MG FF THE DIVINE FLOWER : thread 2: PART 39 : page 141 17th may

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farzu3008

@farzu3008

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

awesome update. finally maan knows that who is geets daughter. now will he b able to hate her. so waiting for next eagerly

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Wat a cliff hanger, realy wanna read further. Loved ur updates very well written more towards mature thinking displayed by maan but still he cant control his emotions when with geet.

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Read both of the updates
First one read with so much anger at Sasha
Kamini geet k oi he kiu hai yaar
Grrr...
Maan saved geet from that
This update omg
My breath stopped
Amy is alright
Thank god!!!
Maan got to know her full name n got shocked!!
He paid all the expense
Maan met Lisa too :|
Now what twist!!!
Truth revel hoga ya nehi!! :\

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Krupa

@idunno

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

jisko milna hai wo milhi jate hai.
maan is not ready to accept his daughter but god is there to mke him realise his mistake.i am sure ammi will have some complication her blood group is rare and maan will give his blood and will start hinking is she really his daughter? maan babu to clear ur doubt why cant u do dna test? kyun geet pe bewaja iljam thope ja rahe ho?saccha pyar wisvas ke uper hi to panah leta hai-by the way lovely update and last update where he helps her out of blue was mind blowing-
kitna bhi door rahene ki kosish karo maan lekin jana to tume geet ke paas hi hai tum use yun bula nahi paoge.
'TUM MUJE YOUN BHULA NA PAOGE JUB KABHI BHI SUNOGE GEET MERE TUM MUJE...

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

PLEASE UPDATE SOON I LOVE THIS STORY.
milke bhi hum na mile ab hai kitne fasale...?
kai se bataye hum tumko chahe yara bhula na pae
bate dilo ki kaise samjaye yara na bhul paye tum jano na tum jano na...

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Hi Dear ...
Finished reading TDF in one go ...loved this story so much ...
Both the updates r awesome ...
So maan is going back to India good for geet ...
hot kiss of maaneet ..😉😳
bt shasha made a video of it wht will she do with it upload on internet or showing everybody in office ...
OMG Ami poor is in hospital bt thank god nothing major injury n for operation maan is paying for geet's sake ...
finally maan knew that Mia his cute friend is Amiya n Ami, geet's daughter ...
waiting for nxt update nw ...n very curious to know more abt past n maan's reaction on Ami nw ...
continue soon pls ...

Add me for pm of ur ff's pls ...

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Commenting for second time
Last night mamma came n scold me at that time for not sleeping :\
So forgot to mention this-
In past
This is the most unique way to tell some one that u love her
Wow!! That was superb..
Maan said geet she's always welcome in his room as well as well as his heart :\
In present...
I couldn't understand y did they kissed!!
What was in maan's mind?
He back out from his revenge game?
N now returning to India?
Y can't he belive geet for once?
Grr...tube light!!