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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: jack-12


wnt be qble to post anything before 25th dec


Take your time dear...will wait 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mithuna-


Take your time dear...will wait 😊

Thnx fr understanding
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
awesome update

when can we expect next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazyfriends007

awesome update

when can we expect next update

thnx
Nt before 25th dec
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
loved it loved it cant wait for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Since i was free, i wrote this small update. Earlier i was planning to show the male lead in a negative sense, but was not sure if many would like to see him that way. So i've changed the plot . Read n let me know hw was it.


Chapter 4(a)

Three days, and still he couldn't take her out of his mind. Her words, her challenge; were still a fresh memory in his mind. Her laughter, her smile after that whole drama of being Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana to get entry in his office, had featured in his dream ever since. He had no clue why this girl was disturbing his sleep, when he had no interest in her...but Mrs. Geet Masn Singh Khurana didn't sound that bad...

Maan smiled at his thought and suddenly it struck to him that she'd definitely started dominating his mind and heart, and that too in mere 3 meetings, which didn't go quiet well.

He shifted his thoughts to the bride that passed by, and he caught the sight of the girl accompanying her. For a moment he thought that he was hallucinating. Dreaming about her like he'd been dreaming for the past few days.

Geet Handa...It couldn't be? Could it?

Yes she was definitely here. Dressed in a beautiful pink lengha with hair tied in a side plate, looking like an angel. He could clearly hear the same laughter which has been a part of his dreams now, as she walked away with the bride.

***********

Maan had known Kabeer for years now and the two were very close now. He was the person who had helped Maan during his initial struggle in business after his father's death. And he gad also been the one to support Maan emotionally after Annie and Arjun's death. He was the sole person having idea about the guilt Maan was in after Arjun's death.

Usually Maan avoided weddings after his sisters death, but he couldn't say no to Kabeer. And now he was greatfull he had decided to attend the marriage- or else he would have missed seeing this beautiful angel.

Maan scolded himself mentally for all such thoughts about her. How could he suddenly find this unworthy woman, who had been the invader of his dreams as beautiful?

But no matter how hard he tried, he couldn't help himself admiring her.


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Having attend all the rituals of her friend, Misha's wedding, Geet got up from the mandap and helped Misha, who was loaded with a heavy bridal dress and jewellery towards the stage where the bride groom could sit.

Misha had been Geet's childhood friend and had even accompanied her to London for further studies. But after graduation she had flown back yo India and it was then she met Kabeer. After an affair for 5years, with loads of fun-filled fights and love, the two had decided to marry eachother.

Geet had arrived at Misha's hometown Jaipur two days back and since then she had been a constant witness off all the ceremonies before a marriage. It was tge first time she had attended all the functions and had been a part of all the fussing around and chaos of a marriage house.

Geet sighed. She was romantic at heat and wished to receive all the love of family and friends in a similar way before her marriage. But knew there was no one around to fulfill this eish of hers.

"You look beautiful, Geet." A deep voice was drawled behind her making her freeze as she recognised the person even before seeing his face.

After calming her ragged heart, she turned to look into a pair of light blue eyes, her mouth hanging open in shock. " What are you doing here?"

"I was invited!"

"Maan, good to see you here. Wait! Let me call Kabeer, he would be so happy to see you." Misha spoke as she caught hold of Geet's hand and dragged her away even before Maan could reply.

Misha was well aware of the previous encounters of the teo and Geet had detailed her with the way Maan had behaved. Misha had been shocked to hear about his behaviour with Geet, because the rare times she had net him, he'd been quiet mature and sweet, though she had not told Geet all this.
Hence knowing all this, she did not want the two in another argument that too on her special day and hence had dragged Geet away.

All through this Geet's mouth was shut, but she was great full to Misha for saving her from the khadoos Khurana.

*********

Over the next one hour, though she was trying hard to avoid him, but somehow everytime she looked up, Maan seemed to be in her line of vision. And why not? He was the best looking man here with a presence about him that made him stand in the crowd.

The music turned on to a romantic number, as Misha and Kabeer opened the dancing and then the others followed them with their partners.

A smile played on Geet's lips. She was happy for Misha as her friend had found a very nice person to be by her side throughout her life.

She observed the couples dancing from a far distance. There were two reasons for her absence from the dance floor. First, she did not know waltz and second she did not have a partner

.

"Do you mind if I rescue you from this loneliness and take you for dance?"

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Posted: 11 years ago
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msk liked the name geetmsk thats great is he going to make it real very soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
maan is falling for her
his heart has been taken away
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ambili123

msk liked the name geetmsk thats great is he going to make it real very soon

Haha yes he will
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zariya123

maan is falling for her

his heart has been taken away

sort of😃

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