MG-SS - THE PUNISHMENT- THREAD 7- UPDATED - EPILOGUE/ FINAL PART-Pg104 - Page 48

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

am sending u a pm ..

DO CHECK IT NOW



😛😛 Check ur pm lakshu..
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Posted: 11 years ago
hello babie kaisi beethi aaj ka din bina paani aur khaana . vrat kholdiya.
khaana kya special banayi aaj tune.

special gift kya mila😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



din kaisa gaya??

vrat kab khola???

hubby ji ne kya gift diya? i mean jo humse keh sakthi hain wo bol... 😉

aaj mera net bada kachua hain...
😭



😊 day was masr...😉😳
gift mili iphone..😆😆 mei Apple Diwani..
net prob again... month end ki wajah se kya..?? mera bhi hota hei..
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Posted: 11 years ago




(For banner credit goes to Lakshmi ❤️ Thanku so much dear 😊 )

- Meredith Sapp


Prologue...


She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


Hope u all like it. plzz do hit like button and leave ur comments.









Part 80-c
Last Part


Meera and Dev reached there after half an hour ,, Meera was very excited hugged Geet after seeing her.

Meera : Geet kya ye sach hei?


Geet: haan Meer, ye sach hei.


Meera: per ye hua kaise ??


Geet: mujhe bhi nahi pata .. isliye kuch matt puch ,, please.


They parted and came inside d living room where Maan and Dev were talking some business points.


Geet: tum sab baten karo mei coffee ke liye bolti hu ,, CS ke na hone se badi prob ho rahi hei ,, wo to sab handle ker leta hei.


They took their dinner ,, Dev and Meera were planning for New Year Party ,, Dev wanted to go out and he asked to Maan to join them but Maan refused that saying ,, he'll live in KM with Dadima.


Geet too refused saying that there may be any emergency call for her at night , so u both go and enjoy.


Dev left with Meera to drop her at her home and Maan to KM ,, he planned something special for Geet and wanted to discuss with his Dadima , Mom and Dad.


Next day was started with new zeal for all it was d last day of d year ,, but there was no change in Geet's life ,, She was all alone and got up ,, started her day as usual ,, Maan called her and talked to her for few min ,, he reminded her to get ready at 8 .00pm and he'll come to pick her. After that all got busy with their respective works.


Maan came to Dadima's room and wished her ,, he hugged her dearly and Dadima understood that there was something behind this extra Muska ..


Dadima: kya baat hei beta aaj kuch jyada hi pyaar aa raha hei Dadima per?


Maan: ku mei kab aapse pyaar nahi kerta ,, bolo to?


Dadima naughtily smiled and pulled his leg saying: kerty hty ,, lekin aaj kal thodi cutting ho rahi hei ,,, koi aur bhi aa gaya na share kerne .


Maan blushed and replied smartly: Dadima essa bilkul nahi hei ,, mei kisi ek ki cheej dusre ko nahi deta ,, sabka quota separate hai.


Dadima: accha ji to quota ready ho gaya? Kis time se kis time tak?


Maan chuckled : before BF and after dinner.


Both laughed , Dadima patted his cheek lovingly and Maan hugged her.


Dadima : accha bolo kya chahiye?


Maan: Dadima aap ko bura to nahi lagega agar mei aaj night mei New Year ke liye Geet ko KM leker aau to , aur wo morning tak ruke? Dadima wo akeli hei aur mei chahata hu wo hum sabke sath family mei new Year celebrate kare.


Dadima understood his love and care for Geet ,, he was right at his place ,, if we love someone, we always think about them first.


Dadima: Of course beta , jaisa tum chaho ,, aur koi special plan ? She waggled her eyebrows naughtily to tease Maan.


Maan kissed on her cheek ,, thanku ,, love u Dadima ,, uska mere sath hona hi special hei and rushed out avoiding more teasing.


Dadima thought for some time and then decided something ,, she came to Ranjeet's room for further discussion ,, they were also planning for New Year Eve. Dadima expressed her plan and they willingly agreed with that.


