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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi mona sona babie laks babie priya ...🤗abhiii thorii der mein aatiii hun,,,,😳Angel Image


😆 Hi Lily.. Aate hi bhaag gai.. Bugs bunny graphics

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Posted: 11 years ago
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jeej ko khaana khilaane gayi kya lils?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

jeej ko khaana khilaane gayi kya lils?

tum sab ke liye,,,,
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



HAI DEARIES... KAISE HO SAB ???




meri net kachua hua aaj 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites




meri net kachua hua aaj 😭



😆 kal mujhpe has rahi thi bahut,,,, dekha,,,, net baba sab dekhthe hain😉
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aaj tho mona ka net slow hain...

tho yeh sab mera hua... haan babie bh hain... koi na usse share karloongi😉



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MonaSWrites




meri net kachua hua aaj 😭



Hello kachua kumari..😉😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am really so much overwhelmed with all precious comments you all are giving me .. Thank you so much 😊




(This FF i update daily so please don't wait for Pm.. please do check thread yourself, it's my kind request to all )



Part 41


Geet awaken with smile on her lips. She stretched her arms up in air and yawned patting back of hand on mouth. Her eyes were gleaming in joy with the remembrance of last night. How her trust won over Maan, nothing could be more wonderful than this feel. She threw cover from over and stood up. Her heart was beating slowly, in peace like had gotten the last thing in life and nothing more had wish for future. Her soul was satisfied. This morning felt the most beautiful creation of nature like cool breeze of summer feels to body with having full Moon up on sky. She wore the Dupatta and came out, wanted to have a glimpse of Maan before he could wake up. She wanted to satisfy her eyes staring his sleeping form like had yesterday, so could escape after from his naughtiness. She pouted thinking how he always teases her, force her to turn in red but then smiled thinking it feels so good though. She laughed over her weird thought.

Geet slowly started stepping up, with each step her heartbeats were increasing speed along with the breathing. She was restless like small birds become in seek of water. She was now standing outside the room. Her hand trembled; she clutched her heart and peeped inside through unfastened door.

"Where is he?', first question arisen in her mind when found place was empty with no sign of Maan inside. Her face became grumpy in disappointment then thought he may be having gone for washroom. But her plan had failed to drool over him. She came inside and sat on bed with grumpy face. but then the mere thought that her Maan had spent night laying on this bed her face turned alive, she caressed hands on the sheet softly feeling his presence here when suddenly she found something odd there.

"What's there?', she minded and opened the closed window to let sunlight brighten the room enough to see what had been kept on the bed and her eyes widen when looked at a large bunch of soft toys on the spot. She looked around; her room was filled with various small big gifts, table was filled with purses and bags whereas on couch been kept fashionable watches. On floor she found footwear among them most were so small like had been bought for 6 or 7 year old child but few were big enough to be fitted in her feet. Geet was wondering each and everything and her heart felt so touched with his effort to make her day so wonderful in every sense. She could help but happy tears came out to moisten her hazels. Geet was watching each gift feeling very pleased when she saw something was written on wardrobe mirror with red lipstick. She rushed to get closer view and read,

"Geet, it's a little try from me to exhibit my entire life inside yours single room and I hope I will get my prize altogether. Your and only yours, Maan'

She smiled with his open confession though he always had shown his love for her in different ways but every time it feels fresh. "You'll get your reward very soon Maan', she whispered. She touched his name with fingers and then touched with lips. She found wardrobe was opened. Expecting there must be something inside she pulled it opened and found all new dresses were hanging inside and then she found the most valued gift there. it was the same red Dupatta which had acted most important role in bringing them together.

Every memory from past, their first encounter appeared in her mind and she laughed in tears. She held near heart and kissed, then wore on head like a new bride. She was crying in uncontrolled happiness, wished to see him, wanted to confess her love for him. She didn't have anything to surprise him the way he was doing everything but the three words regard her love would be enough to fill his heart with extreme happiness she knew.

"I have to see him', she whispered. She rushed out in seek of Maan. Like a drunken she runs downstairs, she looked in kitchen, washroom, in every room but Maan was nowhere but she didn't panic. She knew he must be stealing her glimpse somewhere hiding. "but where?' she wanted to know. It looked like a child she was playing hide and seek game and she was seeker and desperately wanted to find her Maan. Her body was aching to feel him, his presence around, to feel his warm breath on her face like every time, she carved for his kiss on her forehead, on her cheeks and may be, on lips. She blushed but didn't stop. She runs to up floor, again went in room but it was yet vacant.

"Maan where are you', she whimpered then suddenly felt someone presence on the small veranda at the end of this corridor. Immediately she hastened there and then breathed out in relief when found him stood there with his signature smirk on lips. But as if she had sense to understand anything, she just runs and hugged him tight submitting her body completely in his arms encircling her arms around his neck. Maan was not so amazed with the result yet he had not expected the way she surprised him. It seemed she had given in everything to him. He also hugged her back with same loyalty.

"I love you Geet', he whispered, nuzzling face into her opened hairs and smelled them. He squeezed her body against his that made Geet more demanding for his feel. Her hands slowly started roaming over his back; she felt something unusual but it was good. She felt warmth of his body directly coming through his skin without any barrier in between. She could feel sweats over his back. Slowly their hugs started turning into profound, filled with need and carve from both sides.

Geet nuzzled her cheek over his shoulder that made Maan groan in pleasure and he tightened his grip. His lips started roaming over her hair and started giving soft kissed over it. He removed her hair from neck and kissed there. Geet had lost sense completely. Her palms were caressing his bare back with same passion when suddenly she startled with his teeth on her shoulder. The pain brought her back from long lost condition and she realized what was happening. Maan was still torturing her skin with his lips touches and that now started making Geet feel uneasy. She realized how easily she could feel his loud heartbeats against her chest. She could feel his moisten skin below her hand and that shocked her when realized he was not wearing his shirt on. "He is shirtless!!!'.

She started feeling uncomfortable instantly, could not gather courage to face him as she had turned into complete red. Maan also stopped when realized the lack of her response and he smirked when heard her heavy gasps.



Precap: Geet is jealous with swimsuit girls 😛😆


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Edited by MonaSWrites - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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🥳 Oyeee me 1st yaaro... 🥳





Kya baat hei.. shirtless Maan..😉😳
Sharam se Paani-Paani Geet..😳😳
Akele hum-Akele tum... Aur pura Ghar Band..😆😆
Khullam-Khulla Pyaar Karenge Hum Dono..


Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congo for new thread
amazing update loved it
maan such a darling
precap wow

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