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Posted: 11 years ago




LAST PART


A sweet smile lingered on Maan's lips as he looked at the vast sea in front of him. He wondered about his own life that did he deserve this at all. He eyes mist with the happiness of having everything with him today. Wats so funny Khuranna he heard Prem questioning him who stood next to him staring at the sea. They were on a cruise and right now the two were fulfilling their spouse's wishes of going for long vacation. Maan could not stop himself from staring at Prem who kept looking at him. I think there's something on my face that makes you smile. Prem raised his hand to wipe his face but was held by Prem. You are perfect Prem and m blessed to have you in my life... Not only me but Geet and Heer too.


And why so? Maan smiled hearing the same words that he heard whenever he says that. You won't change na. Prem chuckled shaking his head saying why I should... aur waise bhi I can't as I want to trouble you for the rest of the life. Maan was not surprised as this was the way they argued. Maan smiled while Prem knew seeing the tears trying to escape his eyes and don't you dare make Maan Singh Khuranna to cry.. Suit nahi karta rough and tough Khuranna ke liye.


It was not easy Prem... ek gunaah kiya tha and instead of punishing myself I always punished Geet. To hide one sin I did many but see you still forgave me.. m I really not to be punished... is it right to hide my sins from Geet, Prem. Prem was quite for few minutes. He did not have any answers to them as he had forgotten the past. He was truly happy now and did not want anyone to ruin their happiness even if it was their past. He looked straight at the sea and said can you see the sea Maan. it's so quite but the moment it shows its real face everything is destroyed. Galati na hoke bhi people get pain due to the sea... kabhi socha hain ispar Maan... That why does the sea punish people who are innocent. Maan could understand wat he meant but still he answered him. Coz its destined to do it when its angry Prem. Prem smiled hearing and without waste of time he answered back but my Geet and Maan are not destined for it Maan. We have faced our share of punishment... kuch galati tumne ki, kuch maine aur kuch Geet ne par saaza tho hum sabko mili na and that was enough Maan. We all were innocent but are innocence let us do those sins that we weren't suppose to do but we did and we did get punished and now we are not destined to be punished. Prem turned and looked at Maan and questioned him tell me Maan who was at mistake. Can you point anyone of us who was wrong far more than the other? Maan just kept looking at Prem who answered him back nahi na... as we three were innocent but still we were punished and hurt like the way the sea does to the innocent people... but still they forgive the sea thinking that they were destined for tat pain and likewise we too were destined for it Maan but not anymore.


Are you two romancing behind us Prem and Maan heard Geet's voice when Maan was about to say something. They turned and saw her fuming in anger while Heer smirked seeing it. I doubt on your gender. Geet said walking closer while Maan and Prem were too shocked to hear her words. They looked at each other while Heer only smirked seeing their weird faces. Yahi karne laaye the kya hume then you could tell us that Geet and Heer it's not necessary that you both join us as we are going to romance together as we are gay's and the moment those words came out Heer laughed loud while Maan and Prem just glared at Geet. Maan walked closer covering the distance between him and Geet and said really and if I was a gay you would not have this belly Jaan. Maan said placing his hand on her 6 months pregnant belly and this is enough proof that we rock with our love making every time. Kyu, hain na Prem. Maan winked at Prem who was staring at Heer.


Prem loved to see the glow that was on Heer's face. It had been more than a year for their wedding and Prem would just keep on loving her for making up to so many years of pain. Heer was blessed to have Prem and now she was so happy that finally she was carrying their love in her womb just like Geet but she was just 2 months pregnant. Oye don't stare at her like tat.. pata chala ki you start romancing here only.. mere bechare baby kya sochega tat Prem chachu is romancing his chachi in front of him only..chi chi aisa nahi hain Geet said covering her belly with hers and Maan's hands looking at Prem.

