apne pair dikha"

When geet lifted her saree a little, she saw those anklets and smiled in delight. Her gaze immediately moved to maan who was grinning foolishly with suhana's amazed look. "must say the best gift for geet" while maan just looked at geet lovingly as she glowed with the comment and mostly with the sound these anklets made with her steps.

"accha hua you took her back today, her jiju was growing tensed not seeing her yesterday morning... agar maine bata diya hota ki I let you to kidnap her to bhut gussa hog ye hote... he is really protective towards her"

"aapne help kiya matlab???" geet asked shocked.

"to tujhe kya laga he kidnapped you himself, madam maine hi use ghar me entry di thi and packed your clothes wagarah, warna ye to puri jindagi me nhi kar pata" suhana said remembering how maan was trying to climb pipe but fell in first step itself and she woke up hearing the sound. But when he explained his love and plan, she had to support him in every way, taking gamble for her sister's happiness.

Geet looked at maan and glared, "tumne to kha tha ki you kidnapped me... aise kidnap karte hai sabko bata ke!!!"

"are I was trying to impress you.. ab thoda bhut chalta hai" he said rubbing his neck with his hand as he grinned foolishly while all just shook their head at his line.

Next day geet went back to khurana mansion in afternoon, like always. All looked quite excited to see her back and greeted her warmly, they were also amazed with the anklets she wore, most was mansi as she loved the noise it made, and declared to dadima that she want one for herself too of the same design, at which dadi obliged loving the little girl's play.

In evening maan and dev returned from office too. As maan's eyes fell on geet, he was just too bowled to see her and wanted to be with her, but with family he cant so he excused to be tired and signalled geet to come their after a moment.

When geet reached near his room after sometime, he pulled her inside suddenly and pinned her to wall. Her crutches fell from her hands and he supported her with his arms, as they wrapped tightly around her waist making her lean on wall, while he bent down to close the distance for a quick kiss. "saree kyu nhi pehni" he whined after they parted breathless while she just laughed seeing his face. "I don't have so many sarees maan, mainly skirts hi hai"

"dekhna in our marriage, I am going to fill your wardrobe with all colours of sarees, tab I want you daily to wear a saree samjhi" he said as he bent his head near her ears. "agar mai mana kar du to!!!" geet said pulling back, but then wrapped her hands around his neck. "mana karogi to tumhe khud pehna dunga saree apne hatho se samjhi" and again stole a kiss as she opened her mouth shocked with his bold statement.

"maaannn" geet moaned in kiss as he traced each corner of her mouth with his tongue... and immediately they heard another "maan" from outside which immediately halted their passion, making them pull apart from each other. He immediately picked her crutches and gave her asking to correct her dress and hair while he did his.

Both tried to control their laboured breathes as they waited for the person to come inside. Soon naintara came inside and was shocked to see geet there. "geet aap yaha" "wooo woo" geet hesitated but maan replied on her behalf, "wo maine bulaya tha baat karne bhabhi" "pakka baat hi ho rhi thin a devar ji" naintara said but then started laughing herself at the looks they both gave her, "are mai Mazak kar rhi thi aap dono serious hogye"

Both of them released their breathes which they were holding and sighed!!! "accha maan hum apko kuch dikhane aye the, ye us ladki ki photo hai jo humne apke liye select ki hai... bikul apki choice ki hai, modern smart etc etc" naintara said, and with the words geet turned pale too. She looked at maan who also looked back at her with the same look.

