A LIE OR A TRUTH OF LOVE.. MG SS FINAL PTS pg 39 nov 29 *COMPLETED* - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Nice start dear
Read both the parts
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Interesting...
Prologue maaneet together
But in part 1 maan with that b**** grrr...
Y maan need to fall for that girl :\
Eagerly waiting for farther updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Love the prologue !!!
I wonder what maan's secret is ???
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
part 1
nice...
my God Maan and Sameera?
and he doesnt have any idea about her true nature...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
part 2
nice part dear...
Geet's part is nice...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Awesome start maan engaged wit Sam,and geet in Punjab.interesting waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
PART 3

THUD!!!!!!!!!!!
she fell down in the pool of mud .. her eyes were wide open ..the way she was bathe in the mud and dirt and muddy water was making her so mad..she was looking at the guy who was not even regretting his action ...she took a handful of muddy water and with a smirk the water was all over his white shirt...
he looked at her with his anger that he was somehow holding in him..the mere girl , someone looking not even mature dared to play with him..
he was about to show her , the original place but the next moment he found himself in the mud since she asked him to held her up and that was the thing.. the next moment he was in the mud and she was on his place..she with the clean portion of her dupatta cleaned her face ..her smirk was making him frustated even more ...the way she was smirking showing off he knew that women are only meant to make fools..but he didnt knew that fools are only made fools.. man with even a little commonsense will never fall in the trap of the any fake love lady..
the girl was about to leave it was already dawn and she needed to reach home ...
guy : where are you going...
girl who was on all the way towards her home turned and now her eyes were spitting fire ... she kept her hands on her waist and went near the tubewell... the water was going to the fields ..she took an empty bucket that was kept near the well and filled it completely with the chilled water .. she was so angry right now that she next second threw it on him directly making him wet from head to toe..the mud with which she made him bathe was now washed off..but his senses were clearly blocked..his vision was not clear the only voice that came out of his mouth was the deadly scream that made her to threw one more bucket of chilled water on him...
guy : what the hell are you doing.. cant you see what are you doing.. you dammit girl... what do you think of yourself , i am not the one who will not speak or take this bullshit...
he was rambling in anger ..while she now hold his collar and with her effort pulled him up.. his hands completely locked her petite waist.. her red angry eyes were looking so cute she was fuming like nay second her fuse will burst ...
the girl was not in a mood to answer him but when he didnt let her go when she tried to ...
girl : you literate idiot cant you see and walk.. am i not visible to you that you just didnt saw me and threw me in the mud.. and why are you screaming now..i did washed you now leave my hand and let me go...
he was not in his correct senses and yelled at her...
guy : apologise ... right now...
the girl moved her face away and withe her long nails pierced his skin making it bleed... but he didnt flinch looks like this pain was nothing in front of the pain that he was carrying in his heart..the pain that was not letting him even breathe in peace...
girl : leave me ..and why are you even expecting that i will say you sorry... you see the snobs like you arent mean to get my apology...
his grip on her tightened and he just didnt know why but he let her fall on the same muddy water..and went away saying...
guy : this serves you right , girls are never meant to trust anything...

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rest will continue
Edited by suhana_123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
nice prologue
i hate sameera
awsum parts

Edited by ...sharanya... - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
nice part
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
wait was that our maneet
or was it someone else
well who ever that was that girl sure gave the guy a piece of her mind
that was good real good
how she got back at him
wonder where when and how this takes place
and between who
hmmm seems something happened with the guy though
what with him saying what he did
wonder what though
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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