THE LOCKET (11) - MG FF - New thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 65

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

Originally posted by: valli30

lovely update
CID dadi ko patha chal gaya dev-tara ke bareme😆
NT thinks its dev's plan
waiting for next part

Originally posted by: heytal

It was a fantastic update

😃

Haaye Dev toh day by day aur bhi adorable ho gaya hain😳

So thoughtful of him that he realized it even when NT tried to hide it from him

NT can't help but fall for her man😛

Who is making her most vulnerable and painful days comforting and easy😳

And Dadi is toh super cool😎

Agent 007 Khurana🤣

Poor Dev bura phasa the women of his life are giving hima tough time and sleepless nights😉

Kabir-Megha two souls, two bleeding hearts, two troubled beings finally found solace in each other😊

Megha is an orphan so I assume she is NT younger sibling

Her past again was truly painful but now they have bright future together😃

So all the three couples moving in positive way

Dev-NT fireworks

Maaneet finally they will meet

Kabir-Megha together

Adi- Pinky🤔

Waiting for the precap

Dev catching Maan range haathon😉🤓

Loved it yaara

It was truly amazing

🤗

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

at last am here to update... some times i can be a real lazy one😳... but surely will not forget to comment... jab tak comment nahi karoongi agla update haq se kaise maang sakthi hoo? 😆

kya daadi mili hain ... maan and dev ko... potho ke love stories ko agent 007 ke avtaar me doondkar set bhi karne main help karthi hain... and here comes a doubt... daadimas involvements in maaneet... how does she know geet as maans love interest??? have i forgotten any thing in the prior parts or is it just coming up?

dev... a complete sweet heart... how he took care of her... only a gal can undestand what these simple gestures mean to them... happy for tara, that she is getting to experience this which will surely make her believe in love...

Agent 007 Khurana watched the duo eating the secret pasta from her vantage point near the entrance of the door to Dev's office.😆 i just loved this...

hard task ahead dev babu... roote hue ko manaaoo... dadi se chupthe phiro... aur khud ko saint ka avtaar banaane ka kasht karo😆

kabir-megha...it was truly emotional one... loved ur narration in it... loved how she narrated the story of her hero ... who have just grown in her eyes in his heroism with his honesty and sincerity... the hug was magical...

in short just loved the update...👏 now am waitng for the net one ... and after the sneak peak u told... i cant wait for the sizzler...

Originally posted by: sona-rai

Aviii jhapppiiisss:)

Awesome Mindblowing updates yar:)

Originally posted by: optimism

hi avi !

m so happy tat i cn finally post my comment on the forum :-))

i guess i stopped at wrong place ystrday ...if i had known the next updates r going to be dev tara i guess would have finished them ystrday only :-p

tara running away from the clutches of suraj n landing into devs arms :-) well when ur vulnerable atleast ur honest with ur fylings:-) the much needed kiss

finally happened :-)

scared to see brijs nasty eyes on geet ! wish maan would b there to save her from those evil eyes :-) u know avi geets really lucky in ur ff ...shes got loving darji ,

insanely loving bf ( to b bf) , caring n hot bro n protective sis ...if this wasnt enuf she has kabir too :-) so happy that he saved her ! he probbly cnt repay geet for

helpin him with his mother but i like tat his taking care of her :-)

tara finally decd to leave dev n geet for their safety but cn she really do it :-) or will dev let her do it? i tell u avi , eavsdropping helps ..hehe.

i like the sudden terms n condition in devtara life:-) probbly tats d only way to keep tara from leaving :-) love dev more for it :-) love devs condition ...

poor tara has lost here :-) dev condition finally made her realise tat he wants is 24*7 of her life :-) this will help tara believe tat dev loves her too n

she is not his just another girl :-)

moving to maneet ! maan thud 😳😳😳 jhalli geet is finally havin a tough time ..hehe..maan takin geet out to chandni chowk :-) soo romantic! wonder whthr majnu maan

will eat the food or drinkin geets beauty :-))) only maneet cn make a dinner in parathe wali gali romantic ...hayee..maan finally decdin to tell her his fyling but i guess fate had other plans

circumstances have brought maneet more close ...loved the maneet baby scene :-)

chap 47 is so crucial in maneet life :-) i loved every word of it avi...i loved how maan n geet have become transparent with their fylings (though it was so obvious)

maneet finally have their kisss :-))) i love geets submission n her trust in maan :-))) but with every good thing comes a bad thing too...so sad to see a misundrstanding between maneet...

maan misinterpreted geets absence...it was too late for geet to clear his doubt...

monologue of maan n geet is so beautiful n painful too :-) geet seeking maan is the rains , remembering the good things abt their togthrness n waiting for him

maan here is tryin to forgt geet n remove her presence from his life..little does he know tat u cnt frgt somethng tats an integral part of ur life..

tat is most beautifully written avi...its so hard to express ur fylin but ur writin made it soo simple :-))

coming to dev tara again ,, was waiting for their part :-) so naintara seems to annoy dev by choosin the worst possible clothes n here d handsome hunk

has impressed ppl with tat clothes too :-) dev is soo cute :-) his tryin so hard to make tara realise tat they r meant to b togthr..unfortunatly tara agree but doesnt want dev to get into trouble

dev doesnt show up for one night n tara is soo annoyed ...i like how dev plan has worked here ...but tara tough nut to crack...i loved the heated moment between dev tara :-))

with every update of urs , story gets more n more deep n meaningful avi...maan letter is the best part so far ! its likin reading maans heart beat by beat :-)

his words r not cheesy or fake but d reflection of his soul :-) loved it tottally!

so happy to see maan knowin the truth finally ! sooo waiting for maan to comebck ! i cn only think of one song geet probbly will sing " mera piya ghar aaya " hehe...

waiting for maaneet !!!!!

dadi finally gettin to know abt dev tara :-)))) she is coolest granny ! sorry khurana family is mixture ! hot n bold dev , sexy n sweet maan and cool n inquisitiv dadi ...hehe

khurana brothers need a push all the time ! finally dadi come to dev tara rescue ! i hope she helps maneet too ( though the love birds dnt need it )

megha n kabir story finally got a happy ending :-) it was so sad to see kabir n megha waitin for each other , waiting to share their love for each othr...one was reluctant n othr one oblivious to his fylin

loved how ur bring all stories to closure ...megha part was filled with her longin for kabir ...i loved how she decd finally to comfront him n open her fylin to him..she did find her home finally:-)

i love u avi for such a beautiful story :-) u made me love dev tara ! when i strtd watchin geet , i so wantd to see a positiv dev n geet story ( abhinav shukla mainly)...but that didnt happen n abhinav left the show abruptly...

u made me imagine abhinav n karisma in it ...wish they had positiv part in geet ! cn totally relate ur chemistry with them :-))

thanks for all the pm n being so patient with me :-) i m sooo waiting for devtara n mumbai 😳😳

please ignore the typin errors😃

Originally posted by: priya111111

abhi padna shuru kiya lagtha hai do teen din may complete hojayega😃

Originally posted by: dqno1

Priya please batana kaisa lag raha hai... and also don't assume it is not a MG story.. it is .. with a tadka😃