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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: priya111111

hi babie lakshu missed alot




hey priya how r u dear..?😊
we r missing u a lot...
waiting for u dear...🤗
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Hey Lily... 🤗
Kahan Bhraman ker rahi ho..??😊
tum green ho to bolti ku nahi..??😕
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😊 mila ...check my reply..
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(For banner credit goes to Lakshmi ❤️ Thanku so much dear 😊 )

- Meredith Sapp


Prologue...


She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


Hope u all like it. plzz do hit like button and leave ur comments









part- 44


Mussoorie trip...

Everything was set in d Safari. Geet was giving instructions to CS again and again. Maan, Meera and Dev were outside waiting for Geet. All settled in safari.. CS in front seat with driver, Maan and Get in middle and Dev and Meera in back side opposite to each other. Geet sat in middle coz she had to show her id card if required. Their luggage was on top and and eatables with CS and in back side.It was 6 in d morning and Geet wanted to cross Delhi ASAP because of Traffic.


Maan and Dev were going 1st time to Mussoorie by road. They were very excited, because they were going for outing after a long gap and now they had accepted that what had happened with them that was good for their present and future. Now they were away from all disgusting people. They were happy with this life.


Meera put on her headphone and lean back on d seat to sleep coz they got up very early to get ready. Dev too felt sleepy ,, he streached his legs and rested back to take some sleep. Maan was busy in Geet's iPad playing Angry Birds and stole quick look of Geet now and then. She too was resting closing her eyes Maan noticed that Geet was quiet since last night.

They crossed Delhi in one and half hour and entered in UP, They were moving little slow now coz of traffic. Maan switch off d iPad and slept too after some time. CS was talking to driver(chatter box).


After 2 hours they were on d bye pass and time is near 9 am CS thought to wake up Geet and others so that they could take a halt at some suitable place to take their BF and to fresh up themselves. Maan opened his eyes first on CS call and found a goodmorning wish from God ... Geet's head was on his shoulder ... she was holding his arm for support and sleeping peacefully. ... Beautiful !!! ... She was in a pink tank top and blue jeans looking cutie pie. He was cherishing this beautiful sight of his life unknown to Geet and all. CS called them again to wake up and this time Maan tapped on Geet's shoulder to wake her up. She opened her eyes in a jerk .. looked around and asked CS d location, ... he replied her and asked to stop somewhere ,,, Geet think and said to stop at M******** Resort to take some rest and for BF. She woke up Meera and Dev too. After 10 mnts they were at d resort. It was a beautiful resort ,,, they all took their BF... after half an hour rest they started again.


On the way they were chating on diff topics, mostly Meera,Dev and Maan were talking but Geet talked only on few topics.


They entered in UK(UttraKhand) and near Roorkee ,,, Geet said to driver to take d route towards Haridwar. All looked at her confussed ,,, why Haridwar? She read their Q eyes and said ...


Geet: Iss side aaye hai to thodi der yahan rook ker chaltey hai. Tum logon ko koi prob to nai? ,,, Holy place hai aur aap sabko accha lagega.


All agreed with this happily and after 45 mnts they entered in Beautiful Holy place Haridwar surrounded with hills. All were looking out and enjoying d nature. They were in Police Safari with VIP light so they directly went to main place Har Ki Podi. Geet instructed driver to stop in side way and went out because there was police for sequrity at the bridge, she went near them and showed them her ID Card ,,, they salute her and ready to take extra care for her ,,, she talked to them for some time and called CS there. She introduced him to them and came back.


Geet: Aaiye sab bahar aa jao ,, we have to take some dip in Ganga. ,,, take ur belongings for bath, OK..


She ordered to CS to take out d bag from car trunk ,,, all took their back bags and followed Geet. The place was very crowded. They came down from the bridge and stopped near Ganga Mandir ,,, There were Poddies to enter in Ganga to take bath ,,, lots of people were taking dips in d chilled water of Ganga. They were looking all around and enjoying d place very much ,,,


Meera: Hum bhi yahin nahayenge kya open mei?


Maan and Dev looked at her and laughed and she gave them an angry glair.


Geet: Meer waise to yahan sabhi naha rahey hai ... Dekho...


Meera: Hum change kahan karenge?


Geet: tention mat lo ,,, Hum ladies area mei jayenge ,, see at ur rightside. ( there was a big coverd area for women).


Geet told them to take bath 1st then they would go. They were settled their belongings at a place on mats which were provided by d Pandits of d Ghat.Maan and Dev were feeling shy to take bath infront of Geet and Meera and Geet sensed that.

She smiled and said: Don't feel shy, .. Yahan hazaron log ek sath naha rahe hai... Tum koi alag ho? Jao ,, Hum yahan samaan dekhtey hai...Jaldi karo fir hamey bhi jana hai. ,,, All three went down to river,,, in first step they got a shiver ,,,, W O O O... It's chilled ,,, and laughed and then entered slowly ...and took some dips ,,, now they were settled with cool water and enjoying.


WOW!!!! It's a Bliss ,,,,, Hai na bro? Dev said in a shivering tone.


Hmmm... really Amazing !!! I love it, ,, Feeling so cool and pure Maan replied in a deep and satishfied voice.


When Maan and Dev were bathing two pair of eyes were feasting this bful sight. Both d girls looked at each other and giggled.


