The Locket (12) MG FF, new thread pg 1, COMPLETED

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lily

@LILY111144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

avi mujhe pm nehiii mila...katti,,,,,😡

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

lovely update but missing maan n geet

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: aparna3011
lovely update but missing maan n geet

This story is not only about them.

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: LILY111144
avi mujhe pm nehiii mila...😃

bheja abhi... sowie..😃

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Ahem... Finally Dev made her to confess her love.. Gosh what reason she had given... for not putting chillies.. that his lips become pink.. kissable..😳 Well I-star.. Dev ki sangat ka asar hain... Dev-tara confession aisa hain toh Maneet confession kaisa hoga..? Dev doesn't know abt Maneet..?😲
Amazing part Avi...😃

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honeygrape

@honeygrape

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

looks like you have watched all these movies many tyms...both the srk dialogues were my all tym favourites...that still has the same effect whenever i hear them..😊😊 glad to see it here...

wonder why nt is not very jealous about the ease with which dev n aisha interacts with each other...

ohh dev's confession was tooo lovly and a beeeautiful one...

omg, they finallyyy confessed to each other...or i shud say that naintara admitted her feeling...sooo happy with that... i still cant blve that she said and did all those thinngs😳😳

phew, and the way the confessed was 😳 am speechless...😊

now waiting eagerly for the next part...

lovvvlyyy part Avi...

now i cant wait to see maneet confession...and u r growing as one of the bestest writers now Avi...no one can say that u r writing an ff for the 1st tym Avi...and ur sincerity in the work is somthng that requirs this👏

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mayyo

@mayyo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: dqno1

Not fair... baaki kafi kuch bhi tha...😲
stomping feet at everyone and their blushies...
ab phir aisa kabhi nahi likhungi... bol deti hu..😲

Arey thoda time toh do, to get myself out of the feel. Lamba comment bhi aayega! 😃

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Alpha01

@Alpha01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Lovely update. Loved the part where Dev is rehearsing how to propose - it was very inventive and entertaining even I was reading the dialogues and trying to guess where they were from. Finally Tara accepts her feelings for Dev and takes the plunge by telling him. Can't wait for the next part. 🥱

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valli30

@valli30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Lovely update
Dev reharshing how to propose tara 😛
Tara accepted her feelings 😳 😳
Precap
Eargely waiting for next part

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lily

@LILY111144

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: dqno1

bheja abhi... sowie..😃

mil gaya,,,,😳👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏sab kam hei jo bhi words use Karun,,,,,yanha dev ne rehasal strt ki ,,,films mein jo mja aya tha vo doble ho gaya,,,fir dev fnally cnfess kia ,,,superv,,,,suraj ke baad yeh hei asli tara lov her tesing,,,,hr confession nd deir mmnts ,,,,😳dev nd tara dresses wala scene rd karke aisa laga jaise saare pic. dekh rehii hun ,,,hyee,,,😳geet ka dev ne sahii description dia hei,,,,devtara lgta hei jaldii hi mneet ka secret pta lga lenge,,,,😉chlo ek stry to track pe aayeee ,waiting 4 dust ki entry aur apni jhalli kya kartee hei...😆avi ji tusi sha gaye,,,,,,😉

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