Why not after all they should know na that they have to romance like this Prem answered back as he pulled Heer into him encircling his hands around her waist. Both the couples never backed out from showing their love in front of each other. It was like a ritual for them that if they don't show than they would be angry and start accusing saying that they are ashamed to love them. Waise Prem, wat was so important that you and Maan were discussing. Heer's sudden words alerted both Prem and Maan and the sudden change in their body language made Heer to understand wat they were speaking about. She looked at Geet who was lost in Maan and turned to see Prem. Its over Prem and remembering that every time is not good. Prem smiled pecking her lips as he faced his back to Maaneet and made Heer to face the sea I know and now m sure that Maan will never ever question on it again. Heer smiled as she placed her hands on Prem's but soon they were disturbed by Maan. We romance in front of each other but we don't kiss Prem and now I have learnt about this technique of yours. Sharam nahi aati na tumhe. Heer blushed trying to get out of Prem's grip but he held her tight making sure not to press her stomach. He looked at Maan and Geet and than in one swift move he turned Heer's face and kissed her hard in front of them smirking looking at Maan. ab bolo Prem said breaking the kiss while Heer hid herself in his arms trying to gain her breadth. Aur sharam ki baat kisi aur se karo not with me Maan Singh Khuranna. If I can make love to her in our bedroom I can kiss her in front of anyone.


Prem you have turned into a crazy love sick puppy after you returned from your coma. Geet said stopping the two from having another teasing session. Do you have a problem with it Geet or is it tat you are complaining indirectly about Maan to me. Maan narrowed his eyes looking at Prem who smirked at him oh so it's true that Maan stopped loving you after making your fatty. Geet ke babaji yeh theek nahi kiya aapne Geet ke saath.. poor my baby she is starving of love. chi chi Maan wats wrong with you.. Biwi pregnant hui nahi you have been trying to find someone else kya. Maan could sense Geets's anger the way she clutched his hands while Prem just smirked knowing that Geet's mood swings were at high. He would love to irritate Geet with his words and then Maan would bear her anger.

Prem it's enough Maan glared at Prem feeling Geet's nails piercing into his skin. Why would I Maan.. When you do everything why should I stop? But poor my baby Geet. Agar pata hota tat you would ditch her like this then I swear Maan I would not let her marry you. Prem added fuel to Geet's anger and smirked further saying oh yeah now I remember .. your secretary.. she is too hot man. Kabhi secretary kabhi biwi good going Maan.. good going... meri bechari moti Geet . Geet was now getting angry with his talks when she suddenly smirked looking at Heer. Main moti ab bani Prem par teri Biwi ko dekh, do mahine hue aur haathi ban gayi.. dekho zaara.. itne kilos badha juki hain yeh. Maan burst out hearing Geet and seeing Heer fuming now. Haan tumse jyada nahi Geet aur but before Heer could say anything else Maan swirled Geet into his arms and walked away leaving Prem and Heer Singhania chalo now you can kiss or say make love to your biwi here.. koi nahi hoga sab so juke honge yaha.

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I will kill tat Prem Geet hit Maan as he walked towards their room yelling on top of her voice. Jaan this is not our personal ship tat you can scream here Maan softly whispered on her face making her shiver with his hot breadth. Aur pregnancy ke time no bad thinking nahi tho baby par asar hoga Jaan. He smiled as he pointed towards the door of their room. Geet shook her head for a no as he reached near mujhe nahi jana.. I know you will make me sleep and will not love me.. mujhe nahi sona yaha.


Ok baba mat sona but atleast let me open the door na.. kya hain na I can't carry you for long. Geet narrowed her eyes as he continued without thinking about his words bahut bhari ho juki ho. And the moment he said he realized wat he did. He looked with puppy eyes at Geet who was fuming with anger. He smiled nodding for a no Jaan.


Don't Jaan me ok.. m fat ugly and haathi so don't Jaan me.. go and Jaan your sexy hot secretary. Maan smiled hearing her and asked her for the keys of the room. She turned her face hiding the keys while Maan stood carrying her. Jaan dekho right now I don't want to take you here so it's better you open the door or else I won't mind getting you naked under me right here. Geet still kept quite not opening the door and seeing her quite Maan had only one way. He raised her a little and turned her face smacking his own lips right on hers. She pulled her lips away only to feel the feet on the floor and get trapped between Maan and the door. I did not get you here to sleep as you say.

Neither to make love to me she said back looking at his eyes which were filled with pure lust and passion for her. She gasped as she felt her breadth hitch feeling his hand on her breast pressing them. He smirked seeing her closing her eyes while his one hand traveled downwards touching her core and cupping it with his hand making her open her eyes. Still wanna proof. She looked at him as he stared at her with a evil smirk I don't have any plan for letting you sleep anytime soon tonight Jaan.. aur rahi kal ki baat I know I can't over stress you but still I won't let you out of the bed as I would love to feel your nakedness with mine... after all two months starving should be satisfied with interest too.

