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- Meredith Sapp


Prologue...


She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


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Part - 50




Maan was on the site looking everything ,, he was away from work but due to regular contact nothing went out of track. He finished his 2-3 meetings and went to construction place to watch the progress of work and felt satisfaction ,, he came back to his office and talked to manager ,,, it was lunch time .

He take out his phone to call Geet ,, he didn't ask about her from morning ,, she picked the call after few rings.


Maan: hi Geet, where r u office or at home?


Geet: at home ,, Kya hua?


Maan: nothing, bas esse hi pucha ,, have u got ur leave or not?


Geet: haan , 2days extend ho gai hai.


Maan: lunch kiya?


Geet: not now.


Maan: mei lunch ke liye ghar aa raha hu ,, tumhe kio prob to nahi?


Geet: OK, aa jao ,, prob kya honi hai ?


Maan: OK , wait for me and cut d call.


Geet smiled ,, called CS and told him that Mr Khurana was also coming for lunch ,, he nodded and went out.


Maan took some required files ,,, instructed manager and rush to come back home. He was very much happy thinking that he was going to spend rest of the day with Geet.


Last three four days all spend most of d time together which increase their understanding and trust for each other. Geet arranged this trip specially for Meera and Dev and got positive result which was visible on their faces. But there were some more things she wanted to know . Geet realised a big change in both d bros ,, now they were behaving very matured caring and responsible. She was confused about Maan there were not a single sign of pain losing his GF ,, he helped her in Walias case ,, showing his positivity in her every decision ,, he was very calm and compose ,, she was witnessing a diff Maan.


Maan was very happy and satisfied ,, he got lot of time to spent with Geet in this trip ,, he came to know many things about Geet and her nature ,, he realised that she has some issues with her father coz of 2nd marriage ,, she is spending a lonely life ,, away from family which pinched him a lot. She is a girl of golden heart ,, always think about others happiness but she herself was all alone ,, away from love and care ,, why? He wanted to know about her more and more ,, wanted to share her pain ,, wanted to give her happiness which she deserved. He was feeling a pull towards her but he knew he had a very bad impression on her.


Maan reached home and straight way went to Geet's room ,, she was laying on bed with closed eyes. He knocked at d door to gain her attention ,, she opened her eyes and gestured him to came inside ,, She got up and sat on bed resting her back ,, Maan came nearer d bed and asked ..


Maan: r u all right?


Geet: haan mai theek hu ,, tum jaldi kaise ? kam nahi kya office mei?


Maan: No , not like that ,, meetings thi wo attend ker li ,, kal ki meeting ke liye kuch blueprints study karne hai wo ghar se bhi ho jayange. Ku ,, mera aana accha nahi laga kya? Wapis chala jau?


Geet: aree nahi ,, maine esse hi pucha naraz ku ho rahe ho ,, mujhe bhook lagi hai ,, change karke aao jaldi fir baat karna.


Maan: mai naraz nahi hu ,,, mujhe laga tumhe mera aana accha nahi laga ,, he smiled and went out saying mai abhi change karke aaya.


Geet called CS and told him to bring d lunch in her bedroom.


Other side Meera inform Adi about her arrival and Geet's accident ,, Adi told her that he'll come there to meet Geet in evening .


Dev was busy to catch up d last 3-4 days work and in lunch hour he went to meet his Father in his office. Ranjeet asked about their trip and about Geet. Dev described everything excitedly and at last about Geet's accident . Ranjeet got worried listening this and said he'll come to meet her at night.


CS placed lunch in Geet's room ,, Maan came there and took a chair near Geet's bed ,, CS served both and went out to take other things. He was happy that today Geet was taking her meal properly. After few mnts call bell rang and CS attend the visitors ,, he brought them in living room ,, gave them water and came to Geet to inform her. He was not looking happy to see d visitors . He came near Geet and spoke in a hardly audible voice to her ,, Geet's expressions changed immediately ,, she looked at him and asked...


Geet: where r they now?


CS: in living room.


Geet: hmmm ,, give them tea/coffee ,, yahan mat aane dena,, OK.


CS nodded and went out and inform the guests to wait there ,,, ma'am is coming in few mnts.


