THE LOCKET (11) - MG FF - New thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 25

Avi ... a big hug to you on completion of 50 parts 🤗

Its been such a great journey till now... and I'm glad I could be a part of it with each part you updated. Each part mixed with so many emotions and shades of love ... so many stories entwined together yet each of them having their separate flavor and longing and happiness in them. Thanks for writing this story and continuing it with great enthusiasm and each time bringing out such great writing for us to read. I have loved each of the stories in this one story... especially of the Khurana brothers and their conquest with their love lives... journeying towards "True love is forever" 😳😳

Coming to Chapter 50 : 👏👏👏 Too good. Mann ki lagan a perfect song for the emotions and the whole situation brought forward here. It indeed was apt describing Maan's lagan for his love ... he is still holding onto his belief and his love for her, even after years and him having the pseudo assumption that she rejected his love and proposal... He has been unable to unlove her 😳 He is still somewhere at that same very spot of that night where he was going to speak of his love to her where they shared that kiss. Those moments are still the ones that are giving life to his deep buried emotion - he is so desperately trying to suppress under work and surrounding people.

Even now he is feeling and experiencing and seeing her in each and every animate and inanimate object around him be it as in the start in his balcony or now in London...

Perfect song... each word speaks of his craving, loneliness, his longing to be complete with her presence mingled with his... be it in the rose, the skies, the rain, or the moments ... in all 3 time lines ---- the one before the letter when he had hope with that saffron sky surrounding him and him wanting to have that love accepted by her; the time when he feels rejected by her absence at the party ... the dark clouds pouring rain and speaking of his loss and dejection ; or the almost present when the snow filled areas speak of his longing for his sunshine to take away the coldness seeping in him and he does get that ray of light warming his dead insides with a single phone call that has him again hopeful and full of aspirations and love ...

Hayee I'm full Fida on this Maan THUD... I can't help but feel so in love with him ❤️ He is too good... its actually his lagan that has helped him hold onto his words he spoke to her long back which is actually become this M-G's belief and lifeline "True love is forever" ❤️ 😳😳

I Love how you have centered their story around this one quote 👏👏 its like a connecting bond which though unsaid but deeply engraved and imprinted in their souls. 😳

The whole letter and words spoken by Maan 😳😳😳 I love it... reliving those scenes 😳

Also I want to know Geet's reaction to the letter 😉 ... Has she read his emotions first in the letter or whether in his diary ... diary dear toh has a lot of love poured out into it ... what he couldn't shower o her till now 😳

Sameera-Dave ,... their story was also a great addition ... you have a great way of portraying love stories of different flavors and battles fought to have that "forever" 👏

Now he has hope but I guess Dev is going to make it hard for him... 😆 Evil Dev 😈

His chotu will finally call him Devarji 😆 Waiting for the precap too ... 😉

But at present I'm still enjoying and letting the feel of this part sink in 😳 👍🏼 ... too good 👏👏

Too good 🤗

Waiting for the next ... and great 50 parts 👍🏼 🤗 Congratulations!!!

He rubbed his hand to his chest over his heart.