Mujhe nahi karna.. I know you will not even touch me once we are in bed Geet said pouting her lips and no sooner did she do it they were attacked by Maan's and soon she felt herself being pushed inside the room slowly. She looked over and saw Maan smirking and leaning on the closed door now. You cheat she said trying to push Maan but he held her tighter pulling her closer making sure he does not hurt her tummy. Jaan he moaned making her look at him still kissing her I want to love you whole night. Geet blushed as she felt him touching his hardness to her. But trust me I want exhaust you either. bahut slow karenge and next she felt her Kurti being unzipped and thrown away as the cool air hit her now fragile body as he pulled her lacy bra uncovering her breast for his eyes. He slowly reached to her lower and untied her salwaar making it fall into puddle around her legs. She held his hands as they reached her panty line but withdrew them hearing him say I won't mind tearing them into pieces but trust me uske baad you will not get a chance to even touch me forget kiss and before she could even answer Maan presented him stake naked for her. She gulped seeing his huge member staring at her. Maan smirked and in one swift move carried her towards the bed where he showed her how his starvation was getting on his nerves.

After 3 months


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Maan punched Prem as he saw him laughing. Everyone was waiting outside the labour room and it was getting difficult for Maan to hear his Jaan screaming for him. Prem could not control himself seeing Maan pacing from one corner to another while everyone trying to calm him down. Just wait Prem your turn is soon coming Maan said seeing Prem not stopping making fun of him. Prem smirked answering him tere jeethna nahi hoga Maan. It looks like you are in labor and cant wait to get the baby out. Maan narrowed his eyes as he looked at Prem and before he could punch his nose he saw the Doctor coming out of the room. How is my Geet and our Baby?

Both are fine Mr. Khuranna. Maan smiled hearing it and tried entering inside when the doctor stopped him. Don't you want to know whether the baby is girl or boy. Maan smiled saying I know doctor it's a boy as my Geet wished to have a junior Maan for us and it will be so. Everyone smiled hearing him and the doctor confirmed about the baby boy. She stopped Maan from entering saying tat he could meet them once they are shifted into their room and before Maan could say a word Prem ran away towards the room tat was booked for Geet saying Khuranna main chala line pe first hone ke liye and I swear it will be me who will get to see the baby first. Maan ran after him trying to be first while everyone laughed at their play.

Geet looked irritated seeing her love and friend fighting at the door step and not letting anyone to come inside. Fifteen minutes passed she had been watching their fight. Maan.. Prem stop it. You both are scaring my baby with your fights. She yelled seeing them not stopping and instantly they stopped giving a weird look at Geet. Tu keh de ishe Geet being your hubby darling I will be the first one to see our baby or else none will be allowed.

Aur tu yeh bhi keh de ki Prem ka number pehle hain or else I wont let your hubby darling to see my nephew. Prem warned Geet giving a glare at Maan. chalo theek hain you either both see together or never see the baby. The two looked at Geet while she smirked seeing them yeah and I mean it.. ya do do second mein dono andar yaha nahi tho puri zindagi mere bache ko nahi dekhoge. Choice is yours and the moment her words reached their ears they made a run towards the cradle and stopped seeing the cute baby cuddled inside the blue towel. Maan could not blink his eyes as his tears dropped the moment his eyes fell on their baby. Prem just kept staring at the baby and instantly his words left his mouth Geet yeh tho bilkul Maan ki tarah deekh raha hain... do you remember the picture that aunty had shown us.. yeh tho bilkul Maan hi hain. Geet smiled hearing his words but her eyes glittered as she saw her Maan picking up their cute baby into his arms. She just kept staring at Maan while Prem clicked the first Baby-Dadda picture having the biggest smile on his face.

After 4 months

It was the same scene tat everyone had witnessed during Geet's time but instead of Maan it was Maan and Prem who were pacing the corridor outside the labor room. Maan was highly tensed as he remembered how Geet was in pain and in this year Maan had come very close to Heer or say Maan had seen a sister in her tat he never had and officially KM had become Heer's mayka as the Khuranna's did her bidai from their place. Geet who wass sitting with their cute little 4 months baby Armaan was trying hard to hide her smile seeing the two most important people in her life worrying so much. She could not stop her giggles and finally she had to see the angry fuming eyes of her husband and friend who said in unionism apni yeh hasi apne pocket mein rakh Geet, ek baar baby ko aane de I will show who is stronger here.