They took some more quick dips and came out, and started to change. CS changed quickly and went from there for some work mentioned by Geet and Girls took their bags to go for bath, they were looking side way smilingly while Maan and Dev were changing. Geet and Meera came back after half an hour ,,, they were too still shivering coz of chilled water ,,, looking very sweet with their roughly tied hair in a bun ,,, their lips turned more pink ,,, they have a sandal tika at their forehead ,,, Awww.. so cute and adorable they r looking ,, both d guy drinking their seren beauty with a sweet smile. Then they all went inside d Ganga Mandir to pray ,,, Pujaari(A holy man) gave them Prasad and blessed them. They came to other side of bridge CS came to her and said that everything is ready ,,, they went near the Ghat and there a policeman was talking to a Pandit and instructing something in authortic way and he was nodding his head ,,, d policeman came to Geet and said...


Ma'am isse sab bata diya hai ,,, Geet said Thanku and told them to wait near their Safari then she turned towards Maan,Dev and Meera and said...


Geet: mujhe kuch pooja karni hai ,,, aap sab chahen to tab tak yahan iss Ghat ki market mei ghoom saktey hai.


Meera: ku hum pooja attend nahi ker saktey kya?


Geet: Nahi ye normal pooja nahi hai ,,,, Ye Mom ke liye hai ,, Aaj unka Sharad hai ,,, Tum log rukna chao to ruk bhi saktey ho ,,, It's hardly take half an hour.


Maan: nahi hum yahi wait karenge tum pooja karo ,,, he looked at her with concern.


All were feeling very sad on this reality that today was her Mom's Sharad. Though Meera knew about her Mom but this situation was very touchy. Geet went from there and they settled there on a wooden bench looking at that side where Geet was sitting with CS and Pujaari was instructing her d rituals and chanting Shalokas ,,, after pooja Geet ans CS distributed clothes and meals to beggers who were sitting there in lines. Geet gave many things to Pujaari and Dakshina and came near them and said ...


Geet: Chalo aab hum sab bhi lunch ker letey hai ,, aap sab ko kaafi wait karna pada accha hota ghoom letey ... time pass ho jata sabka.


All gave her a sad smile and followed her towards their Safari.Geet thanked the policsmen for their support ,,, she asked to CS and Driver ,,, do they want something from market? And they nodded in yes. She showed them d area where they could go for shopping ,,, and told them to take their lunch ,,, they left from there .


Geet: Let's go ,,, hum bhi lunch ker le aur aap sab bhi kuch shopping karna chao to ker saktey ho and Meera got excited with this shopping plan.


Meera: Good idea, mujhe bhi shopping karni hai yahan se ,, i want to purchase something for all.


Maan and Dev smiled at her and all went to a restaurant for lunch ,,, they spend some time in shopping ,,, Meera purchased many things for her family and colleagues. They came back at the bridge where CS and Driver were waiting for them. Geet told them to wait for 5 mnts for her and she went to Ghats side again and came back with 4-5 Brass Gangajalies in her hands. CS took them from her hand and said ... Mujhe ku nahi kaha, mai le aata. She smiled at him and said ...

Geet: Wo uss time pooja ke liye der ho rahi thi ,,, koi nahi ,,, ye sabke liye ek- ek hai ,,, Apne Ghar ke temple mei rakh dena ,,, Ye GangaJal hai ,,, Ghar mei hona accha hota hai.


All took their seats and they started their further journey. All were enjoying d sight scenes full of greenery and hills. They spended their time in talking, eating snacks, playing games on ipads and sleeping. After 2 hours they were on the way to Mussoorie and it was a zic-zac way full of sharp turns. Their One side was deep Valley and other side high hills.




Meera: WOW!!! Yaar , what a beautiful place!!


The drive was slow because of hight and d road was narrow. After one hour they entered in Mussoorie- The Queen of Hills.Geet called to a concern person and informed him of their arrival. CS was looking very happy when they entered there. He looked at Geet and asked ...


CS: Kaka ne Ghar ready ker diya? Wo wahin per milenge kya?


Geet: Haan ... kaha to hai ,,, nahi to ja ker dekh lenge ,,, Tum kis liye ho? And she smiled at him who was looking at her excited and nodded his head. After crossing a bussy market road they were in a side road and there were big houses and hotels. They stopped outside a big wooden door and a middle aged man was waiting for them. CS went out first and greeted him and touched his feet , after that Geet came out and went to him ,,, she too touched his feet, joined her hands and said ...


Geet: Namstey Kaka.


The man blessed her and hugged her sideway. Geet excused her and came to them and told them to come out. All were very curious ,,, they came out and greeted d man also.


Geet: Kaka ye sab mere friends hai, aapko bataya tha na ki kuch log mere sath honge.


Kaka: haan beta yaad hai ,,, sab kuch acchey se ready hai ,,, koi kami nahi hogi ,,, aao sab ander aao.



All entered d house and it was a quite big house of olden style ,,, They were in a big hall an it was very beautifully arranged ,,, all were looking all around ,,, CS was busy with driver bringing their luggages and Geet told them to sit there right then a lady came with d glasses of water in a tray and offered them. She greteed them all and went to Geet greeted her and talked about her well beings. She was looking very happy seeing Geet and CS there. Kaka instructed her to make coffee and snacks for all and she went inside with a smile.


Eventually all of the pieces will fall into place. Until then, laugh at the confusion, live for the moment, and know that everything happens for a reason. O Gbenga.

Sorry for mistakes.

Precap... some jutta-Chappals for me..😉😆


Part - 45


Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊 Mai update ki colour coding ker rahi hu
abhi aai... OK..😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😊 haan kiya... check reply..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats for new thread..
Geet is sweet..I think both girl fall for two brother..Maybe this place come together,..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first of all congrats for new thread
awesome update
Feeling sad for geet
Maan is so shy n naughty
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lakshu kahan gai..??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yahin hi

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