MG~ SS~The Mist ... THREAD 2 .. UPDATED Pt20/Pg122/04 Nov.. ... .... . - Page 33

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



abhi tak kyu nahi aayi babie?

hi lksbabie missing u,,,aaj abhi tak kyon nehii aayee,,,??.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

aaj raat ko main nahi aaoongi babie meri tab aur phone dono paani khoob nahaya aur kharab hogaye😭😭😭

i kept phone and tab in my purse and waterbottle patha nahi kaise bottle open hogayi hai aur poora paani bahar aagayi now i cant come with tab when ur jiju is there usko repair keliye bheji

wo ek rastha tha tumsab se milne keliye aapke jiju jab ghar par hothe thay😭


Oyeee priya ye kya kiya...???
Dono ko ek sath nahala diya..?😲
ab kya karegi.. ??
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Posted: 11 years ago


Lakshu...😛

Sorry late ho gai... abhi aai hu.. bahar se...
Diwali wish karne gaye thy relatives ko..
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Posted: 11 years ago



Lakshu,priya,Mona,lily and Sona...🤗 Jhappiieess
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

aaj raat ko main nahi aaoongi babie meri tab aur phone dono paani khoob nahaya aur kharab hogaye😭😭😭

i kept phone and tab in my purse and waterbottle patha nahi kaise bottle open hogayi hai aur poora paani bahar aagayi now i cant come with tab when ur jiju is there usko repair keliye bheji

wo ek rastha tha tumsab se milne keliye aapke jiju jab ghar par hothe thay😭😭😭😭

yeh kya kaand kar dala priya...😲ab kya hoga ,,,,??hope jaldi theek ho jaye,,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
gr8 part dear...
geet in virtual world...thts too on IF...but one thing is right...after log-in on IF make forget the track of time...

maan is paying hard for his one wrong decision and his relations are also affected by tht...

thnks for the Pm dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago


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😊 Updating...


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago



For banner credit goes to my dear Lakshmi....🤗


We need a little tears to clear the Mist in our eyes,
a little assurance to clear the Doubts in our head,
a little hug to nurse our Aching hearts,
and a little rest to carry on Moving forward.

Glimpse ...

Nothing is there to trust, nothing is there to love , a broken base of relation and a misty way to go.
Their heart full of pain , their mind full of hate , an uncertain relation and a long way to go.

Note... This is a fiction. If someone feel that it reflect any other writer's work , then plzz pm me . I'll try my best to keep it un affected ... This is all imaginary not reality so enjoy it . Plz avoid if u find any mistake.












Part - 16



Four months passed in same manner ,, Maan built a wall of ruthless around him ,, he made him busy in business ,, no parties , no outings and no get together with friends ,, he cut him off from all his friends . He attended only business parties and tried to stay away from crowd . His life was going on like this alone , isolated and workaholic ,, he find this d best way to avoid useless questions ,, he very well knew that he didn't have any reply if someone asked any personal q from him regarding his married life coz for d outer world he was a married person , so he built a strong wall of terror around him with his hard behaviour and all d KC staff feared to face him.

On d other side Geet finished her internship and got many good offer for job but she decided to join other field . She wanted to do her MBA in finance so she joined a Swiss Finance Company on d basis of her good score in Actuarial Science. The package was healthy and d office was in C**** City, GGN ,, the company giving her many perks and it was very convenient for her too . She needed a good job to stand on her feet to face her uncertain future ,, She discussed about her job before joining it with YSK and Dadima . They offered her to join KC , but she refused that ,, they were not in that condition to force her ,, She was already living a miserable life of a married girl, but far away from all beauty and happiness of a married girl . She was also living an isolated life in their KM only for their respect .


Geet started her work and her life was on same track like before ,, she talked to jadoo, pari ,,Kamal ,Preeti and Bui on phone and skype every day and night on IF with her online friends ,but she didn't contact her dad once ,,, this marriage parted a daughter from her father .. A big lose for two ,,both were dying to talk to each other but helpless at their places.


Geet was waiting for her dad's call and Mahinder was in dilemma to face her daughter ,, he was dying every day to throw her daughter in this life of compromises . Every month he deposited a heavy amount of money in Geet's a/c for her expenditures ,, he talked to Dadima and YSK daily to get d news about Geet . He got d news of Geet's job from YSK but didn't get d courage to congrats her for her 1st success . He spent very less time in d Haveli and lived in his FH most of d time .. alone . The family of his late bro only killing him ,, he was bounded to take care of that family and did his duty sincerely but at d cost of his and his daughter's happiness. Now Brij was also going to marry a daughter of Promila's cousin and his duties were over , but he lost everything now.


Jadoo(Rishi) and pari were a big support for Geet to settle in new life everyday they talked to her n boosted her mind ,, they take care of her every need ,, took her for outing and shopping on weekends,, they never allowed her to go alone outside,, But this support of Geet was going away from her very soon ,, Jadoo and Pari were going to US for their research work next month.


