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giaa5678

@giaa5678

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Posted: 12 years ago

AJNABEE

prolouge

LATE AT NIGHT THEIR WAS KNOCK ON THEIR DOOR

an old man opened the door: ji

a young man was standing there: ji yaha bahut tezz barf gir rahi hai kya mai aapke ghar mai ek raat ke liye ruk sakta hu

old man: kyu nhi...apko toh gehri chot lagi hai

hum abhi dawa laate hai

young man: nhi rehne dijiye hume adat hai in zakhamo ki

old man:par

young man:(politely)humne kaha na

old man: waise tumhara naam kya hai

young man: MAAN MAAN SINGH KHURANA

old man: accha bete ab apko aur hume dono ko so jana chahiye hum apko aapka kamra dikhate hai (saying that the old man took maan to the room) app ab so jayiye allah aapko slamat rakhe

guys this my new story

plzz coment & share ur views

part 1-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/90959607

part 2

Edited by giaa5678 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice and interesting start...

waiting for actual story to start...

thanx for pm...

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Sampa Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was a pretty interesting prologue.

An injured Maan taking refuge in an old man's home.Maan said he's used to injuries,its snowing and d old man said "Alla Aapko salamat rakkhe".

Is Maan an Indian soldier???
By smhw he reached Kashmir or pakistan???
Can it be an inter-religion or beyond- boundaries love story???

Jst guessing!!!!!!

Can U pls Pm me whenever U update???

Wanna read further😊

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giaa5678

@giaa5678

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39
That was a pretty interesting prologue.

An injured Maan taking refuge in an old man's home.Maan said he's used to injuries,its snowing and d old man said "Alla Aapko salamat rakkhe".

Is Maan an Indian soldier???
By smhw he reached Kashmir or pakistan???
Can it be an inter-religion or beyond- boundaries love story???

Jst guessing!!!!!!

Can U pls Pm me whenever U update???

Wanna read further😊

YA U GUESSED RIGHT BUT HALF RIGHT

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prachi sinha

@geetsmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

nyc interesting prolouge dear, but wanted to ask one thing y u always write Lil saddy update try something happy one, wase its awesome looking forward it... Don't mind my words just gave suggestions

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priyanka

@doublecross

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey quite an interesting prologue!
congratulations for the new story!

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giaa5678

@giaa5678

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Posted: 12 years ago

AJNABEE

PART 10

MORNING

Old man: maan

maan: ha

old man: chaliye humare saath nashte ke liye

maan:ji ha mai taiyaar hokar aata hu

he freshen up & went out of the room

old man: ayiye baithiye ye humari beti GEET hai

(he pointed towards the beautiful girl seating beside himin salwar kameez only face uncovered )

geet: asalam alekum

maan:ji namaste

later

geet:abbu unka naam kya hai

old man:unhone apna naam maan singh khurana bataya

geet: woh hindu hai hum unhe zyaada din panah nhi de sakte

old man:sabse phele woh insaan hai

geet: hum samajte hai log nhi abbu

old man:thik unhe bula lao

she went to call him when he reached she saw he was trying to wear the shirt but was not able to wear as his body was injured

geet: suniye

maan: aa..aap yaha

geet: ha woh abbu apko bula rahe hai

maan:hum aate hai

geet turned back but felt sad seeing him struggling for wearing shirt

geet: hum aapki madat kare

he looked at her & having no option nodded yes

geet came beside him

geet: hum phele aapki patti kar dete hai (bandage)

maan: uski zarurat nhi hai

geet: zarurat kaise nhi hai aap chup rahiye she cribbed cutely

bahut dard ho raha hoga na she asked him as she was injured to which he smiled

maan:dard toh hota hai par adat hai hume in zakhmo ki aur waise bhi in kuch baato ki alag hi khushi hai ab chale

geet :hum

maan: waise ek baat bole aap bahut pyaari hai

she shyly lowered her eyes

precap:

what is there in old man's mind

plzz comment& like

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: giaa5678

YA U GUESSED RIGHT BUT HALF RIGHT

Chalo half toh sahi guess kiya😃

The second part is cute.Maan meeting Geet and getting flattered by the beauty as he praised her saying that she is "Pyaari"
Geet also blushed.

But on the other hand she is also worried that other Muslims wud obtect Maan staying there.

The shirt part was really cute.

Now eagerly waiting to know Geet's father's decision.

Thankx for d pm buddy😊

Edited by sweetsampa39 - 12 years ago