MG~ SS~The Mist ... THREAD 2 .. UPDATED Pt20/Pg122/04 Nov.. ... .... . - Page 83

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For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.












Part - 20



Maan decided that from now he'll talk to his family normally and won't hurt them with his ignorance * he was feeling bad that he ignored and hurt his Dadima and Dad without any reason * they never complaint and forced him for anything even they never talk about his marriage and anything related to that in front of him . This girl who married to him was living here from last five months, but they never mentioned her presence in KM in front of him * they kept her away from me knowing my feelings * they were supporting him and bearing everything quietly* now onwards he won't hurt them and take care of them .

Maan: I lost d charm of my life but i won't let them suffered coz of me anymore. Ye marriage ek dikhawa hei .. Aur Dikhawa hi rahegi.. Family respect ke liye ek compromise. Maan jaise chalta aa raha hei waisa hi chalne de * wo tujhse dur hei aur tu usse anjaan * last 5 months se sab kuch peacefully chal raha hei aur aage bhi essa hi chalne de * agar Dadima aur Dad usse yahan rakhna chahate hei to unki khusi or respect ke liye tu thodi tolerate ker le * jaise ab tak dur aur anjaan raha waise aage bhi raha sakta hei.


Maan felt lil light and content after this decision and slept peacefully * he woke up and started his daily routine and came down for BF. He went to Dev's room to meet him and asked about his health then took his BF and left for KC * in absence of Dev day must be going lil hectic for him .


Annie came back from Shimla and a sweet girl was with her * she introduced her to Dadima .


Annie : Dadima ye Meera hei meri Sr hei , but Shimla tour mei hum bahot acche friend ban gaye* Meera ke mom-Dad ko emergency mei kisi relative ke yahan jana pada to mei force kerke apne sath le aai .. wahan akele rahana padta.


Meera wished Dadima and Dadima blessed her .


Dadima : accha kiya beta , akele ku rahana , jab tak aapke parents nahi aa jate aap yahin rahiye , esse apna hi ghar samjho.


Annie : Dadima dev bhai kaise hai ab? Kya hua unhe achanak se?


Dadima : Dev ab theek hei Annie , Geet ne sab bade acche se manage kiya* wo apne room mei hei jao mil lo.


Annie went to meet dev and Meera too went with her to meet her sick bro for courtesy . Annie hugged her bro and asked about his health. She introduced Meera to Dev and they wished to each other. They spent some time there and Annie asked everything from start to end * Dev too replied her and praised Geet for her help.


In evening Geet came back home and met Annie in living room talking to Dadima * Annie hugged her and thanked her for caring her bro in their absence. Annie intro Meera to Geet.


Annie : Guddu isse milo ye meri friend Meera , ek do din humare sath rukegi.


Geet wished her and Meera too.


Meera: mei bhi tumhe Guddu kaha sakti hu ? I liked ur name.


Geet smiled and agreed. She chatted for few min and then excused herself to go for change. Dadima and Annie understood and told her to take rest. Geet came in her room and shut her in her world * she changed and prepared a coffee for her and took out a folder from her bag to read * after reading them thoroughly she called YSK .


YSK: hello Guddu beta , bolo kaise phone kiya?


Geet: hello GE uncle , wo mujhe kuch paper work ke liye aapse milna tha .


YSK: OK , after dinner come to my study , we'll discuss there. Aur kuch?


Geet: no , thanks . I'll be there. Bye uncle. ... Bye beta.


Maan came home and changed * spent some time reading his files and came down to take dinner with Dadima and YSK * find Dev , Annie and a new girl there. Annie wished him and gave intro of Meera * all were talking randomly but Maan was quite . Nakul placed d dinner for all and they started but Meera noticed that Guddu was not there.


Meera: Dadima , Guddu dinner ke liye nahi aayegi kya?


All became numbed with this question and gave a look to each other* Maan too felt a jerk in him with d name of Guddu and his hand stopped moving . Dadima looked at Maan and tried to cover up .


Dadima: Beta wo dinner nahi leti fruits and juice leti hei bas , Tum dinner karo uska Nakul dekh lega , but Dadima and YSK lost their appetite * they hardly finshed their meal with a heavy heart and Maan noticed that. He realised that how a simple question of her absence hurt d family and how hard it for them to cover up d mess .

All took their dinner and went to their respective rooms . Maan felt very bad and immediately shut him inside his room* he spent a long time in his study thinking about his family who was also facing d tough time like him .


After half an hour Geet rang YSK to meet him and he called her in study. Geet came there with d papers .


Geet: uncle in papers per aapke sign chahiye thy mujhe office mei submit karne hei aur ITR ke liye bhi show kerne hei.


YSK : OK, lao dikhao .


Geet hand over him that folder* he read them and looked at her shocked .


YSK: Guddu ye to rent lease ke papers hei ? tumhe ku chahiye? Aur ye tumne marriage status single ku likha hei?


Geet: I'm sorry uncle, but i didn't have any option * my company paid for my accommodation and it help me in ITR and 2nd I have to apply for PAN Card so i gave many id proofs for that and mere pass koi marriage proof nahi hei. I'm working in a Swiss Company and they want many proofs for Med insurance and family status if i have any .


YSK understood her prob she was right at her place but all these things were hurting him deep. He signed that lease with a heavy heart and filled d required information .


Geet : uncle every month aapke a/c mei company money deposit ker degi.


YSK : Guddu lekin ye to kaffi amount hei.. 25k ?


Geet: uncle ye pay package ke according hei , sabko milta hei.


YSK came close to her , cupped her face and packed on her head lovingly and spoke with a heavy voice.


Guddu , I'm sorry beta , meri respect ke liye tumhe bahot kuch jhelana pad raha hei * tumhari her jaroorat aur khushi ka khayal rakhna humara ferz hei lekin yahan to hum kuch bhi nahi ker pa rahe hei * tum kuch bhi humse nahi leti sirf de hi rahi ho beta.


Geet: Please essa matt kahiye uncle * aap ku sorry bol rahe hei ? Aapki jagah koi aur hota wo bhi shayad yahi kerta * aap ki to koi galti nahi thi ussme* Please aap sorry matt boliye aur mei meri life jee rahi hu.


YSK: U r a god gift for us beta * pata nahi wo kab samjhega?


Geet felt uneasiness and excused herself to go * she didn't want to talk about him. She bid GN and YSK blessed her .



Precap - Jadoo and Pari's departure and Maan's observation ...


Part - 21

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😛
aaj fir mein ist,,,,,
Congo 2 me...😆😆
mera fir se tuka lag gaya,,,,,😛
Edited by LILY111144 - 11 years ago
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waah kya baat hain!!! a person always at the giving end... and others are just receiving on and on from her!!! maan kuch kar jaldi nahi tho chullu bhar paani bhi kam na pade!

maan kuch dekh aur seekh!!!
Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lils aur bata ... rems ka new story padha?
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

lils aur bata ... rems ka new story padha?

yeh mast strt hei yaar,,,hv u strtd smthing nu,,,??
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

😛

aaj fir mein ist,,,,,
Congo 2 me...😆😆
mera fir se tuka lag gaya,,,,,😛



Congo lils


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thnku 😳yeh to awain hi chauka lag gaya,,,,😆

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