It was marriage season ,, Dadima and YSK were going to attend a marriage In Udayapur(Raj) , Annie was on her collage tour for a week in Shimla and Maan was on business tour in Mumbai ,, there was a prob on their proj on Mumbai-Pune highway . Dev was here to look after d KC in d absence of YSK and Maan and he was not feeling well too to go out for 2-3 days.


Dadima informed Geet about their departure and requested her to take care of house in her absence ,, it was d first time Geet was living alone in KM . It was Friday and Geet came back in Eve with a happy mood coz of two days holidays for rest and IF . She entered in d Hall and find Nakul there with a ice water bowl in his hand .


Geet: Hi dada kaise ho ? ye ice water kahan le ja rahe ho?


Nakul: choti memsaab wo ye Dev saab ke liye hei ,, unhe fever hei subaha se ,, wo thandi patti rakh raha hu ser per.


Geet: fever hei!! Dr ko dikhaya..?


Nakul: ji ,, din mei aaya tha med di hei per bukhar kam nahi hua ,, kuch khaya bhi nahi hei .


Geet: chalo mei dekhti hu ,,


Geet came in dev's room with Nakul and checked him ,, he was in high fever and his face was looking red ,, Geet checked his hands ,feet and legs and find some rashes there ,, she suspect something and asked to Nakul that did Dr suggest for blood test?


Nakul: nahi wo bola aaj med lo fever nahi kam hua to kal blood test karenge.


Geet opened her phone and searched for some Path labs ,, after few min she made a call to Dr L** p*** lab for blood test ,, it was a very big and reputed lab and gave home services. She sat there and putting cold pads on Dev's forehead to slow down d temp. After half an hour a man from lab came there ,, she told him everything and demanded result ASAP , specialy platelets and dengue test. He took Dev's blood and left from there saying to check d report on line and gave her their bill slip having their phone numbers and their site add.


Geet told Nakul to bring some soup for Dev and some liquid to drink every after half an hour . Nakul brought that and Geet woke up Dev and forced him to take soup ,, coz it was needed for him ,, he took that unwillingly.


Geet: Dada , uncle ya Dadima ko bataya kya Dev ke bare mei?


Nakul: nahi c. memsaab ,, Dev saab ne mana kiya ,, wo shaadi mei busy honge aur chinta karenge.. bole kal tak theek ho jayega ,, fever hi to hei.


Geet: hmmm ,, chalo pahale report aane do , fir dekhtey hein.


Geet was sitting there taking care of dev and checking his fever ,, but he was in same condition ,, After one hour she called at Path Lab and asked about reports and they informed her that they put that on site and she could check that on line. Geet opened her lappy and checked her reports and find that his platelets were very less than normal count. She became tense ,, her doubt was right .. It could be dengue ,, coz lots of people were suffering from this disease in d city and NCR.


Geet tried to woke up Dev who was in d effect of med and high fever ,, Dev responded with difficult ,, Geet called Nakul and asked about d Dr who r treated him ,, Geet told Dev that he needed to be admitted in hospital ASAP ,, Dev denied but Geet was adamant ,, Nakul gave her Dr number and she described him d situation ,, after listening d reports Dr too suggested her to brought him in hospital at once.


It was night Geet told Nakul to call driver and got ready for hospital and she took her bag and reports ,, helped Dev in walking ,, they were in d hospital after half an hour ,, Khurana's family Dr was also there and he admitted Dev and started their tests ,, he too was suspecting d symptoms of Dengue. They shifted Dev in a private ward and started their treatments . Geet tried Dadima and YSK number but that was coming unreachable ,, she was very worried now.


It was a very big and private hospital and charged very high ,, Geet was taking care of everything * it was night and she want someone to stay with Dev * Nakul was with her and not a single responsible person was there in KM* she sent Nakul back to KM and told him to try to contact Dadima and YSK . Nakul came back and Geet stayed at hospital * she was trying again and again Dadima and YSK number but all in vain * for her bad luck she didn't have Annie's number and Dev's phone was at home. Kya karun ab?


Dr came on round to check Dev and find his condition same * he suggested Geet to arrange some one who could donate Blood Platelets for Dev because if count dripped more he needed them . She asked his Blood grp and Dr replied A -ive. Cool ,,, she said that she is A-ive and she could give him * Dr told him to go to hospital's blood bank and contact there . She went there and deposited money there * they tested her blood also and told her that it took nearly 1-2 hrs to separate the platelets from blood .


Now Geet was in a fix and at last she called her Dad *Mahinder was sleeping at that time he saw Geet name and a fear hit him ,, why she is ringing this time ? wo theek to hei ? He replied with thudding heart ..Hello


Precap - Changing weather...



Part - 17





Sorry for mistakes.

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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UNresed*...😉

superb...geet finally free frm studies and got the job...it was important for her to be self-dependent...and this job truly means her a lot...her father still hav no courage to talk to her...tht is soo coward...she is his only daughter and in flow of those useless relations he ignored her a lot...and now whn rishi and pari will leave to US she will be all left alone...
Edited by manikka - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yesss...
m 1st time on update page...

i just love myself...and u too to update on right time...

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