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loving the qutation u wrote in the end ...

nice ud
Maan requesting geet to call him with his name and not mr.khurana
Geet suggest she will call him jr. Maan amused by this
Liked the way maneet are geting along with each other

Vry nice story...new concept..loved the bold geet
Pls add me in your pm list...

wow maan and geet coming closer to each other slow and steady wins the race

Originally posted by: flowing_river

Just started reading ur ff...
it's too different from other usual ffs...
I judt loved ur writing..concept. .everything. . 😊
pls add me to ur PM list and do pm me for next update... 😊

Originally posted by: jitupatole5

it was too nice, i think ab dhire dhire unke beech dosti ki shuruaat

hone lagi hai ,geet agar maam ko MAAN kehakaer bulayegi toh bahot

acchha lagega,aur woh bhi tab jab maan ke parents geet ko milane aayenge tab aur dev-meera ke saamane bhi. sabhi log iss sudden-change ko dekhakar bahot khush honge.maan ke father to pehelsehi

geet ko pasand karate hai,aur woh jarror geet ko apni bahu banane ke

baaremain sochenge,par maan-geet ki love story itni aasanise aage

nahi badhegi acchha toh tab hoga jab geet khud maan se pyar karane

lagegi.

this is just my suugetion if you like it. plz continue and update soon.

i realy love this story.

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Awesome Part Babbie 👏

Hayeee Loved how maaneet coming closer to each other.. waiting to see their love moments 😳

Geet step family ka kya bolu ..so cheap 😡

Well done yara 👏

Originally posted by: singh24

Priya..🤗

How r u..??

How is Choti..??

abhi bhi poori tarah teek nahi huyi hai aur uske saath mujhe bhi cough attack hogayi hai