"bhabhi bhabhi aap baithiye na mujhe bhi kuch kehna hai" maan said and pulled naintara by arm and made her sit on bed while he sat on floor on his hinges. "bhabhi ab na mujhe aisi ladki se shadi nhi karni" "matlab" naintara asked shocked. "bhabhi ab I want a girl jo traditional ho, intelligent aur mature ho... beautiful bhi ho aur uske hairs bilkul waist length ke hone chahiye... aur ha wo sarees and kurtis pehnti ho instead of these skirts. Bilkul apke jaisi ho jo hum sabse pyaar kare" "oh aisa maan, I am sure this girl would be pleased to change herself to be a girl of your wish, unhe bas aap chahiye, wo apki pasand banne ke liye kuch bhi karegi"

Geet got sadder with naintara's words and then looked at maan who was looking at her defeated too. She knew maan loved and respected naintara most and would never go against her words nor she wanted him to do so, she felt her dream just ended and thus made a move toward the door. But then naintara gave her the packet and said, "geet aap bhi dekhiye is ladki ko, after all maan is your friend aur bataiye kaisi hai"

geet looked at the packet and then at naintara and then at maan who looked sad too... she just doesn't have in her to see this picture but for his happiness she can do that, she thought. She took the packet and was about to open it when she remembered his words about never letting go from last night. yeah she cant let it go, she had to try, she decided and thus closed back the packet and said, bhabhi mai ye nhi dekh sakti"

"kyu" naintara gave a shocked look to geet.

"kyuki mai maan se pyaar karti hu, aur wo bhi mujhe chahte hai. Hum ek dusre ke sath rehna chahte hai, and I request you to please accept this relation. Chahe mai uske layak nhi, but uski khusi mai hi hu, and I am sure you all just want that jo mai chahti hu, uski khushi... please bhabhi accept us"

Naintara looked at geet shocked and said, "aap hmari pasand ko bina dekhe na keh rhi hai geet... shayad ye ladki maan ke jyada layak ho... if you love him, leave him"

"bhabhi I was going to do that, but ab nhi kar sakti. I will leave him only when he says that himself tab tak unka saya ban sath rhungi, hmesha" geet was all in tears till now and naintara's heart just melted seeing those tears as she stood and took geet in her arms and gave a look at maan, "bas maan I cant act more, see how easily she cried, bhut pareshan karte ho tum use" naintara said as she caressed geet by hairs while geet sobbed and looked at them shocked trying to understand whats going on while maan was just smiling seeing her cry.

"ye kya keh rhi hai aap bhabhi" geet asked as she tried to find her voice and looked at maan and naintara confused.

"mai btati hu devrani ji" naintara said, devrani ji' itself confirmed geet that she accepted geet as maan's partner, "actually maan me I was noticing some change since few weeks, aur kyi baar I caught him looking at you secretly, apki nazre bhi maine pakdi thi geet maan ko chori chupe dekhte waqt. I just got an idea something was going on but still wasn't sure. Phir us din shadi wali baat wale din, maan ne ladki ka naam sunte hi aapko dekha, I was sure he was getting attracted to you. My first reaction was I was shocked, maan is really very dear to me, he was just 15 when I came in this house tab se maine ise sambhala hai, I wont tolerate a wrong partner for him and I was speculated about you.

Then the very next day he came to me and told about his confusion towards you. Maine use kha ki if he loves you then I have no problem and asked him to think deeply and then he left for London to analyse his love. All the while I knew it would be difficult to make family agree too and thus I started giving hints to family that I chose you as maan's partner. First they disapprove and I hope you understand that geet" to which geet nodded and naintara continued "but finally they thought to leave all on maan as its he who have to live with you as your life partner. Two days back maan ne btaya ki you refused him because of his happiness which made all believe ki you love maan equally and fully accepted you. Even he made everyone understand ki how much he loves you and everything else he can take care of. Aur it was his wish ki koi bhi apko in sab bato ke bare me na pata chalne de till he returns from London that's why none said anything to you just silently tested your love for him."

"phir ye sab kyat ha, ye girl ki photo" geet said

"ye mera revenge tha" maan said.

"kya" geet asked with tears in her eyes.