Kyu koi shaq hain kya Maan.. aur waise bhi main apna challenge jeet ke deekhungi after all its Mrs. GMSK and she never loses. Geet smirked while the Maan and Prem glared at her. Geet had challenged them tat she would be the first one to see the baby and like hers she was sure tat it would be a girl and she knew tat finally Prem's Pari would be back in his life. She shivered for few seconds as she remembered the day when Heer had a fall from the bed when she had just given birth to Armaan and everyone was tensed as Heer was hospitalized for days but everything was safe. She closed her eyes as a tear dropped down but when she opened her eyes she saw her Maan and Prem sitting in front her and smiling at her. Sab theek hua tha na after all it was our Heer kuch galat nahi ho saktha tha. Geet smiled as she heard Maan say those words. She truly admired how Maan had been too possessive about Heer just like he was for her. Since Maan had said tat Heer was his sister she had seen a different Maan in him. he would fight with Prem if even a tear drops out of Heer's eyes and Geet instead of feeling jealous she would admire and would be on Maan's side fighting with Heer.

Maan and Prem waited at the door step with Armaan in Prem's hand as Geet entered and looked at the pretty pink baby. She smiled seeing and called them inside carrying the baby girl in her arms. Heer smiled asking Prem to keep Armaan next to hers while Geet and Maan showered their love on the cute baby girl. I had told you na.. Prem tat Pari will be back and here she is.. your Pari is back. Prem smiled as he saw his baby sitting next to Heer. Geet walked with the baby and slowly placed it on the other side of Heer and she reached to pick Armaan who was trying to find his feed. She smiled seeing him getting impatient as she knew it was his time. Maan smiled as Geet asked him to take her back home and soon they left asking Prem to take care of Heer and Pari.

Epilogue


Dad I love her Armaan stern and rigid voice shook everyone present there. Maan just stared at his son who had recently joined KC and now he was declaring his love to his family. He smirked once everyone just gaped at Armaan and said So I was right Armaan. Armaan blushed for few seconds but soon he was ashamed as his dad told everyone how he had seen him kissing his love. Kyu nahi kiya tha kya.. Ush din, the day when you were supposed to join KC.. wah bte mere hi naak ki neeche meri hi Pari se romance karte rahe itne saal aur humne kuch pata bhi nahi chala. Pari hid herself into Maan's chest as he stood hugging her. She blushed as she could hear everyone speak something or the other upon hearing the truth tat she and Armaan were in love with each other.

Why did you hide it Ammy Prem questioned Armaan but he only got a smile in return. Chachu, I wanted to be someone first and it was mine and Pari's decision tat unless I get some success we wont reveal anything. Pyar tho bahut pehle se hua you can say since we were at high school but the depth and meaning of it we learnt from you and Dad.. we were scared tat it would be mere attraction sa we spent much of time together but with each passing second it only increased and then we never turned back and m sorry tat I kissed Pari without revealing anything. Armaan sweetly confessed everything while Pari just looked at him with pride and admiration. She would always look upon at Armaan for his love and care he had for everyone. He would be sometime strict to her and her brother and his twin sisters you were born on the same day after they turned 4 years old. He was the one who would make sure tat they all never crossed the line of freedom tat was given to them by their family.

Maan yeh tho gadbad hui na Prem said breaking everyone's silence. He winked at Maan saying how can we get them married as if we do than we wont be friends anymore and I don't want to lose you and Geet. Pari was almost on the verge to cry while Armaan was helpless to do anything. He just stood and after few seconds he spoke with his firm voice it will be your decision Chachu and if you want us not to marry than I wont and she accepts wat I say. He looked at Pari and walked away giving a smile hiding his pain. Geet and Heer called his from behind but he was gone leaving Pari all alone. They knew their son tat he was strong but they also knew how weak he was and he would cry all alone not wanting to show his weakness to anyone. Geet and Heer punched Prem right on his face for ruining their face.