Geet finished her lunch unwillingly she was looking disturbed ,, Maan was observing her and sensed something wrong . Geet got up from bed and said...

Geet: tum aaram se lunch karo ,, aur yahi rahana jab tak mai na aa jau ,,,OK,, bahar mat aana hmmm... Maan nodded looking at her ,, there were so many Q in his eyes ,,, she avoid his look and went outside.


Geet entered in living room ,,, there were two guys and a lady,, all were sipping their teas and talking to each other ,,, they looked at her and stopped at once ,,, Geet gave them a hard glair and took a seat and asked ...


Geet: yes , what brings u here? Why r u here without informing me?


All looked at her and a lady stood up and came near her saying ...


Lady: Hi Geet beta , how r u?


Geet: No formalities please ,, take ur seat ,, and come to d point why r u here? ( now she spoke in a little harsh tone)


The lady stopped there ,, smiled sheepishly and said ...


Lady: aree beta we were in Delhi from last 2days so decided to meet u too. Let me introduced u ,,, meet he is Mr Vikram Raheja ,, a businessman and Brij's partner. He and Brij r in export and import business .


Both d guys were looking at her and giving her their fake smiles. Geet looked at both of them from top to toe and said in a mocking way...


Geet: So what can i do? I don't have any interest in their business. I asked u why r u here?


Lady: why r u angry with me beta? I m your mom ,, family me to kahan suna chalta rahati hai ,,, we r ur family and worried about u ,,, hai na Brij ,, we all missed u. Ur Dad didn't get leave otherwise he too wanted to meet u but he send us ,, We and ur Dad choose this guy for u ,, he wanted to meet u so we brought him with us to meet u . She turned to that guy Vikram and spoke in a sugar coated tone ,, she is angry with me but she is a very sweet girl ,, i told u ,, u like her very much.


Now this drama went on her nerve she lost her temper. Geet stood up and shouted in full voice ...


Geet: stop this nonsense here ,,, How dare you!! Who gave u right to think about me? Get out from here right now.


Lady: This not d way to talk to ur elders ,, i m ur mom and


Geet cut her in middle and raised her index finger towards her and said...


Geet: Don't teach me how to talk , I know much better than you and remember one thing clearly ,,, ur nothing to me ,,, tumhara jo rishta hai wo tumhare pati se hai ,, mujhse nahi Samjhi ,,, apne is bte ka hath pakdo aur niklo yahan se ,, ye drama apne pati ke samne karna wo khush ho jaye ga ,, aur aaj ke baad mera naam bhi apni jaban per mat lana ,, tum log mere kuch nahi ho ,, I am Geet Singh D/O Late capt. Gareema Singh yaad rakhna. Now Get out from here. CS .. CS ... inhe bahar ka rasta dikhao ..


Brij who was quiet till now spoke angrily to Geet: tu samajhti kya hai apne aap ko ,, koi nahi hai tere aage- peeche jiske dum per tu hume akad dikha rahi hai ,,, wo tere budhe nana-nani chale gae aur mama bahar hai ,, tujh per taras kha rahe hai apna kahaker ,, warna koi nahi hai puchne wala tujhe. (he smirked at her cunningly)


Geet shouted in rage: Get lost ... Out ..


Relationship never dies a natural death...
They are murdered by Ego, Attitude and Ignorance. Unknown



Sorry for mistakes.


Part 51


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Are mona .. mai wahan wait ker rahi thi...tum yahan ho..😊
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Originally posted by: priya111111



hi babie raat ko nahi aaoongi 😭 doubts hai tho pm kardena kal subah dekhlooongi


Priya...😊

Very Beautiful siggi priya...😛

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nice...
geet is not alone...maan is wid her...forever😉..so no tension..
waiting for nxt.,..
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Originally posted by: priya111111

hi. babie choti ko abhi tak fever hai aur aapke jiju bhi hai


It's OK dear...
Take good care of Choti..
Lots of Love to her...
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Nice one...

I'm confused...Geet's father is with her right...

how come her step-mother tel that he had selected Vikram for Geet?

Do continue
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Originally posted by: mishtypiya

nice...
geet is not alone...maan is wid her...forever😉..so no tension..
waiting for nxt.,..


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