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Posted: 11 years ago


(For banner credit goes to Lakshmi ❤️ Thanku so much dear 😊 )

- Meredith Sapp


Prologue...


She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


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Part - 69


Geet stormed in d hospital and reached infront of ICU ,, she find Dev sitting there ,, her blocked anger and pain brust out seeing him ,, and with a swift move went to Dev n cought him from his collor and pulled him to stand ,, all were stunned with this act and she gave a hard punch on Dev's jaw saying ,, this is all because of u ,,, u r d reason and pushed him backward in anger. Dev stambled on his feet ,, Maan rushed to them n held him with arm. Geet didn't look any where, her eyes were shooting fire at him,, she pointed her finger at him and pour out her anger.

Geet: Tumhari wajah se aaj uski ye halat hai ,,, galtiyaan tum karo aur dukh jhele wo ,, pyaar tum karo aur dard sahe wo ,, ku ,, pagal hai wo bhi ,, sari duniya mei tum hi mile usse dosti karne ke liye aur pyaar karne ke liye. Pahale to tumse pyaar karke bas dukhi thi ,, lekin ab dekho ,,, tum uski zindgi mei wapas kya aaey ,, uski to zindgi hi ja rahi hai. Sab tumhari wajah se ,, she caught his collor again and said ,, Dev, agar Meera ko kuch hua na to mai tumhe aur usse dono ko jaan se maar dalungi ,, chodungi nahi mai tumhe ,, yaad rakhna.


All were shocked and glued at their places ,, nothing was going in their heads ,,, Why Geet is hiting and accusing Dev for Meera? Why Dev is responsible for Meera's accident? Most importantly Meera Loves Dev ? Dev too was looking at Geet with shocked mind .. why she is accusing him? Who wanted to hurt her?Why? She is saying that Meera loves him ,, She loves me,, Me. He was puzzled how to react at this pleasing truth, a truth which filled his heart with immense happiness, but why Geet accusing him ,, usne kya kiya?

Geet: Give her mob. number to me. ( she jerked him again) jaldi karo , muh kya dekh rahe ho mera? Apni uss B**** NT ka number do.


Dev came in sense and thought that she was talking about NTand replied in a weak voice , Mere pass nahi hai ,, delete ker diya maine.


Geet looked at him angrily ,, she lift her hand to punch him again but this time Maan came in between ,, Geet wo sach kaha raha hai ,, tum please shant hoker meri baat suno.


Adi and Mr Khurana was looking at them puzzled


Maan: Geet , please calm down ,, please wo mana nahi karta agar uske pass hota. Tumhe NT ka No chahiye to hum kuch aur sochtey hai ,, mil jayega. Calm down.


Geet threw her hands in air aahhh ,, shant ho jau ,, kaise? Kaise Maan? Meri Meer ander zindgi aur maut se lad rahi hai ,, iski wajah se aur isski uss aahhh.


Maan: Meera theek hai Geet ,,, Meera ko hosh aa gaya hai. Hum sab usse mil chukey hai ,,, tum pahale jaker usse dekho aur milo ,, fir hum baat kartey hai Chalo pahale Meera se milo.


Maan held Geet's hand and brought her to ICU ward. They entered and went to near Meera's bed. Geet's heart ached to see her like that ,, tears wanted to come out but she controlled hard not to let them out ,, her eyes were burning. Geet carsses her head lovingly n spoke softly ,, Meer. Meera opened her eyes, looked at her n blinked at her gesturing that she is fine. Geet felt relief ,, she was dying after seeing Meera unconscious at d accident spot ,, she was chocked and her anger increased many folds.


Geet: Mai doc se milker aati hu , hmmm .


Meera nodded hardly, she understood that Geet is looking everything related to accident . Geet n Maan came out from d ward.


Geet: Maan mai doc se milker aati hu.


Maan: OK, chalo mai bhi sath aata hu.


They went to doc's chamber n talked to him . Doc said that he n his co- Docs examined her properly and after some tests n plastering her hand they'll shift her in a private room in next 2-3 hours.


Geet and Maan came out and went to waiting area where all were sitting in puzzled situation ,, no one is talking and lost in their own thoughts. Mr Khurana looked Geet and gestured her to sit near him ,, she went near him and sat there on sofa.


Mr Ranjeet: Mujhe kuch bataogi ki kya hua hai?


All were in d misconception that it was a natural accident but now with Geet's outburst and accusation they came to know that it was planned. Geet took a long breath and described everything to them which she and police find in investigation. All were shocked with this piece of news and anger overpowered their mind and heart. All looked at Dev angrily and he was looking at them defeated.


Mr Khurana: Now what do u want to do? We have to file an FIR .


Geet: wo ho chuki hai but for a road accident not for attempt to murder. We r collecting d proofs and i want to arrest her ASAP.


Mr Khurana: Go ahead .


Geet to Dev : Dev give me that B**** number. Uska No tumhe nahi pata hoga to kya mujhe hoga?


Dev: Geet , i swear maine delete ker diya , feed tha to kabhi yaad nahi kiya , please trust me.


Geet: Jo baaten pata honi chahiye wo tumhe ku yaad hongi , aur bahot bakwaas cheeje hai na yaad rakhne ko.


Dev: mai kisi friend se pooch leta hu. He take out his mob from his pocket but Geet stopped him ...


Geet: No don't , kisi commen friend ko phone matt karna ,, agar kisi ne usse bata diya to wo alart ho jayegi. Usse abhi kshush hone do ,, Maan tumhare pass hai kya No?


Maan: Nahi , maine bhi delete ker diye thy sabke 2-3 months pahale , sorry ,, he looked at her helpless.


Geet: tum dono ne kahin likh ker nahi rakhe hue , in some diary or phone-book?


Maan: no, phone mei hi reheta tha , koi back up nahi.


This thing hit Geet's sense ,, backup recoard ,, i got it. Dev , uska No change to nahi hua tha na ?


Dev: jab tak mere pass tha tab tak to nahi.


All were looking at her curiously ,,, she dialled at her home ,, CS picked d phone and asked about her. Geet told him about Meera and he too was shocked and sad listening this.


Geet: CS meri study mei jaao abhi phone sath mei leker , wahan meri tabke ki right side drawer mei ek mere phone jaisi badi black device hogi ,, ek chota sa wire attach hoga ,, dekho ,,


CS run to study and opened d drawer , search and got that.


CS: yes ma'am mil gaya.


Geet: Good , ab isse aur mera laptop leker yahan aa jao hospital mei ,, Jaldi ,, Driver ko bolo meri gadi nikalega ,, Jaldi se aao.


All were sitting there ,, many Q were churning in their minds.


Just as no matter how hard you try to keep it away,

Despair will attack you again and again.

In the same manner hope will return to you,

And again and again it will surely bloom.



Sorry for mistakes.



Part - 70




Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear
meera is fine😊
so it was naintara who did it😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice part..Oh Geet back up all number from Maan & Dev phone..Dev find out that Meera love her,,I hope Dev also confess his love to her..

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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful upsate dear
geet vented her anger out on dev but maan consoled her
now that NT's time is over😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet , meera ko liye insiqour feel karti hai aur vo dev pe gussa kar deti hai...
Maan ka phone usne PS me liya tha , uska beckup ab kaam aayega...haina?
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Posted: 11 years ago
our sherni is in action...

waiting for nxt.. aaj nai mil skta nxt part?
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Posted: 11 years ago


😛 Mona ka update padh rahi thi..😊

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