In afternoon Geet got Maan's msg to remind her time ,, she smiled and tried to finish her work ASAP. She went to hospital with lots of chocolates and cookies and met with d girl ,, she was better now ,, Geet gave her fav chocolates and told her to share them with other sick children in d hospital ,, she agreed and Geet took her to children ward ,, The girl's parents were very ashamed in front of Geet , because of her their daughter was alive ,,They were touched with her care and sincerity . After spending some time with children Geet came back home lil relaxed. She entered in her bedroom and find a gift pack on her bed ,, she called servant and asked about that pack ,, servant replied that maan saab came in afternoon and he kept that here. Geet sent her back and opened d pack ,, there was a beautiful white and red purple saree with a Note ... Wear it for me Love .. Bye.


Geet smiled ,, kissed that note and went to get ready ,, she was looking very beautiful in that saree ,, she was getting ready and applying kohl in her eyes when she noticed that Maan was looking at her lovingly leaning against d door ,, she stopped at her place ,, he came close and stand in front of her ,, Geet lowered her head with a blush ,, Maan encircled her ,, took d dori of her blouse and tied that ,, Geet held her breath ,, his soft and warm fingers on her bare back tantalizing her ,, Maan was too mesmerised with her beauty ,,, d touch of her bare skin sending a shiver in his spine ,, they were very closed and their warm breathes were playing with their desires ,, Geet hugged him from his waist and hid her face in his chest ... G e e t , he moaned and crushed her in a passionate hug ,, they parted after few min ,, he kissed her forehead ... Chalen ..? Geet nodded in yes .


They were in Maan's car and he was driving giving her admiring looks ,then Geet realised that they were going towards KM.


Geet: Maan, ye to KM ka route hei .. aap KM jaa rahe ho..?


Maan: Aap nahi , Hum KM jaa rahe hei ,, agar tum kahin aur jaana chahati ho to hum mai turn karu ..? tum jahan kahogi hum wahin ja saktey hei Geet ,, koi force nahi hei ..


Geet: no its OK Maan , mujhe khud bahar pasand nahi ,, Ghar is much better ,, mei sabse mil bhi sakungi .


Maan smiled at her with a relief sigh ,, after half an hour they were at KM's gate which was decorated with beautiful coloured lights. They entered in d main Hall and welcomed by Dadima ,Rano and Ranjeet ,, all showered their love at her and she was overwhelmed with that love .


All settled in living room and talked to her like a family member ,, after some time she too felt comfortable with them ,, the hesitation which she was feeling in starting was dissolved now. Maan was just Niharofying her angel ,, there was no bound of his happiness . They took their lavish dinner and Maan ordered d cook to prepare coffee for them ,, it was going very chilled weather .


Dadima made Geet to sit near her on sofa and gestured to Rano which she understood and went inside ,, they were talking on random topics when Rano came with a beautiful velvety box in her hand and gave that to Dadima ,, she smiled at Maan and then Ranjeet who was looking at them ,, happiness was all visible on his face and in bright eyes. Dadima opened d box and there was a very beautiful Diamond set was shining .


Dadima: Geet beta ye tumhare liye hei ,, aaj se tum iss Pariwaar aur Khandan ka hissa ho ,, baki formalities hum baad mei puri karenge with lots of fun . she placed that necklace in her neck and made her wear d diamond bangles ,, Dadima kissed her forehead and blessed her ,, u r not alone now ,, u have ur family with u always.


Rano and Ranjeet stood up from their seats and sat near her ,, they hugged her lovingly and blessed her welcoming her in their family.


Ranjeet: Geet beta tum pahale meri beti ho , baad mei bahu ,, samjhi .. Tuhara pura haq is Pariwaar per hei .


Rano: Geet , tumhare mama-mami se aur Dad se hamari din mei baat ho gai thi ,, wo sab tumhare liye bahot khush hei ,, wo tumhe phone karne wale thy lekin humne aaj ke liye mana kiya ,, ye humari taraf se tumhare aur Maan ke liye New Year Gift .


Geet and Maan was surprised with this news ,, they were looking at all with wide eyes ,, it was beyond their imaginations .


Dadima: humne tum dono ki marriage aur Dev-Meera ki marriage ek sath 14th Feb ki fix ker di hei ,, ab esse matt dekho aur khush ho jao ,, she patted Geet's cheek who was looking at her with teary eyes ,, Dadima wrapped her in her arms knowing her condition.