Moron, jab time aaya tumne mere bacho ko rula diya. Heer I swear I will kill your husband one day when he was the one who was behind all of us to speak to Armaan about his and Pari's proposal for marriage since long aura b.. kamine har waqt mazak. Geet hit Prem once again while Heer gave her full permission to kill her husband you can Geet. Geet and Heer reached to Pari who was crying hugging Maan saying sorry for trying to break his and her Papa's friendship. Maan smiled as he knew tat for their 5 kids they were the world and they never needed anyone else for any celebrations. He parted Pari a bit and wiped her tears as she spoke in between her sobs dad.. m.. sorry.. we.. never..wanted..this..i promise..i will marry someone else but i.. cant see you and Papa away.. m sorry. Maan smiled kissing her forehead Na Pari why should you be sorry when we all wanted this but never asked for as we did not wanted to force you and Armaan for our sake. He cupped her face saying You know the day when you were born your Geet mom had declared tat she would not allow you to go away from us and she had said tat she officially declares you the future Mrs. Armaan Maan Singh Khuranna but we never wanted to force you and the day I saw you both I knew tat we never had to do anything as our Armaan and Pari were meant to be together and always near us and you know wat m proud of you too. Pari smiled as she heard her Maan Dad say so much. She blinked her eyes trying to confirm while Maan just smiled and hugged her tight.

Maan and Prem stood at one corner watching their two souls Pari and Armaan having a dance for the very first time as a couple. It was not long tat they had called for an engagement and officially announced about their wedding soon. Prem looked at Maan and he saw him staring at Geet leaving his eyes from their kids. She is truly happy Maan. Maan just shook his head saying and its all coz of yours and her Aitbaar. It won Prem her Aitbaar finally won and today I can truly say tat m saved coz of you and her nahi tho main kab ka thoot juka hota with nothing as mine to say. Prem knew wat he wanted to say and today he did not wanted to stop Maan as he knew tat they had come far from those bitter memories and now they were so small tat even the mention of it would not harm them. They both walked towards their respective wives and pulled them for a dance giving a company to their kids.


You know wat I love you Maan said pressing a soft kiss on Geet's forehead and she blushed like always. And I love you too. Maan smiled as he heard her. He would just keep on hearing it without blinking his eyes. He knew it was just three words but for him it was his lifeline unless he hears it from her he would not open his eyes. He pulled her closer hugging her tight saying Humara Aitbaar jeet gaya Jaan. Geet nodded as she heard him and truly she can say tat their Aitbaar won though at start it was not but now anyone who looked at them would envy with their happiness. Prem and Heer who stood were too dancing smiled seeing Geet and Maan. Prem had finally let his tears down after ages. Heer slowly rested her head on his chest whiel Prem kissed her hair saying my Geet and Pari at in the right hands Heer... and I know tat nothing can harm them when my Maan and Armaan is with them.. after all out Aitbaar is wat binding us together since long and it will bind us for the rest of lives.


The end.

Here I sign off from my Aitbaar. It was truly a emotional journey for me as I don't know tat it would be loved so much. It was just a small concept tat I had and I tried putting it down. Truly its hard to find a friend like Prem and tats wat I intended to do here. To portray love and friendship in such a way tat friendship would remain high even if they had their love with them.


I would request each and every reader of Aitbaar to please comment and like for the last time and share wat you feel after reading this. I know it was not a light story and trust me I can't even write anything rather then something tat deals with very high emotions.

Thank you for all your love and patience.

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Posted: 11 years ago
diii'
i realy liked this story
frnd like prem is difficult to find on d earth
frndship is most imp part of lyf like love
person widout anyone is incomplete widout both
coming to update will comment after reading
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Posted: 11 years ago

hi dear! Fab update! n awesum end! Superbly written

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fab dear
love it sooo much
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Posted: 11 years ago
even though it was very emotional ss, i enjoyed it. loved da love n friendship between geet, prem, heer n maan. loved prem to da core. da last part n da epi was awesome. u r da queen of emotions, u describe da pain n emotions superbly...u have da ability to makes us cry...hats off to u...will b waiting for ur nxt one...love u
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Posted: 11 years ago
Iam really sad that it ended but happy with the last part and epilogue..it was outstanding one..expect a lot more wonderful works from you in future too😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just superb
Prem really a gem
reindship & their family bonding too good
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful story n ending...
Here friendship of prem was exemplary...above d love I would prefer...it's his gift to maan n geet...aitbaar live or armaan...m gonna miss it
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was so so so sooo much beautiful diii
Loved the ending :D
Maaneet got their baby :D
In the starting prem n maan convo was superb
Thn the couples romance :)
Thn the babies birth
Lolzz maan n prems fight :P
Thn Armaan pari love :D
Everything just just just loved it :)
Will miss it yaar :(
It was really the most emotional ss
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear...
feeling sad...it ended too soon...
i will miss dis one...

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