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Posted: 11 years ago




(For banner credit goes to Lakshmi ❤️ Thanku so much dear 😊 )

- Meredith Sapp


Prologue...


She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


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Part - 79


Geet looked at him with teary eyes , deep in his eyes finding her reply in his eyes ,, they were filled with emotions , care, love, assurance, hopes and trust.

Maan wiped her eyes softly with his thumbs.


Maan: inn aansuo se bhari aankho se matt dekho Geet ,,, sab kuch Dundhla nazar aayega ,, inhe mujhe de do aur muskura ker dekho ,, tumhara jawab meri zindgi hei Geet.


Geet looked at him deep and nodded in a yes ,,, awww ... His eyes brightened in happiness , he beamed and placed his lips on her forehead then hugged her tightly ,, thanku Geet ,, thanku so much giving me a life with u. He closed his eyes and some drops fell down from his eyes marking his happiness ,, he was hugging her kissing her shoulder and neck again and again assuring himself that she was his . Geet too was lost in his arms finding solace ,, his loving words and kisses soothing her aching heart . These r all new feelings for her though she felt different in her when she came lil close to him but she was confused and unaware about his feelings. She couldn't think a relation with Maan coz of his past ,, he loved someone and how could he think and love a girl who tortures him and forced him to stay away from his family and home.


The incident which took place between them stopping them to voice out their feeling and they were suppressing that deep in hearts , but today Maan's one effort opened all doors which brought happiness in their life.


Geet was clinging to him filling her each and every pour with his love and togetherness ,, she spent a long time of her life alone ,, she too craved for love and affection but none was there to fill her empty heart ,, no one is there to share her pain and to smile in achievements ,, happiness and grieve r same for her.


Today when she was breaking and tired Maan's love and care made her every cell alive ,, Maan too was suppressing his feeling in his insecurities but today Geet's lil yes broke all walls and she was in his arms ,, both were lost in each other world ,, after few min Maan parted a lil and looked at Geet's face which she was hiding in his crook ,, he caresses her cheek with his thumb , tucked d strands and put his thirsty lips on soft and pinkish cheek saying ... G e e t I love u.


Her whole body shuddered and she glued to him more holding him tight ,, she didn't know how to response ,, she was blushing and butterflies were moving in her tummy.,, awww what a wonderful feeling! She only heard and read about Love but today she was listening and feeling d magic of these words. Maan felt every reaction of her body and d effects of words on her .. Beautiful . He parted and looked at her , cupped her face in his hands ,, both were feeling each other's warm breathes on their faces ,,, which raising their heartbeats every passing moments. Maan wanted to see this love in her eyes for him.


Maan: Geet look at me .


Geet blushed more and tried to hide her face in his chest but he forcefully raised her face demanding again to look at him and this time Geet lifted her eyelashes slowly ,, dreamy ,, there was only love ,, pure love for him in those hazels ,, he looked deep with same love , her cheeks turned red and her soft pink petals were trembling ,, he covered that lil gap and took those supple lips into his to satisfy their thirst . He was sucking very softly ,, her body jerked and she tighten d grip ,, he encircled his hand around her waist and pulled her to him more ,, he gave a long satisfied smooch which was a stamp on their acceptance of love . He parted and looked at her lovingly... I love u so much Geet and gave a series of soft packs on her face ,, Geet was lost in his love unable to speak a word ,, she was holding him tight and looking at him ,, she was just assuring herself that it was a reality not a dream .


Maan: It's too late Geet .. So jao kuch der.


Geet nodded in a No ,, Maan chuckled ... kuch der ,, u r tired Geet. He lifted her and brought her to her bed ,, she was holding him hiding her face in his chest ,, her warm breathes on his skin and her closeness tantalizing him ,, he made her sleep covering her with a blanket and sat there close to her ,, she turn and hugged him from his waist. Maan wrapped his arm around her shoulder and glued her with him saying ... So jao Geet mei yahin hu ,, tumhare pass and packed on her forehead.


They spend that dreamy night close to each other ,, Geet steered and find a weight on her leg ,, she opened her drossy eyes and find that Maan was sleeping holding her in his arms and his one leg was on hers ,, her hand was also encircling his waist ,, he was in his formals and sleeping resting head on headrest peacefully with a smile on his lips. She caresses his face softly , every feature ,, today he was very close to her , a beautiful smile adored her lips . She looked at him lovingly , lifted her face a lil and packed on his chin saying ...


Love is expressed as an action and experienced as a feeling.


Sorry for mistakes.

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Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


am first

what an update. just lovely...

maaneet ki gaddi patri par aa gayi...

maan was just waiting for her one "yes" and then kisses ki baarish kar di😉


Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lils meine tera record thod diya... yahaa main frst aayi😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

lils meine tera record thod diya... yahaa main frst aayi😃

records hoten hei tutne ke liye,,,,😉😆congo shogo janiii,,,,tusiii sha gaye,,,,😆
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

records hoten hei tutne ke liye,,,,😉😆congo shogo janiii,,,,tusiii sha gaye,,,,😆




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kanha ho priya laksu,,,,??
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mein to yenhii hun...😛
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yahan pe bhi hoon

am reading mist
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

yahan pe bhi hoon

am reading mist

nini ayeing ,,,kal rd kartee hun...
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

yahan pe bhi hoon

am reading mist



tho tum yaha kaise hogi mist par hogi

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