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Posted: 11 years ago
Song wala part ya kuch bhi?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Song wala part ya kuch bhi?

kuch bhi chalega
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Deelight

teji singh.. u noe tat guy in tat foto s one of ma most fav characters!!! tis hs jz made d story more n more interestin... pl update sooon !!! egerly waitin!

Thank you 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Wonderful part n Amazing precap...

Thanks😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



aur nahi tho kya??? bas update de de and lakshmi khush khush khush😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nehakapoor7

wow wonderful update.. Nakul & Dadi r doing gr8 job .. MAan is angry but how much time will he be angry.. Geet is there in office too

waiting for next part

Thanks😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

TEASER

She opened her eyes to find the sun beating down on her. She raised her hand to block the glare of the sun and slowly looked around. Chandan was lying next to her, white as a sheet. His stillness scared her. She looked around her with shock as she saw miles and miles of desert around.

Their presence in the middle of the desert felt alien, like this was an old movie and they were props left behind, long forgotten there. She saw that she had been stripped of all her jewelry and even her shoes, so had Chandan. She called out to him but he did not hear her.

Panic settled fast and fierce in her veins and her heartbeats leapt out of control.
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Chalti hai saansein, pehle se zyada dil theharne laga...
Hummm...

Jeene laga hu...

My mother understands what has happened just by looking at my face but Megha is searching my eyes. Ma goes into get a pooja thali taking the package I hand her. I purposely put on a sad expression faking Megha out. She is saddened but she comes to me and places her head on my heart, her hands holding me in a hug.

"I got it Megha!", I whisper to her. Her eyes round and she holds her fingers to her mouth, her eyes shining and bright with happiness. I lift her high in my arms twirling happily bringing her down and crushing her to me. At last I have broken through.

We straighten up as Ma comes out and puts a tikka on my forehead. She places a tikka on Megha covering her with the saree I have gotten her placing the coconut and shakkar packet in her palloo. As such it is a simple act but in terms of rituals, it is a rokka.

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"Babaji! Yeh kya hua Di?", Geet's loud question brings me out of the Dev fog that I have been. Having awoken in his arms in the morning, the day has been like honey flowing in my veins. Not a moment has passed when we were not in each other's arms and I miss the sensation already. He has just dropped me off at the apartment where I see Geet has already come back from HP.

"Di! Yeh kya hua?", she is shaking me a bit and I come out of my stupor to see what she is pointing at.
I blush a dark color when I see she is pointing to the mark near my neck, but she has already gone to get some ointment mumbling along the way, "Mujhe pata tha. You don't take care of yourself Di. Mumbai mein kitne macchar (mosquitoes) hote hai. But sochnewali baat yeh hai ki Daadima was telling me that the place is air-conditioned. So macchar aaye kaha se?"
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So anyone waiting? Please comment and let me know..😃

VM of the song[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E1oRwLP1AaM[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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geet is just impossible...poor naintara...how is she gonna tell this budhu geet that it wasnt any mosquito but her veerji who is responsible😆😆😆
i lovvv this innocence of hers...how is maan goin to stay away from her...😳😃

and i c a good news comin meghas and his way...

woah exciiited ...
when can we expect the next part???😳😃
Edited by honeygrape - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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looks like every other couples are getting back on track 😃
Dev-tara are back from Mumbai
dev the macchar 🤣
full update soon pls
Edited by Jeevana. - 11 years ago

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