Ranjeet and Rano loved Maan and blessed him ,, he too hugged them and thanked them for giving him these happiness.


Ranjeet : OK Maa , ab mei aur Rano club ja rahe hei ,, hum sabhi friends wahan mil rahe hei kuch time ke liye ,, jaldi aa jayenge .


Rano: Geet beta aaj tum yahin rukna ,, morning mei jana .. OK beta ,, they left for club .


Dadima: tum jaao mei hu yahan inke sath ,, Maan and Geet hugged Dadima from both sides ,, who was very happy having loving and caring children ,her treasure


After some time Dadima excused herself and wanted to take some rest .


Dadima : Maan beta tum dono baaten karo hum thoda rest ker le ,, humse itni der nahi baitha jaata hmmm .


Maan and Geet nodded and Dadima went to her bedroom for taking some rest. Now Maan and Geet were alone in living room ,, with their thudding hearts in new accepted relations ,, now elders gave their permission and d date of their marriage was fixed . Everything was like a dream for them ,, numerous emotions were bubbling in their hearts.


Maan came close to her and lifted her in his arms she gasped with this sudden act and held his shoulder tightly ,, he was looking at her lots of dreams and emotions were floating in his mind ,, he brought her in his room and sat on d sofa holding her very close in his lap . Geet caresses his face with love and packed on his cheek .


Geet: Thanku Maan , giving me this beautiful family .. I love you .


G e e t .. My Love !! kaise rahunga ye kuch din tumse dur ..? He glued her to him and kissed her passionately ,, mere pass hi ruk jao na ..? M a a n .. please esse matt kaho ,, mei khud nahi janti ki wahan tumse dur akele kaise rahungi ..? She too was feeling very emotionally weak to live alone now ,, away from him , her heart which craved for love and care from years now didn't want to lose any moment of love for her.

Geet: Maan mujhe darr lagta hei ,,, meri life ko itni khushiyon ki aadat nahi hei .


Maan felt pain for her listening that ,, he parted a lil and cupped her face with so much love.


Maan: hey.. Geet don't think like that Love ,, derr ku , mai hoon na sath tumhare ,, aur ab in khushiyon ki aadat daal lo ,, mei zindgi ki her khushi tumhe dunga ,, life hamesha ek si nahi rahati Geet,, aur hum dono iska example hei ,,, tum mere liye ek sapna thi ,, mujhe koi hope nahi thi ki tum mere itne pass hogi Geet aur aaj deko hum dono sath hei ,, meri zindgi ki subaha tum se shuru hoti hei aur sham tumhi per khatam .. I Love u so much Geet.


I love u too Maan and she hugged him ,, They were glued to each other filling their heart and soul with their togetherness and contentment .




Precap ... Epilogue .. in two parts.😊




Sorry for mistakes.

Epilogue

Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


Love it graphics

cant believe that this ended...

loved maans thought to spend the new year with family for geet... love and family is the thing which geet craves for... and he gave both as new year gift...

wedding on valentines day... so romantic it is...

will be waiting for epilogue

Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
babie itni jaldi ending socha nahi tha jab part no dekha tho ek dum se shock hogayi hoon itni jaldli 80 parts complete hogayi hai flow may parts no. bhi nahi dekhi itni din tak.


lovely update ab shadi ka date bhi fix hogayi hai aur yeh dono ek doosre se doorr nahi rehparahe hai😳

lakshu gif size was big compared to gifsoup site
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

tumne pm mein kyu likha mere siggy jaisa??? i thought wo waala and made that... koi na iska mazaa lete hain... net kaafi slow hain... just opened the link which u gave...



OK chalega... 😆😆
waise ye Geet ro rahi hei.. aur mujhe uska dress change karna padega,,😆😆 OK kerti hu..😛
Thanku dear..😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
babie priya koi bataao... upar waala gif hil raha hain ya still pic hain??

mera net tho aaj slow hain


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24


OK chalega... 😆😆
waise ye Geet ro rahi hei.. aur mujhe uska dress change karna padega,,😆😆 OK kerti hu..😛
Thanku dear..😛



if u can wait for 15 more min... ruk ... video opened till 3 min now

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