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Lakshu, Priya, Mona , Lily and Sona ..🤗

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(For banner credit goes to Lakshmi ❤️ Thanku so much dear 😊 )

- Meredith Sapp


Prologue...


She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


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Part - 59


All the Khuranas were in their royal living room ,,, Dev took some long breaths ,, spread his arms in air and said..

Dev: home, home sweet home. I am seeing my house after 2 months Dadi. I missed everything .


All were very happy to have their sons back home . Dadi and Rano was pampering them with all their love. Rano ordered servants to take their bags in their respective rooms. Rano ordered cook to make all Maan and Dev's fav dishes ,, after talking for some time Dadi told them to take rest in their rooms before lunch. Dev ran to his room saying ,, i missed my room so much ,, and all smiled at his childishness. Maan too came in his room ,, everything was same ,, his beautiful king size bedroom decorated with luxurious things , but he was feeling that it was not belong to him, Usske hone ka Ehassas jo nahi tha ,, He lay down on his king size bed and closed his eyes ,, the flashes of his prev room coming in his mind ,, a different fragrance of that house still remain in his senses ,, his body was here but his mind and heart was there ,, there in Geet's House.


Servant came to call him for lunch and he half heartedly went down only to sit with d family ,, he didn't want to eat anything . Dadi and Rano was forcing him to take many things one by one ,, he just tasted food for their shake ,, he didn't want to hurt their motherly feelings. He returned to his room and lay down back again feeling nostalgic.


In his aloofness he didn't give a single glance to his room ,, he didn't notice a neatly wrapped packet on d coach ,, a packet which was a source happiness for him ,, which could make him smile.


Geet send this pack by hand ,, her PS constable came and gave that to Nakul and said that this was for Mr Maan Singh Khurana. Maan's family was at Geet's house that time when Geet send that policeman in their house.


He didn't come out of his room whole day. At eve he opened his bag and arranged his stuff in d cupboard ,, he looked at that packet which CS gave him behalf of Geet. Mijhe gift nahi tum chaiye thi apne samne. He opened that and there was a white shirt with beautiful cuff-link ,, he caresses that ,, it was her first gift to him ,, he hang that in d cupboard then came in study and got busy in his work ,, only this was d only option to keep him busy and distract from all memories.


Geet came back ,, she spent some time in PS and then went to Police mess where she booked a room for her. She spent two days there and came back home Mon night ,, she went to her bedroom ,, changed and tried to sleep thinking about him and confused about her feelings for him ,, Kya wo meri zindgi mei itna shamil ho gaya ki uske jaane ka khalipan saha nahi ja raha ,, kaisa Ehasaas hai ye? CS thought that she was tired due to journey and work load so didn't disturbed her.

Days started dragging for them ,, she waited for his call every day but he didn't called her ,, she didn't have strength to call him ,, kaise kahu mai usse ki mai usse miss ker rahi hu,, wo wapas aa jaye ,, jo kabhi nahi ho sakta. Wo to apni family mei jaker bhool bhi gaya hoga ,, nahi to ek baar to phone karta. She sighed and got busy in her work ,, This is d only thing where she could forget her loneliness and pain for some time.


Every passing day he became more and more rough ,, he was pouring out his frustration on his staff ,, he spent most of d time in his work and rest in workout then sleep ,, every call on his phone raised a hope and then died making him annoyed ,, he was angry with her and he decided that he won't call her.


Geet called Meera everyday in a hope to get some news from her coz she talked to Dev many times in a day, but she got nothing. 5-6 days passed and it was Meera's Bday . She forced Geet to come with her to watch a movie and then lunch outside ,, Geet tried to avoid to go out but she was nowhere to listen her. Then Geet decided to gave her a small party in that Mall where she was planning to watch movie. She wanted to give her a surprise party for her Bday. She agreed to her. Meera informed Dev and Maan too.


It was Friday eve and Maan came back little late from site ,, he straight way went to his room and asked his dinner in his room ,, he threw his bag and files on bed ,, removed his clothes went to washroom to freshen up and came out ,, servant placed d dinner on d table and went out. He came there to have his meal and sat there on coach and found a packet there besides him ,, he took that and that was for him ,, his name was on that. He opened that and found a digital photo frame attached with a card in an envelope. He curiously take out d card ,, that was a Missing you card ,, he became restless and opened d card and read ..


Maine apni life mei Apno ko itna dur jaate dekha hai ki ab aur kisi Apne ko dur jaate nahi dekh sakti ... Geet.


OMG!! He threw his hand on his hand and combed his hair back,, he was in shock ,, he read those words again and again ,, he hide his face in his palms to absorb the reality in front of him. He was so wrong ,, he was angry on her for avoiding him and there she was so sad because of his departure. He switch on d frame and there were pictures of their Mussoorie trip. He was sitting there with card and frame in his hands ,, chocked with emotions ,, he was smiling with tears in his eyes ..


Wo mujhe wahan se dur jate nahi dekh sakti thi ,, isliye khud hi dur chali gai aur mai usse galat samajhta raha ,, usse phone bhi nahi kiya ,, Wo kya sochti hogi mere bare mei, ki mai usse bhool gaya ,, no,,no.


I hurt her again ,, i hurt her,, she didn't know about my feelings then why i hoped she thought about me in same way,, it was me who wanted her friendship to be with her,, not she,, then why i ignored her in my anger and ego. Oh Lord!!! Ye maine kya kiya?


He took his cell to call her but stopped and said..


Maan: no ,, it's too late now ,, I'll go in d morning to meet her ,, yes i'll go to her . He smiled and looked at d frame where his pics were flashing ,, he forgot about his meal ,, he didn't want anything now ,, his happiness was in his hand and his lost smile was back on his lips. From last one week he was living in hell ,, he sat on d bed enjoying those memories ...


Ek bhi apni pic nahi daali ,, no prob i have many and i'll load them ( he chuckled) Tumhe to pata bhi nahi ki tumhari kitni pics mere pass hai.


He opened his lappy and loaded Geet's pics from lappy to digi frame ,, he caresses her features with his fingers and said ...


I m sorry Geet ,, i hurt u again ,, i didn't keep my words,, i m sorry. He read her card again and cursed himself for ignoring her ,, he clutches the frame and card near his heart and lay down on bed and slept holding his precious possessions.


He woke up very early ,, got ready and left to meet his Sunshine,his happiness.


If there is trust it will grow, if there is love it will grow. If we rush we will never know, just have to go with the flow.





Sorry for mistakes.


Part - 60


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oh god yeh kya babie waha maan geet ke baaremeim soch kar uski phone keliye wait karaha hai aur yaha main tumlogon keliye wait karrahi thi

aur waha geet ne tho chupchap gift chodiya tha maan ko patha bhi nahi chala

aur yaha tumne tho chupchap update bhi dediya aur mujhe patha bhi nahi chala
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😆😆 Chup chup kahan..??
Pahale hi bola tha tumhe.. dono jagah per..




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