"wo tumhare pakka' wala sawaal pe gussa utar rha tha mai upar se I wanted to make sure ki tum meri baat ko seriously le rhi ho ya nhi... if today you wouldn't had voiced your opinion to lifelong you would hadn't been able too!!! Agar aaj mujhe jane deti to shayad future me bhi jane deti, and I wanted to be sure ki you if not fight atleast speak for your right over me... apne pyaar ko bolne ki himmat dekh rha tha tumme"

With his words geet started wailing like a child, while naintara just smiled at her reaction and said to maan, "ab aap hi sambhaliye apni geet ko aur ha khabardaar jo ise pareshan kiya, mai neeche jati hu dadima se kehne to fix your marriage date warna am sure tab tak tum ise pareshan kar doge"

Maan took geet in his arms while she continued wailing and pushing him away, as if he cared. He held her more tightly and kept her head on his chest and said, "ale mere bacha, mera babu mera baby rone laga,... na ro baby..." he kept cooing childishly in her ears until she calmed and was smiling widely.

Mansi clapped her hands as she saw her chachu and chachi sitting near fire and doing everything that panditji said. "chachi you are looking very beautiful in this red dress" mansi whispered in geet's ears as she settled beside her. Maan had specially ordered their marriage dress for geet and ordered designer to not make it heavy, as he knew geet would have difficult in carrying those heavy marriage lehngas.

"dulha dulhan phero ke liye khade ho jae" panditji said.

Maan stood up but geet kept sitting as her crutches weren't near her. Since the time she had come in the hall, people were whispering things among themselves about how incomplete she looks in front of maan. As they say thousand mouth speaks thousand different words, but here everyone just thought maan took pity on her, and now when she couldn't stand they all got chance to speak it loudly.

Geet had heard all, and so did maan but none said anything. Maan just didn't cared for what they all said, he was way too excited to be with his geet, and he has no time for all this nonsense while geet, she knew these talks were baseless because she knew that which none of them know, and that is the love that this person has in his heart for her which is way too powerful to support her all his life.

Geet looked at maan as panditji waited for geet to stand. Maan just grinned, his usual foolish one and bent down and in a move picked her in his arms, in bridal style shutting most of the mouths with his acts while his family just started clapping at his act.

Geet wrapped her arms around his neck as he took circles around holy fire while panditji chanted mantras, making them one with all rituals. She was already his in all means, it was just a ritual which they had to complete and now all her arzoo, her wishes were complete as she was what which no one can be, she was Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana in all real means.

So I think this is the most apt end I could give to this SS: Arzoo. I know I didn't get such response which I used to get in my previous ones and truly speaking I didn't cared too. I had written drama, romance everything, but Arzoo felt special because it was romantic in its own way, that simple romance that you see all around yet you hide it in fear of society, family, others.

But only the real lover can have guts to express it, and the moment he realizes that I think all the difficulties clears at the very moment just a perspective is needed. I gave mine and I hope you all will give yours.

Just few lines of what you think of Arzoo I expect from you all...

And I hope you all will fulfil this wish as I am asking for the first and last time to comment on this SS. Just if you felt it was different please come and say.

I most importantly would thank all those people who came forward and expressed your pain or your loved ones pain because of the physical issues, and I think that was the most I can ask as the writer. Guys I am not taking any name, but yeah you are the real awards for me because as a writer if you struck some chord in readers heart you achieved everything.

Special thanks to OsheenDGr8 for motivating me in this idea and pushing me in this writing field, you made me see a talent in myself of which I wasn't aware of.

@shrutheajay: thanks dear for your awesome banners and support you provided when I felt weak.

@Lakshmi: you are a sweet heart and you know that too. With your pictures and posts you always support me.

@priya111: you motivated me with your pictures and posts dear. Thankyou very much.

Thankyou all those whose name I didn't mentioned but I care for you all. Thankyou very much.

And here's my surprise guys:

MG: Sajda

First of all congrats on completing your third Fiction on Maaneet...

neha ... loved the update dear... will comment tom...

GN

It was mind blowing!

God knows how many Times I will read it again nd again!
I read the last update at least 20 times!!!!

Aab itne jaldi story khatam hogay to ek epilogue to baanta hai na????